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           CHAPTER 1

IN JAIGARH MANSION, MUMBAI 

A party is on. Both Jaigarh and Devgarh families & other princess are there. There come the most eligible bachelor Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh of Jaigarh. He meets all the elders the princess go to him he ignores them as usual and goes ahead and meets Jainandini,Vijayinder and his sister Unnati hugs them. Then proceeds to his room but is stopped by Giriraj & Vasundhara

Giriraj asks "Uday where are you going" 

Uday answers "To my room"

Vasundhara asks "why? the party" 

Uday answers "I am tired."

Uday walks away

Nagme Hain, Shikwe Hain
Kisse Hain, Baatein Hain
Baatein Bhool Jaati Hain
Yaadein Yaad Aati Hain
Yeh Yaadein Kisi Dil-o-jaanam Ke
Chal Jaane Ke Baad Aati Hain
Yaadein, Yaadein, Yaadein

Uday is sitting on chair and looking at a photos & says 

 "Princess where are you, why have you left me alone.

Flashback Starts

Everyone in Devgarh palace.Mernalni,Brijraj,Komal, Menika, Giriraj, Vasundhara were worried.Vijay and Uday come.Vijay was 10 years old & Uday was 7 Years old.

Vijay asks "What happened Nanisahab?" 

Uday adds "Why is everyone worried?"

Vijay adds "Where is Manaya?" 

Uday adds "where is Princess?"

Menika & Vasundhara come to them 

Menika says "Manaya is not here"

Uday asks "Menika Aunty where did princess go?"

Komal silently leaves from there.The kids are confused.

Uday says "I will go look for princess she won't leave me alone & go." 

Vasundhara tries to stop him but Giriraj stops her from stopping Uday

Vijay asks "Mamusa where is Manaya & why is Mamisa crying?"

Mernalni says "Vijay beta Manaya has been kidnapped by one of the guards we are trying to locate her."

Uday says "What my princess is kidnapped."

Uday stars crying and goes to Manaya's room sitting on the bed.

Falshback Ends.

Creasing the picture "Princess it been 14 years you have left me forgotten me, Ajay Dada,Vijay Banna, J, Miro,Choti, Brijraj Uncle, Komal Aunty, Menika Aunty, Raghav Uncle, Dadisahab, Dad & Mom."

Unnati comes in his room & pleads

Unnati say Dada come down for the party 

Uday says "Choti don't fell like."

Unnati request "For me."

Uday goes with Unnati for the party.


IN RATHOREGARH ESTATE, PUNE

Party was in full swing everyone's dearest  Masanvi had got admission in Mumbai's best collage. Yuvrani Rajgarh Manasvi Kumari Raj Singh & Yuvraj of Rajgarh Yuvraj Aditya Raj Singh walk in together in party hand in hand. Manu was wearing a fishcut light blue gown.

Maansi says "Mansa you are looking good"

Manu says "Thanks it is Adi choice."

Aditya adding 

Aditya says "Maansi di let's go in before everyone comes here, Manu darling lets go."

They walk in. Bade Yuvraj of Rathoregarh Yuvraj Jagat Singh welcomes them

Jagat says "Dear you are looking gorgeous, Manu."

Manu says "Jaggi darling you look handsome, let's go in Jaggi."

Aditya, Manu, Jagat & Maansi walks in. Inside there is Prithvi & Pragya Prithvi Singh Rathore,Jagat's parents, Surya & Lakshmi Surya Bhan Singh Jagat's brother inlaw & sister. Jai & Neelam Jai Raj Singh were Aditya's parents, Rohan & Kanika Rohan Raj Singh were Aditya's brother and sister inlaw, Dharam & Saraswati Dharam Bhan Singh were Aditya's brother inlaw & sister. Aditya was Manu's best friend & brother Jagat was Aditya & Manu's Mamusa's son. Manu had exactly same relationship with Aditya's family as she would have with her family.

Manu says "Gadi Khamba Mamusa & Mamisa."

Prithvi & Pragya both look at Manu, Aditya & Jagat. All the three kids bent down to touch their feet.

Prithvi & Pragya together say "jeete rahe aap theeno"
Maansi says "Parnam Hokum" 

She is ignored. Surya & Lakshmi come there.
Jagat says "Ghadi Khambha Jijusahab."
 
Lakshmi says "Manu you look beautiful today 
Manu says  "Jija it is Adi not..."
Surya cuts in

Surya says "Angel it is not the dress but you who is looking beautiful so you don't give credit to my sala Adi dear Angel
Lakshmi & Surya hug her."

Aditya complainingly 

Aditya says "Jija, Bade Jijusa, Jaggi & I are also here please notice us also" 

Before they could countinue Jai & Neelam comes there.

Jai questions "Maansi, how are you, you are looking good, how is your job"

Maansi answers "Thanks Uncle, I am fine my job is good."
Saraswati says "Daatasahab you are missing something aren't you?"

Jai asks "Me what?"

Neelam hugs Manu

Dharam adds "Daatasaha are you not seeing Pari how beautiful is she looking."

Kanika says "Manu are you done hugging Masahab  I am waiting"

Manu hugging Rohan

Manu says "Bhabhi stop it, Daatabhia see bhabhi is irritating me tell her stop." 

Rohan says "Kanu stop it Manu is going in a few days for her college it is her day it is her farewell today."

Neelam says "Rohan is right."

Aditya says "You both are wrong because I & Jaggi are going with her to Mumbai till she is sattleted in any case Mansi Di will be busy."

Rohan says "every one knows that but you better come back soon, Jaggi it is better you bring him back soon."

Jaggi says "That would be difficult I will try."

Manu says "Daatabhia  I will send him back don't worry about it." 
Maansi says "Mansa have you booked the hostel to stay." Prithvi questions "Mansi, hostel, why?" 

Pragya says "Manu is going to stay in our there it is near her college, everything will be taken care.

Mansi says "But Mansa is staying in the hostel."

Saraswati says "Maansi she is staying at home not the hostel it is decided"

Rohan says "Mansi, she is my sister, she will get all the comfort she deserves in college she will only concentrate on studies."

Aditya says "absolutely Mansi Di."

IN JAIGARH ESTATE, MUMBAI 

Uday & Unnati  come down to the party. Seeing Uday coming back girls come to him. He take on Jainandini goes to the dance floor to dance. The other princess come to him to dance he does dance with him.

Princess Nalani Singh Rajput says "This is because of that lost bitch Manayata."

Uday slaps her across the face

Uday says you better mind your language she is Princess of Devgargh, my best friend and my fiancee Rajkumari MANAYATA KUMARI BRIJRAJ SINGH."

Uday calls the guards and tell them to throw them out


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CHAPTER 2.1


Manasvi was going to her class she meet Jainandini.

Manu says "Hi" 

Jainandini says "Hi"

Principal comes there

Principle says "Good morning Manasvi."

Looks at Jainandini

Principle says "Rajkumari Jainandini, we got a call Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh."

Looks at Manu

Principle adds "If you want anything you can come to me directly"

Manu says "Thakyou sir."

Jainandini says "Manasvi can we be friends."

Manu says "Yes Rajkumari Jainandini."

Jainandini says "It is just Jai or J not Rajkumari Jainandini"

The day goes classes finish.

Janandini & Manu proceed to go home. Unnati comes there.

Unnati adds "J are you coming?" 

Unnati looks at Manu

Unnati asks "who is this?"

Jainandini answers "Manasvi this is Jaigargh's Rajkumari Unnati."

Manu says "Rajkumari Unnati can we be friends?"

Unnati says "Yes we can but it is just Unaati or Unzs." 

Jainandini asks "We can drop you if you want."

A guard in disguise come there."

Guard says "This is for you." 

Jainandini superised

Jainandini says "First day in college Manu."

Unnati adds "That also red roses."


NEXT :  CHAPTER 2.2
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Hey
Nice story

Chapter 1
Loved the part where Uday leaves all the girls and goes to his siblings and Manyata's siblings
Feel sorry for Uday because he still loves Manyata
The flashback was beautifully written
Really felt bad for Uday and how upset he was when he found out that his princess was kidnapped

I feel extremely sad after reading how Uday still loves her and misses her and loved how he believes that she is alive.

Uday is so sweet, loved how he went to the party just for Unnati's sake

Masanvi is Manyata? (I hope I'm right)
Lol, I read about Adi and thought that she was dating him, thankfully you cleared my confusion
Love Jagat's and Masanvi's scene as well as Masanvi's and Adi's scene
Masanvi's family is so sweet, I just love them

Wow, loved the part where Uday slapped Princess Nalani and tells her off as well as kicks her out
Precap was amazing, can't wait to read more.

Promo was nice
Loved Unnati and Masanvi's scene but the roses sent by the guard kind of freaked me out

Chapter 2.1
Love Jai and Manyata's cute conversation as well as Unnati's and Manyata's
As said earlier, the guard in disguise who sent/gave her roses is freaky


Please continue soon
Please pm me
I see why it's called His Only Love
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Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey
Nice story

Chapter 1
Loved the part where Uday leaves all the girls and goes to his siblings and Manyata's siblings
Feel sorry for Uday because he still loves Manyata
The flashback was beautifully written
Really felt bad for Uday and how upset he was when he found out that his princess was kidnapped

I feel extremely sad after reading how Uday still loves her and misses her and loved how he believes that she is alive.

Uday is so sweet, loved how he went to the party just for Unnati's sake

Masanvi is Manyata? (I hope I'm right)
Lol, I read about Adi and thought that she was dating him, thankfully you cleared my confusion
Love Jagat's and Masanvi's scene as well as Masanvi's and Adi's scene
Masanvi's family is so sweet, I just love them

Wow, loved the part where Uday slapped Princess Nalani and tells her off as well as kicks her out
Precap was amazing, can't wait to read more.

Promo was nice
Loved Unnati and Masanvi's scene but the roses sent by the guard kind of freaked me out

Chapter 2.1
Love Jai and Manyata's cute conversation as well as Unnati's and Manyata's
As said earlier, the guard in disguise who sent/gave her roses is freaky


Please continue soon
Please pm me
I see why it's called His Only Love

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