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Posted: 10 years ago
Very good chapter and i think yes manu will forgive surya
Sorry for replying this late i was busy with college work
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Very good chapter

THANKYOU

i think yes manu will forgive surya

SHE WILL
Sorry for replying this late i was busy with college work

IT ABSOLUTELY FINE


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PREVIOUS: CHAPTER 13.1

CHAPTER 13.2

Dharam says "PARI"

Aditya says "Jijusa are you hallucinating."

Everyone looks at door Manu is there. Uday is happy. Vijay, Jainandini, Unnati & Uday move aside. Dharam goes to Manu.

Dharam says "Pari where did you go we all were tired."

Manu says "Jijusa give me way let me go to my room."

She walks towards the stairs but Dharam holds her arm to stop her.

Dharam says "Pari, please listen to me, please don't be so angry with YOUR BHAISA, look at YOUR BHAISA, please don't do this YOUR BHAISA, he will die if his PARI ignores him so much."

Manu immediately hugs him tightly. Dharam adding.

Dharam says "Pari I AM SORRY."

Manu pushes him away with fake anger

Manu say "Frist you hurt me so bad & now you talking about hurting yourself BHAISA how could you."

Surya says "Angel we all were worried where had you gone."

Jagat adding on

Jagat says "We all looked everywhere for where were you."

Luv, Arjun & Ashwariya say together "we all are worried about you."

Khushi asking

Khushi say "where were you."

Kanika asking

Kanika says "Manaya are you fine?"

Manu goes to hugs Kanika whispering

Manu says "Malli Bhabhi over heard Sher & your darlings sister told you not that they know or Adi, Momsa & Mamisa have realised yet."

Kanika says "And you as usual caught us."

Manu look at Rohan adding

Manu says "Dada keep that back you dear hurt yourself if you hurt yourself I will never talk to you."

Rohan says "You are in any case not talking to me Manaya, you ignoring me."

Manu hugs Rohan

Manu says "Dada I am talking to you, you are the one who is thinking wrong Dada."

Rohan says "Manaya you still angry, I know what happened was wrong things have gone bad to worse I AM SORRY I TAKE RESPONSIBILITY OF IT I DIDN'T DO WHAT WAS NECESSARY WHEN IT WAS NEED."

Rohan sobbing adding

Rohan says "punish me if you want please don't ignore me don't leave me & go YOUR DAATABHAI WILL DIE."

Manu fake anger

Manu says "Yuvraj Rohan Raj Singh how dear you TALK ABOUT MY DAATABHAI'S DEATH."
Manu playfully Rohan him."

Rohan hugs her tightly

Rohan says "I thought I lost you forever."
Manu say "Daatabhai you can't loose me I will never leave never, stop crying Daatabhai I can't see you cry."

Manu smiles at Kanika adding on

Manu says "other wise Bhabhima will say they just keep crying."

Kanika pulls Manu's ear. Manu shouting in pain

Kanika says "Ahh!"

Rohan says "Kanu stop it."

Rohan, Kanika & Aditya hug Manu.

Laxshmi says "Manu you still angry with Uday."

Rohan & Kanika say together "Jija for the day you have enough social service if you still care for outsiders then just shut up."

Dharam says "I agree with Rohan & Kanu, Jija Bhabhi."

Saraswati says "Dharam, Rohan & Kanu but what ever we told them was not secret."

Dharam says "Saraswati still you are saying this after everything, if you think what happened was right then get lost."

Manu says "Bhaisa let it be Adi, Daatabhai, Bhabhima & you are with me, what more do I need, I have my brothers with me."

Surya say "Angel Laxshmi, Saraswati, Jaggi & I also love you a lot stop behaving like we don't exist."

Manu asking

Manu says "Who said you don't exists SURYA JIJUSAHAB,"

Saraswati say "Manu it was me & Jija why are you hurting Jiijusahab, like Dharam he also love you a lot."

Manu asking

Manu says "What did I do now SARASWATI JIJIYA & DAATABHAI also call him JIJU SAHAB."

Luv & Arjun says together "We are sorry we should have have stopped them, if Khush or Ree were they would have stopped it the situation wouldn't have worsen to this degree."

Luv continuing

Luv says "at least I could have both of them my bhabhis."

Ashwariya adding

Ashwariya says "Dada is right."

Manu hugging Arjun, Luv & Ashwariya
Manu says "Luv darling, Ash dear, Aru darling it is fine."
Khushi looking at Aditya

Khushi say "I AM SORRY MANU."

Manu hugs Khushi

Manu says "It's fine Khushi, don't... "

Aditya cutting in

Aditya says "MANAYA ALWAYS FORGIVES YOU RAJKUMARI KHUSHI RAI SINGH I WILL NEVER FORGET OR FORGIVE YOU EVER SO STOP EXPECTING,"

Jagat says "MANU I AM SORRY FORGIVE ME I SHOULD HAVE STOPPED JIJA & JIJIYA."

Manu says "It is fine Jaggi."

Surya says "Angel will you not forgive YOUR BADE BHAISA."

Manu says "BADE BHAISA' now you remember that how convenient SURYA JIJUSAHAB. Jaggi didn't do he was supposed to but you are elder & I presume not as stuck up & insecure in life as him WHY DIDN'T YOU STOP YOUR WIFE & YOUR SISTER IN LAW EVEN ONCE, you are the elderest here SURYA JIJUSAHAB."

Surya says "I AM SORRY I SHOULD HAVE TAKEN THE SITUATION IN MY HANDS & STOPPED BOTH LAXSHMI & SARASWATI, BUT ANGEL ... "

Manu say "BUT what...THIS IS NOT YOUR FAMILY I AM NOT YOUR SISTER...THEN WHY SHOULD I CALL YOU MY BROTHERS... IT'S THAT WHAT YOU THINK."

Surya says "ANGEL don't say that I love you... YOU'RE MY SISTER."

Surya walks towards Manu, Dharam coming in between.

Dharam says "Surya Dada please stop don't hurt her anymore."

Saraswati says "Dharam stop this now BADE JIJUSAHAB didn't mean to hurt her, she is overreacting."

Looking at Manu. Saraswati adding

Saraswati says "Manu why are you blaming Bade Jijusahab it was Jija & me not him."
Manu looking at Laxshmi, Surya & Jagat
Manu says "same way Jagat wasn't responsible for anything...why???? because he not my own brother like BHAISA, DAATABHAI, ADI & SHER, WHY AM I RIGHT SARASWATI JIJIYA."

Saraswati says "I didn't mean that Manu."

Laxshmi hugs Manu

Manu says "Manu it's not that Surya, Jaggi & me do care for you & love you."

Manu says "Laxshmi Jija still you wouldn't apologies but just justify so you have chosen YUVRAJ UDAY VEER SINGH over ME haven't you that's why you justifying yourself just like Surya Jijusahab & Jagat have also done."

Laxshmi says "Manu it's not that I was nither choosing UDAY over you nor am justifying myself Manu... I AM SORRY I WAS NOT CHOOSING UDAY OVER YOU... I JUST DIDN'T WANT THINGS BACK TO BEING BAD TO EACH."

Looking at Aditya continuing

Laxshmi says "IT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH HOW HE FELLS FOR YOU & YES I KNOW YOU KNOW ABOUT IT."

Manu smiling & hugs Laxshmi

Manu says "Jija how do you know that."

Saraswati says "Manu I AM SORRY I SHOULD HAVE THOUGHT BEFORE I TOLD THEM EVERYTHING."

Manu smiling & hugs Saraswati
Manu says "JIJIYA it fine it's no secret it just that the situation at the moment not usual & you know it don't you."

Saraswati says "ADI CAN YOU EVERY KEEP ANYTHING TO YOURSELF."

Aditya says "WHY should I, MANAYA is MY SISTER."

Looking at Manu Aditya countinuing
Aditya says "WE DON'T KEEP SECRETS FROM EACH."

Manu hugs Surya

Manu says "BADE JIJUSAHAB stop crying everything is fine ."

looking at Jai smiles. Manu adding

Manu says "DADSA you thought I left for ever I am so sorry YOU HAVE GONE OLD ALREADY YOU HAVE FORGOTTEN I NEVER GOING TO LEAVE MY DAATABHAI ALONE only DEATH can separate me from Daatabhai."

Jai hugs Manu. Looking at Prithvi she continuing

Prithvi says "Mamasa where is Mamisa & Momsa."

Prithvi smile replying

Prithvi says "They had gone to look for you."
Vijay, Jainandini, Unnati & Uday come there.
Jainandini says "Manu Jiji where had you gone."

Manu hugs Jainandini

Manu says "I was all right J, don't worry I am absolutely fine."

Unnati says "But Manu Jiji everyone was worried."

Jagat says "You all don't need to care SHE HAS HER FAMILY HERE."

Manu hugs Unnati

Manu says "Jagat just chill bro."

Jagat says "Manu, this all is because of them."

Manu asking

Manu says "Who?"

Jagat says "Rajkumari Unnati & Rajkumari Jainandini Brijraj Singh

Manu says "Jagat chill if someone is responsible for whatever happened is YUVRAJ UDAY VEER SINGH he is the one who responsible for not J & Unzs."

Aditya say "Dada by Jijiya & Jija telling them MANU IS ADOPTED & YOU TELLING THEM ABOUT THE ORPHANAGE they are presuming SHE IS MANAYATA."

Rohan & Dharam

They say "agreed she scared of dark so was MANAYATA but doesn't mean she is MANAYATA."

Rohan possessively hold on to Manu. Manu understanding Rohan's fear

Manu says "YUVRAJ UDAY VEER SINGH a few documents don't change reality THIS IS MY FAMILY & WILL ALWAYS BE irrespective of everything, you being a business man you should know existence of documents doesn't change anything & documents can be easily manipulated."

Manu looking at Uday continuing

Manu says "you dear blame anyone for removing MY PAST RECORDS."

Kanika says "Manu it not Uday but Vijay who went so don't blame Uday for it."

Manu says "Stop protecting him... He has gone there before."

Looking at Uday

Manu says "Haven't you."

Dharam asking

Dharam says "When"

Manu replying
Manu says "while coming back from the mall."

Kanika says "he might gone just to look for Manayata because he didn't know but Manu after knowing everything from us..."

Manu cutting in

Manu says "Bhabhima we are done everything is fine let's just forget it."

Jagat says "Why...when Jija chose to protect Uday you had a problem WHICH WASN'T WRONG BUT YOU MADE IT LOOK LIKE A THE BIGGEST CRIME, now you are covering up for some one."

Manu walks towards Vijayinder. Looking at Jagat.

Manu says "Daatabhai after you told them every thing Vijay Banna thought I might be MANAYATA so he went & checked in orphanage where I was once."

Aditya adding

Aditya says "Vijay Banna didn't find anything how could he there is anything."

Vijayinder says "I understand Dada why it was done but I just thought Manu might be MANAYATA she is anyways my sister DAD & I WOULD BE HAPPY."

Manu hugs Vijayinder. Manu adding

Manu says "Vijay Banna as you just said I am you sister...I would like to say A BROTHER TO BE A BROTHER DOESN'T TAKE BLOOD OR EVEN PROFF IT JUST TAKES INTENT you are my brother & part of family just like Jagat."

Looking up for Jagat. Manu continuing
Manu says "covering up for family isn't wrong I still didn't do what Jija did, Daatabhai I am going out for walk anyways Momsa & Mamisa are not here I will catch them on the way."
Prithvi says "I am coming with you & so is Adi
Dharam, Rohan & Kanika says together "I am also coming with you."

Manu says "Okay Mamasa, Bhaisa, Daatabhai & Bhabhima."

Prithvi says "Uday Beta, Vijay Beta, Jainandini Beta & Unzs Beti you guys should go & rest thanks for help."

Vijayinder smiles adding

Vijayinder says "Bade Kakasa you no need to thank us as Manu just said we family don't make us fell like outsiders, family doesn't need to thanked."

Looking at Prithvi & Jai. Manu says continuing

Manu says "If Dad & Daatabhai would been here & done this would you have thank them."

Jai hugs Vijayinder

Jai says "Vijo, Daatabhai didn't mean to hurt you. Ajo & you are same for us."

Rohan says "Vijay go rest a lot has been done today we all will meet in morning."

Manu says "Vijay Banna you hard Daatabhai so better go & rest."

Vijayinder say "Everyone calls me Vijo as you can see."

Looks at Aditya adding

Vijayinder says "so does Adi, don't you Adi."

Aditya say "Yes Vijay Banna."

Vijayinder says "I would like it if you also call me Vijo, Manu."

Manu says "No, I prefer Vijay Banna'."

Vijayinder, Jainandini, Unnati & Uday go to their room


Edited by JADEKKD - 9 years ago
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DEAR READERS,

NEXT POST WILL BE AFTER

6 COMMENTS...

OR

7 LIKES...

ONLY AFTER ONE OF THE CONDITIONS ARE SATISFIED...

THAT I WILL UPDATE...

PROMO CH 13.2...
Edited by JADEKKD - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: JADEKKD


DEAR READERS,

NEXT POST WILL BE AFTER

6 COMMENTS...

OR

7 LIKES...

ONLY AFTER ATLEST ONE OF THE CONDITIONS ARE SATISFIED

THAT I WILL UPDATE...

PROMO CH 13.2...


THE COUNT START NOW

NEED 6 COMMENT

OR

NEED 7 LIKES


Edited by JADEKKD - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am the first.. yes yes I am the first 😆
Amazing chapter 👍🏼
I really like your way of writing... 😊
continue soon...
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Originally posted by: simi.k.


I am the first.. yes yes I am the first 😆


as always you are the first 👏


Amazing chapter 👍🏼


THANKYOU😃

I really like your way of writing... 😊

THANKYOU 😊

continue soon...

I WILL UPDATE AFTER 6 COMMENTS OR 7 LIKES WHICH EVER IS FRIST


THANKYOU FOR FEEDBACK

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Originally posted by: JADEKKD


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NEED 6 COMMENT

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