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Originally posted by: ekra101

it's tough bt if manyata has some special sign like serial, her family will believe. and uday hai na, he'll prove her. i've complete faith on him


ITS NOT HIS FAMILY WHICH HAS TO BELIEVE HIM BUT HER FAMILY IE RAJGARGH & RATHOREGARH...UDAY WILL PROVE IT TO THEM
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PREVIOUS : CHAPTER 12.3


CHAPTER 13.1

In the sitting room Dharam, Rohan & Surya decide to go to talk to Manu by then Naushera calls Neelam, tell her & Pragya everything to have their support in the plan. Dharam, Rohan & Surya go up to Manu's room & realise that she is not there they worried come back down. Pragya acting like she doesn't know anything

Pragya asking

Pragya says "what happened Surya"

Surya informs her

Surya say "Manu being angry with Laxshmi"

Pragya with fake shock & anger

Pragya says "Laxshmi how could you not
realise Manu will be hurt."

Neelam asking

Neelam say "where is Manu I will talk to her she will understand."

Looking at Rohan & Dharam adding

Neelam say "there something else."

Dharam says "Masahab actually that not it, she is not home."

Prithvi & Jai come there.

Prithvi asking "what happened why Manu left."

Rohan tells them everything.

Neelam says "how could you all do this, how bad she would have felt."

Aditya walks in from outside. Dharam asking
Dharam says "Adi where is Pari."

Aditya with fake worry asking

Aditya say "why Jijusa isn't Manaya is in her room?"

Surya replying
Surya says "No Adi, Angel has gone some where."

Aditya says "That was expected what ever you all did she was very hurt."

Rohan asking

Rohan says "Weren't you with Manaya"

Aditya replying

Aditya says "I was then I went outside."

Surya informing

Surya says "She is not in Bhan Mansion'."

Dharam adding "Nither in the orphanage Pari had gone there but not there now."

Jagat adding

Jagat says "I just checked the outhouse she not there either."

Luv, Khushi & Ashwariya worried

They say together "Nither at home we just came from there."

Arjun adding

Arjun says "Nor my place"

Jai asking

Jai says "Adi where can she go."

Aditya answering

Aditya says "She wanted be alone so I let her be."

Neelam calls Aditya, he walks towards Vijay, Jainandini, Unnati , Uday, Neelam & Pragya.

Aditya asking

Aditya says "Mom you called what's wrong?"

Pragya asking

Pragya says "Adi are you fine?"

Vijay, Jainandini, Unnati & Uday were shocked with Pragya's coolness.

Jainandini asking

Jainandini says "Badi Kakisa are you not concerned about Manu Jiji she left the house."

Jagat is behind Aditya he hears Jainandini gets even more angry & irritated

Jagat says "RAJKUMARI JAINANDINI BRIJRAJ SINGH YOU HAVE NO BUSINESS TO QUESTION MOM HER BEING CONCERNED ABOUT MANU OR NOT."

Aditya coolly

Aditya says "Jaggi, J is just asking, stop getting hyper about it, just chill bro

Luv confused

Luv says "Adi how can you be so cool."

Aditya says "Because I am cool you see."
Khushi says "but Adi, Manu has left us & gone, how can you be so cool about it."

Aditya angrily

Aditya says "Rajkumari Khushi Rai Singh stop showing fake concern this all is your mistake."

Luv protectively

Luv says "Adi, Khushi was forgiven for it"

Aditya asking

Aditya says "By"

Ashwariya replying

Ashwariya says "Everyone"

Aditya says "Not me Ashwariya"

Arjun asking

Arjun say "Adi why are you angry with Ash?"

Aditya replying

Aditya says "Look like only your girlfriend has a right to be angry Arjun."

Luv says "No it's not like that Ash & Khushi care for Manu & so do I."

Aditya say "Hear that Mom YUVRAJ LUV RAI SINGH CARES FOR MANAYA the man who needs a third person to tell him what his own sister's prospective, a brother how need his other brother to stand up for his sister & a yuvraj who need his younger siblings & girlfriend to convince to make his decisions you see Mamisa he is even worse than Jaggi
Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya & Arjun are shocked with what Aditya's said as it is true."

Ashwariya says "Adi you are not right stop getting angry on Dada."

Aditya says "Obviously I am wrong when her own brother didn't care enough why would yours."

Jagat asking

Jagat says "What do you mean."

Aditya replying

Aditya says "I know when you came there me & Manaya were there through out & so were you all but you Jaggi didn't have the decency & enough courage to stop Jijiya."

Pragya with fake shock asking

Pragya says "Jaggi how could you"

Jagat replying

Jagat says "Mom it's not like that."

Aditya asking

Aditya says "Yuvraj Jagat Singh Rathore why didn't you stop Jijiya you know she gets emotional very easily"

Looking at Khushi adding

Aditya says "BEST FRIEND isn't it why couldn't you."

Looking at Ashwariya adding

Aditya says "you have courage of getting angry BUT CAN'T YOU STOP YOUR OWN BHABHI

Looking at Luv & Arjun continuing

Aditya says "why couldn't you two do any thing or is it one needs his brother & girlfriend & other needs his sister SEE THIS MOMSA, MAMISA"

Neelam & Pragya asking

They say together "WHAT DID THEY ASK."

Jagat, Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya & Arjun replying
They say "About Maansi."

Aditya says "Exactly, where did Manaya being adopted come in place, the only answer needed was was that MAANSI WAS JIJIYA & DADA DAI'S DAUGHTER OR JUST DAD'S DAI'S GRAND DAUGHTER."

Jagat says "I know what happened was wrong but they had no business to ask MANU IS MY SISTER AS SIMPLE AS THAT."

Aditya says "Thats why you were not there with her & making J shop & now for your mistake you blaming her when she didn't do any thing."
Neelam & Pragya say together "Jaggi apologise to her now."

Jagat says "Mom I will not"

Pragya with angrily asking

Pragya says. "Why?"

Neelam angrily adding

Neelam says "Jaggi behave yourself"

Jagat say "Buasa behave... seriously because of them I lost my sister I LOST MANU ONLY BECAUSE OF THEM."

Aditya looks at Jagat

Aditya says "Jagat is that what you think."

Vijayinder irritated asking adds

Vijayinder says "if one of your friends fainted wouldn't you have told their family."

Aditya ignoring

Aditya says "Jagat you are not thinking right... I don't know what they did nor does Manaya...she is your sister why did you not stop Jija or Jijiya answer that."

Jagat replying

Jagat say "I did Adi, I asked Jija why did she hurt Manu."

Aditya cuts in asking

Aditya says "why did she hurt Manaya... That stopping or just showing your insecurity."

Jagat says "Adi that not right I asked Jijiya also why did she tell Rajkumari Jainandini Brijraj Singh."

Luv, Ashwariya & Arjun add with anger

They say "Rajkumari Unnati Kumari Giriraj Singh."

Khushi adding

Khushi say "Rajkumar Vijayinder Pratap Singh"

Aditya smile adding

Aditya says "Shera was absolutely right you all are no different from Laxshmi Jija & Saraswati Jijiya."

Looking at Luv, Ashwariya & Khushi adds

Aditya says "how easy is it for you blame some else that also coincidentally Vijay Bhai is your cousin sister's devar just like Jaggi & me

Looking at Arjun adds

Aditya says "Unzs is your cousin sister"

Looking at Jagat.

Aditya say "Jagat till I know, it was Uday who told Dada & again Uday who asked about Maansi why are you angry with J when she did nothing."

Jagat ignore him. Aditya countinuing

Aditya says "isn't it easy to blame some one for not being mentally strong enough bare the blame for your mistakes."

Looking at Neelam adding

Aditya says "this is Manaya's brother."

Looking at Pragya adding

Aditya says "I regret that he is my brother."
if DADA & JIJUSA ARE GUILTY & ACCEPT WHAT THEY DID FOR WHAT HAPPENED THE MOST RESPONSIBLE IS ONLY, MAMISA IS YOUR SON YUVRAJ JAGAT SINGH RATHORE NOT RESPONSIBLE ALSO EQUALLY."

Pragya & Neelam say together "Adi you are right"

Unnati says "Aditya Dada I understand what ever happened was due to Dada but I still will ask why are you angry with Khushi when Manu Jiji...

Khushi irrited cutting in

Khushi says "RAJKUMARI UNNATI GIRIRAJ SINGH MIND YOU OWN BUSINESS DON'T INTERFERE BETWEEN MANU, ADI & ME."

Aditya says "RAJKUMARI KHUSHI RAI SINGH, UNNATI ASKED ME NOT YOU SO BUTT OUT

Jagat, Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya & Arjun were shocked. Aditya continuing

Aditya says Unnati the difference between J & RAJKUMARI KHUSHI is very small RAJKUMARI KHUSHI DID WHAT SHE DID KNOWINGLY, FORCEFULLY & PURPOSELY J didn't know & I personally don't forgive those who purposely hurt Manaya

Looking at Jainandini. Aditya continuing

Aditya says "Even if it is Jaggi."

Looking at Jagat continuing

Aditya says "or even if it is me."

Vijay, Jainandini, Unnati & Uday were shocked. Looking at Jagat, Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya & Arjun countinuing

Aditya says "You know what happened due to what Laxshmi Jija & Saraswati Jijiya."

Looking at Vijay Aditya continuing

Aditya says "Vijay Bhai went to orphanage to find about about Manaya."

Jagat angrily

Jagat says "SHE IS MY SISTER MANU NOT MANAYATA."

Uday says "But she is adopted"

Jagat says "ADOPTED OR NOT SHE IS MY SISTER MANASVI RAJ SINGH"

Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya & Arjun say together "SHE IS YUVRANI MANASVI KUMARI."

Jagat, Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya & Arjun together together looking at Vijay

They say "YOU RAJKUMAR VIJAYINDER PRATAP SINGH

Looking at Jainandini they add

They say "RAJKUMARI JAINANDINI BRIJRAJ SINGH"

Looking at Unnati continuing

They say "RAJKUMARI UNNATI GIRIRAJ SINGH JUST SHUT UP."

Aditya laughing adds

Aditya says "It's superising that how easy it is for you all to ignore the situation & also that the only person responsible for this is UDAY' & not Vijay Bhai, J & Unnati."

Looking at Jagat continuing

Aditya says "a man comes up to all says I like your sister & you give him everything without caring how Manaya will feel this is you DO EVEN KNOW HOW MANAYA FEELS YUVRAJ JAGAT SINGH RATHORE & YOU CALL YOURSELF A CARING BROTHER SORRY BUT YOU ARE JUST AN INSECURE & STUCK UP PERSON even Sher, Khush & Pano are better in understanding her & not only that."
Looking at Khushi adding

Aditya says " Choti & Ree are also better then both of you Jaggi & Rajkumari Khushi Rai Singh

Vijayinder asking

Vijayinder says "If that's the case Adi why did you remove Manu's past records for the orphanage."

Luv & Arjun says together "Adi you were taking their sides now see."

Pragya asking

Pragya says "Who told this."

Vijayinder replying
Vijayinder says some one there, Badi Kakisa I know there must be a reason but wasn't Adi to young to decide."

Neelam asking

Neelam says "How many people did you ask."

Vijayinder replying
Vijayinder says "one...but how does it matter..."
Pragya say "Vijay Beta there every one will say different names it depends on who you ask."

Neelam adding

Neelam says "Ask the 80 year sister there she will say Maasahab name."

Looking at Vijayinder. Neelam asking

Neelam say "was she too young & immature to decide."

Uday asking

Uday says "But if her family came to claim her & blamed you for removing proof then."

Jagat with anger

Jagat says "FAMILY... YUVRAJ UDAY VEER SINGH those parents who didn't care enough when they daughter was lost or."

Pragya, Neelam & Aditya smile with disgust Jagat continuing

Jagat says "those brothers who couldn't take care of her, keep 5 year old safe."

Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya & Arjun say together "seriously you all wanted us to wait for & look for them."

Aditya adding

Aditya says "Let Manaya suffer bad memories because of those stupid, spineless, moral less & emotionally less people."

Jainandini starts to say something Vijay understanding the situation holds her back & Uday with look stop Unnati. Jagat notice Vijay stopping Jainandini. Jagat irrited looking at Jainandini Jagat says "so again this brainless & immature girl has to say something."

Looking at Vijayinder adding

Jagat says "what ever you think or say RAJKUMAR VIJAYINDER PRATAP SINGH MANU IS MY SISTER YUVRANI MANASAVI KUMARI & NOT YOUR SISTER MANAYATA KUMARI BRIJRAJ SINGH."

Aditya says "So there you all go you all heard JAGGI."

Looking at Jagat adding

Aditya say "Jaggi, Dada needs you more then you are needed here how about you go help Dada."

Kanika come there Kanika asking

Kanika says "Adi are you fine."

Aditya hugs her. Aditya replying

Aditya says "Yes Bhabhima"

Kanika looking at Uday

Kanika says "if you think Manu is MANAYATA & this not a way of JUSTIFYING THE FACT YOU HAVE FELLING ABOUT FOR HER THEN YOUR ARE JUST CALLING FOR DEATH, you might be finding it easy way BUT YOUR DEATH CALL
Vijay, Jainandini, Unnati Uday were shocked."

Uday says "Badi Bhabhi I am not trying to justify how I fell about Manu by thinking, believing & saying she is PRINCESS."

Kanika says "Then you have to prove it."
Jainandini says "how are we suppose to that you have removed all the past."

Aditya says "Everyone life is not fairytale like yours yes we did remove it & we don't regret it."

Vijayinder says "But memories help to remember I agree there were bad & sad memories but must good & happy which would have helped you know who actually she is."

Neelam says "There were more bad then good"

Aditya adding

Aditya says "No one expected she MIGHT BE MANAYATA Vijay Bhai."

Uday says "Vijay Bhai, Aditya is right, what was done was for good."

Aditya smile

Aditya says "No one here is going trust & specially not MANAYA she will never go back to MUMBAI so convincing her will be hardest."

Kanika looking at Uday & Vijay adding

Kanika says "secondly the situation is not in your favour at all."

Aditya adding on

Aditya says "Thirdly not only us but you get your families to trust & that will need proof which you need."

Kanika adding on

Kanika says "Convincing specially Daatabhai & Rohan will be very difficult & just because Adi & me are talking to you don't be mistaken that we will support you."

Aditya adding

Aditya says "And finally Vijay Bhai if those records would have helped to prove to us specially DADA, JIJUSA & ME then you're mistaken, you surely know I was London for MBA & Ajay Dada is also living I have heard him talk about HIS CHOTI' do I have worded for you Vijay Bhai I bet you also heard him way more then me so in words ANY KIND OF DOCUMENT or PHOTOGRAPHS CAN BE MANIPULATED so think of it."

Kanika & Aditya says together "And lastly we would say Dad, Mom, Mamasa & Mamisa will be easier to convince.

Kanika continuing

Kanika says "If you guys want to help in finding Manaya come along."

They all go where Prithvi, Jai, Rohan, Dharam, Saraswati, Laxshmi, Surya, Jagat Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya & Arjun are there.

Aditya asking "Dada did you get to know where is Manaya."

Dharam answering "not yet Adi."

Aditya says "we should looking for her not that she will not come back but still."

Kanika says "Adi is right"

Uday asking

Uday says "can we help Dada"

Jagat says "Ya more people faster we will find Manu."

Neelam says "Then decided Uday, Arjun & you going together Jaggi."

Pragya adding

Pragya says "Khushi & Unzs are going together."

Khushi says "But Mamisa..."

Aditya cutting in

Aditya says "Why will she want to help this all because of her."

Khushi says "Adi that's not it I... "

Kanika cutting in

Kanika says "Then decided Unzs & you, Khushi & Ash & J."

Aditya says "Ash just chill for now finding Manaya is important later you can being angry & fighting with."

Aditya smirking adds

Aditya says "another thing Ash do I tell J why are you so angry & fighting with her."
Looking at Luv adding

Aditya says "you & Vijay Bhai."

They all leave so does Aditya, Neelam & Pragya leave but Prithvi follows them out. Prithvi
asking

Prithvi says "Prago is there something wrong?"

Neelam cover up

Neelam says "Daatabhai Manu has gone somewhere she is hurt & depressed what can be worse."

Prithvi say "Worse Choti, after everything, Prago, You & Adi are so cool."
Aditya says "Mom he caught us."

Pragya tells him everything

Prithvi says "Manu is fine & all are right they all deserve punishment & this the best kind of punishment for all them"

Aditya says "so Mamasa you are with us."

Prithvi asking

Prithvi says "Yes but where is Manu."

Pragya says "Choti's house"

Prithvi asking

Prithvi says "Who plan is it, Adi it's not yours."

Aditya replying
Aditya says "Mamasa your dearest nephew which I am not."

Prithvi says "Adi stop being jealous of him & this all being monitored from London you kid are great."

Prithvi adds asking

Prithvi says "Where are you going? are you going to meet Manu? I will also come."

Aditya says "Mamasa firstly I am sorry you are not coming with & staying here, secondly we are not going to meet Manaya & thirdly we going to the outhouse your wife & your sister want to talk to your dearest nephew which I am not you see."

Pragya say "Adi enough self pity now stop."

Neelam adding

Neelam says "Daatabhai you stay here & call Adi when everyone returns."

Prithvi goes in. Pragya, Neelam & Aditya go to outhouse. After a few hours everyone returns home but they haven't found Manu. Aditya also comes

Aditya asking

Aditya says "you all couldn't find Manaya..."

Aditya with fake worry adding

Aditya say "where could she go you all have searched whole of Pune."

Looking at Laxshmi & Saraswati adds

Aditya says "this is all because of you Jija, Jijiya, how could you both hurt her so much, actually did anyone check Pano's place."

Nobody had thought about it.

Prithvi says "I did but she not there also."

Jai says "I will go to shiv's myself check."

Kanika immediately adding

Kanika says "Maasahab went to Shiv Kaka place to check she not there."

Kanika worried adding on

Kanika says "Daatabhai should we check hospital as that the only thing left"
Dharam & Rohan say together "Kanu shut up she hurt hurt, depressed & insecure but she will perfectly fine."

Looking at Laxshmi & Saraswati. Dharam adding

Dharam says "this is because of you Jija Bhabhi"

Rohan adding

Rohan says "Jijiya"

Aditya says "now instead of blaming each other lets chill & wait for her there no other option."

Looking at Jagat adds asking

Aditya says "where did you leave Uday."
Uday coming in

Uday says "Aditya I am right here, Sorry I know that none of you like it but I checked the hospital but Manu is not even there."

Aditya says "Uday it is fine it was right thing to do I know no one here will like it nor do I like the idea of thinking of it but it can be possibility, it would just be unfounate."

Surya shouting

Surya says "Adi"

Aditya says "Surya Jijusa no need to shout at me it is because Laxshmi Jija, Saraswati Jijiya, Dada, Jijusa & you, YUVRAJ SURYA BHAN SINGH.

Luv say "Did anyone try her mobile."

Aditya thinks why hasn't she come back yet I felling worried now. He see his mobile.

Ashwariya say "Has Manu called you Adi"

There was a message on his mobile from Manu.
Adi I will come in 10... Uday is still out.

Aditya replying

Aditya says "No Ash"

Khushi asking

Khushi says "What are you doing on your mobile?"

Aditya replying

Aditya says "None of your business
RAJKUMARI KHUSHI RAI SINGH"

Arjun asking

Arjun says "where could Manu go?"

Jagat asking

Jagat says "when will she come back."

NEXT : CHAPTER 13.2
Edited by JADEKKD - 9 years ago

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