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paaskhanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#571

hi Meera.. welcome back. Am so happy that I came across your story. Look forward to reading it on the blog. The poem is outstanding

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rizib

@rizib

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Posted: 10 years ago

#572

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Unresd.

I clicked the link with so much hopes because of the chapter's title. And was not at all disappointed.

Before I comment on the story, let me assure you that yes, those are couple of fantastic stories that I follow like many here I'm sure, which is no less or greater than A River Runs Through It. You wonderful writers are creating magic with your pens (or rather keyboards I'd say). And we wait for every single one of you people's updates.. So there is nothing to not believe there ok..

Now to the update. I was hoping that the title could be about AV's feeling, but no. I know it's too soon but kya karoon? Dil Chahta Hai.. 😉

Her parents are like typical teacher-parents I think. I dunno about other places, but where I come from most teacher-parents are like this (I'm not Indian). Absent-minded appreciation is quite a regular thing when it comes to anything other than studies, in other words co-curricular activities.

Tripti... What can I say? I would love to have her as my sister. She is so much fun and naughty in a cute way. She's quite often hitting the right spot when it comes to her sister's college life.

I take this as yet another new beginning of Khushi's and AV is definitely a connecting thread here. She is going out of her comfort zone and doing something she has never done before. What could be a better phrase than 'a new beginning'?

Khushi, your spacing out is gonna make your dost smell a rat very soon. Be careful! 😆

I loved it when Arjun says "And the worst is that you won't even be able to hide post the event. Everyone knows you!" He had to rub it in once again reminding her of her uniqueness in being the only female.

Is he really flirting with her with a romantic interest in heart, but covering up with his friendship? Or is it genuine friendship from his side too? Have to wait and see about that.

There had to be some accident that brings these two face to face. Most of the time it is Khushi's clumsiness, but this time it's not her fault. Uh oh. I hope AV's misconception soon clears regarding Khushi and Arjun. Khushi!! Where are your thoughts going girl? I would say even that is not your fault, when you have someone like him in front of you.. *sigh*

Sweet chat they are having there. I completely understand Khushi's state. I would have been the same if a guy like him has a casual chat with me like that. Also loved the moments you've written about her falling for him, Meera. ⭐️

Jealousy is also playing its part here, I see. But I was very happy to see that AV came back to her after that particular performance. His devilish smirk made me worry a bit. But I should have known better about our AV "sir". He won't get sidetracked by such mundane things!

And finally he calls her by name!! Aaah.. Was waiting for this. And she asked him to call her Khushi! Me very happy.

But a teeeny weeny doubt popped up in my mind, if AV would think that only Arjun was allowed to call her Kaveri, as he thinks he is someone special to her? He also heard her dad calling her Khushi. Let's see.

Can't wait for the next update...

Edited by rizib - 10 years ago

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shiv456

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Posted: 10 years ago

#573

hope she sings nice song awesome update

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Manasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#574

Another chapter that never fails to bring a smile on a face that is reading it. Your silky touch was evident as usual and your song selection feels like a bestselling "song for the situation" album😊.

I think we need more of Tripti in the story. She is what most of us want in our college days. A conscious that can actually talk to you. A conscious that can say what we are afraid to say. Khushi should be so glad to have her in her life.

Arjun seems to be everywhere and everything. Including being Khushi's boyfriend in Arnav's eyes. I guess college as always is about linking and gossiping. It's no wonder the burden of proof is on the accused more than the accusers😊.

Finally got to read some of the acts that make Arnav into AV Sir or a rockstar. His passion for music comes out in this chapter. You have given us enough info on what goes on in Khushi's head when they meet but I would like to know what goes on in his head for the same moments. The head bump was a painful good start for me and in the matters of heart, anything goes😊

Khushi seems to be still playing her one inside and one outside double role very well. Finally the J factor showed up which is always a good sign in the beginning 😊. I was so looking forward for her song selection but will wait for the next chapter. I am sure it will be another great one from the album "song for the situation" 😃.

It is such a pity that I always remember the big events in college instantly but the actual fun that goes into getting ready for the event always comes out slowly. Thanks to you, I am able to dust off so many of the personal untouched memories from college days.

Lastly, I cannot close out without saying that you story is unique in its own way. I am sure comparison is inevitable to others but a reader of many stories here, I can say that, everyone brings their own flavor and charm and yours is no different. Don't change a thing because you have a good one going and those are hard to come by.

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bhavis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#575

Read two of your updates together and must say am loving Arjun here. He knows how to bring out best of Khushi. Just loved how he tricked her to sing the song. Their friendship is growing each passing day and people mistaking him as her BF is something very easy to do in college as at that age there is no funda of having friendship with opposite gender- especially on one on one basis😊. People have taken the dialogue ek ladka aur ek ladki kabhi dost nahi ho sakte too seriously 😆.

I am so much in love with Trupti. She is the breathe of fresh air and is so opposite to her elder sister. You have portrayed the siblings so perfect. They are so much a like but yet poles apart.👏

So Khushi is falling hard for her AV sir😛. Is this the first crush or the first love time will say. But jealous Khushi already😲😆 looks like she has gone far in her mind then what is portrayed here. The first bump - will this lead to many more bumps or will it flatten the bumps in their real life. Time will say. Its time we know whats going on AV's mind or is it too early for him to even notice her😕 as he looks at her as someone's GF. Will let you unravel the story.

And I totally am with Khushi with her dryness in throat while performing. I give stage performances since the age of 5 yet get dry throats every time i perform.😳

Meera i am in love with your indulgent. Its nostalgic and I am reliving my Engineering college days with your story which was otherwise dusted between career and family😃. Your song selection too takes me to the journey back in time. Thank you for that😃

Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago