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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#551

awesome update... beatifully written..

who is this new entry.. i hate her already..

i do not want a heartbreak for khushi...

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Khushi is very nervous to sing , AV Sir's presence has just doubled her tension . The girl who sang the song has partially demotivated khushi along with Arnav's comments 😆

We often find escape route instead of facing our stage fear 😉 khushi did the same , she was thankful that she had a bump in her head which she used an excuse instead of singing before Arnav

Anyone who sees Arjun - khushi together thinks they are couple , What about AV sir ?

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#553

khushi has fallen hard.and who s da new entry.gng to gve Khushi a tough tym?and i love Agarwal more n more.aaand Meera ur story s no more lesser than any other story..no more self doubting pleeejjj..

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loony-toony

@loony-toony

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#554

amazing story...intriguing and at the same time having a calming effect..👏

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#555

You know, it is so very difficult to choose what I liked best about this story so far... b'coz I liked each and everything...

Khushi is falling for AV sir and is tongue-tied in front of him!

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xZoyax

@xZoyax

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#556

Beautiful 👏

Anyone at Kyushu's place will feel tongue tied like this.A handsome hunk like AV is more than enough to stop you in your track.She is nervous and thankful for her bump to be in today , so lets see tomorrow?

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jheel

@Bhavikakosambia

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#557

Hey mira, I really liked the past two updates. I'm sorry I didn't comment on the last one. So, I will do it now.

The update before this one was great but I felt like it was just too little (although delicious :D)too late. There was nothing wrong with the Pacing of the update itself, it just felt like the Pacing of the story as a whole was more than slow. I felt like nothing was actually happening, even if I love and cherish this kind of tiny moments but the amount of them was too less(yeh dil maange more, you see :P) and given with a big gap between them so effect is less. But today's update just madeup for all that somehow I saw the story progressing, maybe because arhi actually communicated, heh. Call me vain but I just love them together hehe.

Mira I apologize if I offended you :( but I just couldn't stop myself from giving my honest review :)

I not even 18 yet (my b'day is on 1st April) so please forgive me if I did upset you coz ur much elder to me.