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kanthi_chks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#581

Meera, the way you bring out the feelings of a girl who is dealing with her crush is just spot on. Everything feels so real that if I put myself in Khushi's place, I would feel exactly the same.

So Khushi realized that it's not just some harmless crush but that she is slowly but steadily falling in love with him.
Leave about Khushi, just reading about this AV sir is making me fall for him more and more with each update. 😃. And we haven't even got more than a few words from him yet. But who needs words when he sings and plays guitar like that looking like that. 😉

Curious to know what song Khushi selects.

Oh and what an awesome sister Tripti is! Always gives the right advice. 😃

Arjun is a sweetheart! I have a thing for guys who sing, proficient or not.

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ArhiMaria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#582

This is like our Arnav and Khushi walla Glee! Love this musical romance Meera! Beautiful work!

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ASRphanki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#583

Aww..beautiful update meera ⭐️

It was so cute and filmy

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#584

Meera, first and foremost you are very humble. You are writing such a sweet and wonderful story and yet you are saying that there are other stories which readers might like to read over yours.

Well I can only say that each story has its own flavor and the the flavor you are bringing along with this story is so wonderful that as the title says "A river runs through it", we ourselves are flowing along with your river wondering where it will lead us taking us through such extraordinary emotions.

If falling in love was a journey, she had just crossed a critical milestone.

Above line holds good for the update too. I fell in love with your story a lot more after this update.

Khushi getting a bump on her head after banging into a door opened by none other than AV sir, wow I could visualise the stars above her head too.

No, AV cannot think that Khushi and Arjun are a couple. Khushi tell him that you are single and ready to mingle clearly.

Now even I want to know which song would Khushi sing the next day.

The conflict between classical music and filmy music is like a never ending argument and happens almost in all typical Indian households, isn't it. 😆

Now eager to know where the river will lead us in the next update.

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MEsw

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Posted: 10 years ago

#585

Na chain hai dil ko na karar hai,

Jab se dekha un nazro mein, dil be karar hai.

Har jagah woh aate hai nazar,

Unki hansi meri subah hai, meri sham hai.

Main jahan bhi jaoon, jahan bhi rahoon,

Muje aaye nazar wahi Naqsh-e- Jamal hai.

Hai agar yehi mohabbat to yehi sahi,

Hal-e- dil mera magar be- haal hai,

Kyun hai ek sukoon sa, hai labon par fir hasin,

Kyun iss beqarari main bhi, ek qarar hai.

She was humming this song while she ran home from practice session.😉 Pouring out her feelings in words...

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Hot_Chocolate

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Posted: 10 years ago

#586

sorry for such a late comment meera. got some Internet problem!

update was all that I wanted. I wanted to see tripti's reaction on khushi's singing. I wanted to see Arjun Singing again. I wanted AV and Khushi's little interaction. and you gave me all that. *see the smile* :D

so he The AV sir is a well trained classical singer. a little insight into Arnav's life. And khushi being khushi is all flustered in front of him.

I am already reeling in to the realness of this story Meera. that one crush who turns the pehla pyaar and then things happened and all that. I am feeling every now and then that like what will happen now? which song will khushi sing? what are AV's thoughts?

for now I am only thinking that isn't Arnav a last year student and will leave college in few months. ?? and going by the prologue something did happened between AV and khushi in the past. so. ..

oh my god ! I am asking too many questions that too itni jaldi. .sorry.

Please please please try to update on Sunday. will wait:)

Edited by BlackHole - 10 years ago