SW Symph 3-"I am Sam" on 139 - Page 28

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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by Nisha0604


Originally posted by taara113


Is is not part 109 ???
It was a bit senti in the thread in the morning...n wen things get senti i get really sad n den i dont knw wat to say...bt 2 updates done the mood seems fine now...n now my verbal diarrhea is back

with talks on no updates and ending, I started thinking of eventually it will...a part of me sometimes wants that, im super impatient, i can't remember one book whose last chp iv not read b4 reaching the ending maybe except one and that  to bcz a frnd made me swear il not...Evn though iv complete trust on the fact that you will end them together i still just want to knw what happens in the last chapter...maybe you can write a part on 5 yrs later, it could just be dream or watevr... I just wanna know...desperately...
But then the other part of me is so scared of your story ending that i can almost cry on the thought and im super sure i will the day you write the last part... A lot of good stories we read are filled with hard realities of life, they are a mix of the good and bad in society, so how much we enjoy the writing, the characters, the ideology, the fact that it comes to an end somewhere is satisfactory, and me being a desperate soul reads that b4 hand just to prepare myself mentally...
But with stories like yours which come out of our day today lives, which are about normal ppl, der normal issues, der normal achievements and mostly the happy parts of life you can read that forever, every part seems so satisfactory, it could just end today and id knw dey are together or it might go forever and me wondering god wen will they be together...both the thoughts coexist, like the multitude of thots that coexist in my mind all the time and make me such a confused person and non coherent writer...
There is that goodness in what you write that makes me like everything about it, its like Harry Potter ( i remember someone mentioning abt it in some thread i cant remember the context) there is nothing to disagree about there is nothing not to like, you just always want to have more of it...the only sad thing will be that it ends...and i am so sure I will cry, i cry in almost all movies i watch, i cried so much when hp ended evn though i was so prepared, i almost cry about everything sad that happens in the  fictional world...real life i look like more confused and not knowing wat to do...
Some rubbish iv written...evn i don't knw where i was heading...rereading all i cld get was pls dont end abhi or something like that...im such a kid...iv a feeling il feel like deleting it, sadly yoy cant do it on IF... Chuck it il just post abhi. 

And C  Congratulations...Have gr8 time studying and making ur people proud...you go girl Smile ( im sure ul catch up on the updates when u have time )

ITS A BEAUTIFUL, THOUGHTFUL NOTE
THE MOST BEAUTIFUL in fact Big smile

I am EXACTLY like you... I have a million things in my mind all the time, NO it doesnt have to make sense. DO NOT let anyone tell you how much thoughts you can have in your mindAngry
Its very sweet of you to say that...I get 'itna mat soch' alot; maybe I bother ppl a lot with my non-stop blabbering... I'm II x 2 when it comes to talking Wink 

I have a trillion thoughts, women have super powers they can do unbelievable things and make it all seem easy. When we can be a wife, mother, employee, maid, neighbor, friend, daughter, student AND an author, we CAN HOLD A trillion thoughtsBig smile
I don't know about other woman but you sure as hell do unbelievable things and make it seem easy Clap

I cry for everything, crying keeps us grounded... a sensitive person is a better human being than a wealthy oneBig smile
You know I'm done being sensitive il like wealthy for some time nowWink

Yes, its inching towards resolution... I DONT WANT IT TO EITHER. THIS is my job outside of my job, on some days I am more delighted with this job as wellLOL
You are lucky to have found such an amazing job outside job...Let's please settle for one thing once we are done with II and R&B you should start with a new one...maybe this time set abroad somewhere... I'm sure it will be as gr8 as this...
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by Nisha0604


Originally posted by Aksh14


Hey Nisha!
Kudos to you and your hell of a rocking story. It has been my lifeline in the past week. Read from the start to the very end in 5 days. Waiting for your updates restlessly. Big smile

THANK YOU VERY MUCHBig smile
It took you 5 days to read? Wow... It is a LONG story then... huh!Embarrassed

Well I am glad you gave my creation such a huge chunk of time. Its priceless and I totally appreciate it
I will do my best to update it as quick as possible... Iactually only do this outside of work home and the kids... havent watched a single TV show, or a movie... well.. thats a lie, I watched Chris Hemsworth's  Blackhat on Sat night... but mostly I only writeEmbarrassed

Wow. You are such a great multitasker nisha. Smile
Your story has made me forget the original Raman and Ishu. Wonderfully addictive. 
And being an iyer myself.. Love the way you show glimpses of my culture! Keep rocking.Big smileWink
Edited by Aksh14 - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by Nisha0604


Originally posted by Ranu1234


so cute di... loved the phone convo like TOTALLY loved it!!!!!!i reread it a few times actually .
I love Mrs Sagar now.. I feel she is R&B's Bally she probably knows more about R&B's state of mind than II and there probably is a reason behind her telling R&B right after II's  visit. She has already seen them fight and probably knows whats in his mind so her small way to help i guess pura kayanath inhe milane mein laga hua hai EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.

Now almost always i imagine what could happen next ..u bring on something bettter but in this case I imagined R&B returning early with a crystal eiffel tower and in her office ..seeing her office and stealing a sheet with doodles with 100 Rakshasan in it Embarrassed and Bally observing the 2 shell shocked crazy's and leaving them , II all pink and R&B with his trademark half smile and taking her to a special place to get the I missed you gift back EmbarrassedEmbarrassed. Dekh mein tere FF ka OS likhti hoon LOLLOL

THAT... Anu... would be a FIRSTClapClapClap
THANKS VERY VERY MUCHBig smile
I am thinking how to make them have a "real" encounter u know... if he went to her cube with a gift then we would all know he likes her, if he saw her doodling HE would find out (in HER case, READERS already know, since she is such a liar and a motor mouthLOL)

I want to keep his enigma intact AND have them make out... like they usually do
See if it were overseas they can get privacy ANYWHERE, but in Delhi? Only at someone's houseCry or a hotel... hotel is too creepyDead so I always make them "hang out" at one house or the other...
Hmmm... chal sochti hoon
How I can weave it

true would be obvious.. but isnt it obvious to all of us that they are crazy about each otherEmbarrassed .. Doesnt he know sort of she has fallen for him her body is giving it away right..
 but yes less obvious is sooo much fun to read ..i feel slowly they are unable to hide even from each other and when she sees him after this trip it sure is going to be one step closer..
will let you think of the next encounter.. on a different Note I am planning to buy a JC crew Tshirt for my husband LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL ab kya karen R&B toh milne se raha might as well see one's husband in that form ROFL
Posted: 6 years ago
Kollywood Gossip and Sartorial Advice
Part 111

Amma found her asleep... ASLEEP at 6:30 PEACEFUL, SMILING... her phone and ipad buried underneath her, as if she were cuddling it like a person...Blushing
its quite UN Iyer like to be taking naps at dusk, so she was woken up amidst much complaining and loud crying, and was told "Chinna kozhandaya nee?"Angry.."Are u a baby, get up and get busy, its 6:30, go sit down and practice"
She lay in bed sulkingCry

"Arent u cold, why are u wearing a summer nightshirt?" "Only if u wear appropriate clothes u wont need the blankets, 
u can get out of bed, velila/outside its 15C and u are in ur summer shirt?"WinkOuch

I CANNOT TAKE IT OFF I TOLD HIM I AM WEARING THIS... WHAT IF HE RETURNS AT MIDNITE AND FINDS ME IN A FRUMPY SACK LIKE KURTA AND SALWAR OR SWEATSBlushing

"Amma I am not cold" she sulkedAngry
"then why do u have ur covers up under the chin?" she demanded hands on hipsAngry
"Ishita wake up go wash up and light the lamp, and sit down to sing"
"No" she said
I SHOULD GET MARRIED ASAP. ATLEAST I CAN TAKE EVENING NAPS OR MID MORNING NAPS
ONLY IYERS HAVE WEIRD RULES ABOUT NAPPING
WHY CANT A GIRL CURL UP AND LAY IN BED... AND PLOT... ERMMM.. FANTASIZECry

"Do u shave on the 4th day?"
"No"
"Sooner?" she asked, horrified, imagining the brutal bristles
He didnt answer that,He rubbed his hand over his chin/jaw 
"Thats BAD" she said hoarsely, removing the phone off her ear for a second..Imagining the needles pricking her skin
"Really?" his half smile
She groaned audibly.. helplessly


"Do u wear biz suits?"
"Mostly"
"What did u wear yesterday"
"Navy"
"With the red silk tie?" CMU event...
She imagined pulling his head down crushing the shiny red fabric..
"What will u wear tomorrow?" (SINCE U ARE LOUNGING IN YOUR SWEATS TODAY)
"I am confused, could use some good advice" Blushing


Sam is lucky, like Akka does she visit often?"
"too much" chucklingROFL
"how mean"Cry
"Its 4 miles II" SHE CANT BE MISSING MALCHA MARG toneShocked
"Tanmay is so wonderful, I bet he doesnt stop her"Clap
I WANT A HUSBAND LIKE THATEmbarrassed
"Agree too nice"Evil Smile
"I would go every other night too"Evil Smile
"Every other year seems appropriate" he said softlyBlushing

GOOD GREIF... HE WONT LET HIS WIFE GO SEE HER LOCAL PARENTS MORE THAN ONCE A YEAR?
U WILL PROBABLY HAVE HER CHAINED TO THE BED, NAKED... RAKSHASANBlushing
THAT IDIOT WOULDNT WANT TO LEAVE U ANYWAY, IF U LOOK AT HER WITH THOSE SOULFUL EYES, AND TOUSLED HAIR
AYYO...CryEmbarrassed



amma returned... "what is going on, yesterday you wouldnt stop cleaning the kitchen, today u are not ready to get off the bed?"
"Well a girl can change her mind" II said sullen
"Well I like the one from yesterday, that loves to cook and do some housework"
"Amma I think I know what I will do, I will marry a man with lots of money, I will just go to work and return home and lay in bed, 
kaila saapadu kudukkanum, I need a tray of food brought in" devilishly
"Oh seri, what else?"
"Then, I need a fresh set of sheets on my bed every night, bed WARM A irukkanum, the bed is too cold" II continued
"OK got it what else kanna"
"I dont want babies, u know that" II giggled
"Will u share ur bed or will the husband sleep in the outhouse?" Amma asked digusted, yanking the covers off before leaving the room
NO NO OUTHOUSE, I WANT HIM IN BED... EVERY NIGHT, EVERY EVENING... OR AFTERNOON WHEN I RETURN FROM WORK I WANT HIM TO AS WELL
I WANT HIM TO SWEET TALK ME, AND BE MEAN AND I WANT TO SULK AND I WANT HIM TO CAJOLE ME
She got off reluctantly... wore a pair of leggings... striped red ones, like candy cane... smiled at her legs...
And went off to help Amma, cleaned Periappa's room, sang two songs sitting there... just for him, fed him kanji 
and patted his head so he would sleep after giving him his meds, READ HIM BOOKS... like she did frequently, story books of every age
She would even read Tamil movie gossip to him
"Periappa, Prakash Raj wife a vittutaan, he left his wife" "Nayan and Prabhu Deva have split" "Nobody likes Vadivel anymore" "Linga flop"
Appa would wonder WHY she is so goofyROFL


Appa walked in smiling, seeing his baby... "How caring she is" he muttered
"Innikki sema starting trouble, she was ASLEEP when I came" Amma tattled
"Paavam Madhu kozhandai, let her take a nap, she never returns before 8 or 9, she probably doesnt know what 4 PM at home is"
II had texted both when she left work...

"Parents house should be a fun place, see we keep asking Vandu to stay, she only stays once or twice a year" Appa complained sadly
"Ivalum Delhi paiyyan daan venum solra, she also only wants a Delhi boy" Amma agreedCry
"If they live in another city or country they would come by for two or three weeks atleast" Appa saidEmbarrassed
"I suspect this one with fight with her husband and come here every other night"LOL
"I am afraid of that too Madhu, we may have spoilt her too much, even if there is such a thing"
"We let her be, because Vandu left 12 ish years ago.. she was in 1st year? now she is out of control" Amma scolded
"Vandita was married and pregnant at 27"
"Idoda kozhandai eppo paapomo, when will we a baby from this brat" Appa whined
"Left to her she will convince her husband, they should live childless" Amma added doobam, added fuel..Evil Smile
"She needs a smart strong manipulative man, just like she is" Appa said ina  whisper
"Our Iyer boys? Hmmm" Amma almost said "Impossible"
"WHY NOT? Dont say like that, Subbu was a useless that couldnt look beyond his Amma, Sree? Sree was just too nice,
 ival mechuttu poyitta avana(its a tamil expression equated to herding cattle, which means a smart cookie), she just didnt take him seriously"
"Finding that someone that will give her a good fight. Nanna strict a irukkanum 
illena romba polladadu idu, he should be a shrewed man, otherwise this one will start dominating" Amma fantasized her daughter being "handled" appropriatelyClapEvil Smile
ONE CAN ONLY WISH... ONLY WISH...

"we gave her too much freedom"
"Not really, she is not like some 25+ year olds"ClapEmbarrassed
"Yes she is a good kid... but has too much pidivadam, adamant"Embarrassed

Later that night, staying up as usual...
She sent a link to the unknown number
http://www.colorcombos.com/choosing-the-right-colors-for-mens-suits-and-ties-article.html
Deliberately misunderstanding his word "advice"Evil Smile

A Flipkart shipping notification/receipt for the following book popped in
http://www.amazon.com/(Reading)Between-Lines-Unconscious-Everyday-Conversation/dp/0306460092Blushing




Posted: 6 years ago
Yeh dil mange more:))

Posted: 6 years ago
OMG! You dedicated the convo part to me, I love you. And I'm in love with that part. On my way from agra to Delhi I kept reading and rereading it. 3 hours my eyes were on my phone. I was "shaking like a leaf" while reading it, literally. Her arms on her forehead, covering herself with the blanket was all so natural. Thank you thank you thank you.  I'm not very good with words I hope you understand my feelings,  ironically I'm an editor.
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by modernfamily


OMG! You dedicated the convo part to me, I love you. And I'm in love with that part. On my way from agra to Delhi I kept reading and rereading it. 3 hours my eyes were on my phone. I was "shaking like a leaf" while reading it, literally. Her arms on her forehead, covering herself with the blanket was all so natural. Thank you thank you thank you.  I'm not very good with words I hope you understand my feelings,  ironically I'm an editor.

Reading you are an editor and not good with words, just cracked me, people in this train are giving me looks LOL
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by Hsp.canada


Originally posted by modernfamily


OMG! You dedicated the convo part to me, I love you. And I'm in love with that part. On my way from agra to Delhi I kept reading and rereading it. 3 hours my eyes were on my phone. I was "shaking like a leaf" while reading it, literally. Her arms on her forehead, covering herself with the blanket was all so natural. Thank you thank you thank you.  I'm not very good with words I hope you understand my feelings,  ironically I'm an editor.

Reading you are an editor and not good with words, just cracked me, people in this train are giving me looks LOL

Heres another shocker
I am an ACCOUNTANT


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