ArHi FF: Silent Whispers Thread 3: Link to Th 4 Pg 1 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
awesome update. poor khushi. pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
God this one is heart wrenching 
She is truly alone at the moment 
Loses her friend love mother n her brother is out of town 
Wen Arnav comes to knw he will be so guilty 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
I have no words to say.. that was truly brilliant..great part
Kushi ahe noq neither ave arnav nor her amma.
looking forward to next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Why did arnav do that...tell her over the phone...poor Khushi, already she was going through so much...
This will push her more far from everyone...

Please update the next chapter soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
amazing one...
i hvnt expected arnav to say this.. but i understand that a brother is speaking for a brother..but what about khushi..havent he felt that khushi have some feelings for him!!!

its very sad to see khushi now..while garima was in front of her, khushi never wanted her and now when she's gone she needs her..

poor thing..even shyam isnt there for khushi..shes completely alone and going through this all for herself..

cant wait for the next update..update asap..

thanks for the pm
Edited by deepsdspeed - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
I feel so much for Khushi.. Poor her.. Arnav is gonna regret this voicemail big time.. I know why Arnav is doing this but such a bad timing.. I hope shyam is with khushi soon.. She would need someone before she is shattered into several pieces.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
emotional update.
feel bad 4 khushi 😭
 
Edited by praseetha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Such an emotional update... Felt really really Bad for khushi... 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Sorry but boo hiss for this chapter.  To see your mom breathe her last and at the same time have your love to reject you over the phone, no less.  That's cruel.  Yes wouldn't wish this moment on even the worst of my enemies.
Btw Arnav is a coward.  At least say your weak excuses to her face.

The critique is for the situation in the chapter,not the writing btw.  
Edited by LoLo - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Nicely written!
She went through all that 'emergency' with her mother by herself.  Poor thing.  And you ended the chapter with Arnav's message... talk about bad timing!