hey sakshi..first take a bow for this marvellous piece of writing..👏👏
heart touching emotional update..
am literally in tears now..😭
the title is soo apt... seeing ishu's state those read this os.. even their heart would ache for sure😭
ishu's pain her insecurities, wat she felt wen raman said those words to her wen there was no mistake of her.. was pictured perfectly..
i do felt bad for raman, as he couldnt see his life in pain..but he really needed this reality check.. infact the whole bhallas needed it..
the best was her silence n i hope the cvs do show her silent with all the members in the house..
the way u have portrayed ishu's pain with each n every word of hers was heart wrenching..
awesome concept..
infact am speechless with this work of yours..👏👏👏
poor ishu she is already in hell pain.. aur yeh nagin shagun..😡😡😡
chot pe namak chidane aagaye.. kameeni kahin ki... i damn soo hate her..
the conversation between ishu-toshiji as well as raman - ishu was out of the world..
i really felt the intensity of her pain.. n my heart went out to ishu in some lines like
"Waqt ne mujhe bata diya hai mummyji ki mai laakho me ek nahi laakho me akeli hoon.. isi waqt ne mujhe meri jagah bhi yaad dila di hai."
"But I am happy being Ishima of Ruhi and I owe you my life for giving me Ruhi isliye i will always respect and love you. But sorry.. I cant be the stone anymore..."
i felt very terrible in these two lines especially
sakshi this is an amazing pieces of writing..👏👏👏
i know this is a os.. one shot..
but i would be really glad if you could continue..
raman has made the damage beyond repairable..
so i would like to see him trying to make up for her..
i would love to see romi simmi rinki n mihir trying to cheer her up
or something like that..
i would be very excited to read..
this is just a request from my side
please do continue..
n if you do continue do pm me..
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