wow...sakshi
raman contradiction of situation was shown perfectly ...
he realisation was just so simple and amazingly written...
Raman- ruhi convo so meaning ful,
liked raman lines- *There is nobody over Ishima in Papa's life..
*Papa loves his princess and her Ishima too...
sakshi you use simple language to get into reader mind like-to take the first wicket down first.
Adi-raman convo , just brilliant sakshi i was just speechless very well done dear...
what an plan by raman👏👏...
but the ishita stood for adi just keeping self respect aside 👏, and proof was just unbelievable ,as usually her care and concern was too good...
the way adi is gaining trust on ishita is really nice...
i liked this line sakshi -The tiny brain of little bhalla was walking in the right direction finally..
the way raman made ishita center of attraction was perfect...
raman convo for ishta was just mind blowing just loved it beautiful written each and every sentence was so touching -* Oxygen to this home and none of us can live without you.
-*You know I am nothing without you and your support..
ishita convo just full of pain but explained everything...
finally adi realised ...
sakshi...
a very very sorry for late reply...
just speechless, beautiful writing👏...
just loved it dear...
very well done...
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