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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
loved the ending
so glad that maaneet are together
maan is just to sweet he couldn't force geet to come with him

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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
jo log ek doosre k liye bane hote hai unhe kaise bhi ho babaji milwa dete hai...m happy fr maan n geet but at d same time feeling bad fr rishab...but wht to do...geet is meant fr only maan...

lovely update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Nice update jasmine...
The song & pics were apt...
Thnx for giving our maneet to us...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
awesome update...👍🏼...Maan went to meet Geet......Geet not recognizing Maan...😲...Maan heartbroken...😭...Geet's memory comes back......Geet searches 4 Maan and Rishab unites Maaneet...👏👏👏...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Feel bad for Rishab. He did try to hold on but was not successful. True love had to meet. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
simply fabulous
loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
fantastic part. emotional update.
maan sacrifice his love coz he think that geet will not remember him n she is happy with rishab.
but how can geets babaji seperate maaneet.
feeling sad for rishab but happy for maaneet.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Lovely update dear
Loved that u made Rishbala and Maaneet together 
Loved both the updates 
Hrmm I don't know which couple to choose to be together but I feel Rishbala 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
oh my cute friend
my faces showing its fab 😳😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
This is the alternative ending of this TS.It might be depressing,so take ur own risk 2 read it.
plz write ur fav scene n fav character from this TS
Rishab did not want to accept what Maan said.He did not want to lose Madhu.
R:How can you be so sure that it's your wife?
Maan said after a brief silence:I want to see her.
Rishab got tensed.
R:Ok.
Rishab took Maan home.Maan waited outside.
R:I will call Madhu now.
Rishab went inside.
Maan waited to see her eagerly.

Seeing Madhu inside Rishab lost his control due to tension and caressed her face romantically.
He was scared whether it would be their last intimate moment.
R:I love you Madhu.
Madhu smiled:Love you too Rishu.
 
 Rishab was emotional:You will not leave me ever.Right?
M:No never.

Maan saw this from the door way and his heart was broken.He was reminded of his romantic moment with Geet.

Flash back...
Cuppng her face Maan told Geet:I can't live without you Geet.Promise me that you will never leave me.
G:I promise you that I will never leave you Maan.

Present...

Maan said in his mind:Your broke your promise Geet.

Seeing Maan ,Rishab and Madhu became embarrassed.
Madhu/Geet looked at Maan.
She:Who is this Rishab?
Maan's heart broke again.
Rishab lied:My friend Maan Singh Khurana.
She:I will make tea for your friend now.
She went to kitchen.
Rishab was tensed while looking at Maan to know his reaction.
He stammered:This is not your wife. Right?
Controlling his emotions Maan opened his mouth:
She is not my wife.Sorry for the disturbance.
Rishab was relieved.
Maan left from there heart broken.

Bhula dena mujhe
Hai alvida tujhe
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina
Safar yeh tera, yeh raasta tera
Tujhe jeena hai.. mere bina


Geet/Madhu came from kitchen with tea.
She:Where is your friend?
R:He went back.
G:So soon...?
R:He has an urgent work to do.
She kept the tea on the table.
Feeling so happy Rishab took her in his arms.She was blushing.
Maan who reached the gate turned back hoping to see his Geet for the last time.
Seeing Geet in Rishab's arms he was shattered.
Their lips were about to touch each other.

Not able to bear it anymore wiping his tears

 Maan walked away fast.
 

 

 

Ho teri saari shoharatein
Hai yeh duaa..
Tujhi pe saari rehamatein
Hai yeh duaa..
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina
Bhula dena mujhe
Hai alvida tujhe
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina



After some days...

Rishab-Madhu got married.
Seeing their wedding picture in the newspaper Maan remembered his wedding with Geet painfully.

Tu hi hai kinaara tera
Tu hi to sahaara tera
Tu hi hai taraana kal ka
Tu hi to fasaana kal ka
Khud pe yaqeen tu karna
Ban.na tu apna khuda... (x2)




Savitri and Dev were upset.
D:Why did you sacrifice your Geet bro?

M:Because Geet's happiness is Dr.Rishab Kundra now.And I don't want to snatch their happiness.I want her to be happy always.

Tear drops flowed down from his eyes.


 Khizaan ki shaam hoon main
Tu hai nayi subah
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina

Years passed...

At a park...
Maan's eyes struck a cute family.He was shocked.
They were Rishab,Madhu and their little daughter.They were very happy and were chatting and having fun.


Maan's heart pained.
He just left from there silently.

Some couples are not meant for each other...like Maan and Geet.They are destined to be with someone else else.May be God twisted their love story to make them more happier.

The end
Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago