MG SS:Salaam e Ishq#2 *|| Part 57 @ Page 141 ||* 27-Sep-2020 - Page 97

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Posted: 3 years ago

Maan is there for her but doesn't want to show it. She has realized it too.

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The Pain they both were undergoing is beautifully written by you. 

He was Numb from the pain but he couldn't utter a word as he knew he was wrong in not opening up to her or his insecurities! 

He supported her in every thick and thin then and now... He doesn't let her be alone in hospital but took care of her by hiding himself par kab talk!!! Some or how she will get to know he was there for her! Geet could feel his presence too but doesn't want to acknowledge may be.. Waiting for the next 

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Hello Everyone,


Belated Eid Mubarak to all those who are celebrating


enjoy the update and do leave your reviews


MG SS Salaam e Ishq


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PART 55


Pari drove off in her car when geet noticed a familiar vehicle parked in the parking .. not just one but two ..the black BMWs with the same number plates she went near the car but could she really mistake in recognizing a vehicle she saw daily for 5 years now… while she was standing there trying to grasp the situation when someone tapped on her shoulder making her jerk in shock ..

 

Wohoo ..relax geet ma’am hum hain


Romeo ..adi sir ..!!

 

Geet sab theek hai tum pareshan ho …aur yahan kya kar rahi ho ..

 

Nahi wohh mien bas ..

 

Pari ma’am ko drop karne aayi thi ?

 

Han ..(she continued seeing that car and then immediately turned) .. par tumhain kaise pata pari yahan thi ..

 

Umm ..woh

 

Geet pari roz aati hai yahan and almost har roz hi hum usko milte hain tu iss hi liye ..yeh choro tum batao yahan kya kar rahi ho

 

Nahi bas pari ko hi see off karne aayi thi ..chalien upar chalte hain ..

 

**^^**

 

Tanmay Singh was sleep while geet sat outside of his room with romeo and adi ..

 

Geet tum ne aaj bhi dinner nahi kiya ..

 

Bhook nahi hai adi sir…mien baad mien khalungi ..

 

Geet aise tu tumhaari tabiyat kharaab hujayegi …chalo cafeteria chalo dinner garam karte hain aur tum thora sa khalo ..

 

Nahi …mamaji ko akele

 

Ohoo geet ma’am mien hoon na mien yahan beth jaonga ..waise bhi uncle tu so rahe hain ..aap adi sir k saath jaiye aur dinner kar k aaiye

 

But ..

 

No ifs and buts geet…chaloo …!!

 

**^^**

 

Geet sat lost after having a few morsels while adi bought the water bottles ..

 

Yeh kya tum ne finish nahi kiya geet ..

 

Bas adi sir aur nahi..

 

Geet ..//

 

Adi sir ek baat pouchun ..sach sach batayenge ..

 

Geet tum se kab jhoot bola hai hum ne ..pocho

 

Mera mobile ghar pr reh gaya tha jab mamaji admit huye …kisi se koi contact nahi tha mera ..office mien aap logoon ko kaise pata chala mamaji k bare mien ..?

 

Adi was clearly not expecting this question and the shock and nervousness on his face showed it evidently making geet sure on her suspicion ..

 

Mien jaanti hoon office mien kitna kaam pending hai phir bhi aap log roz office se yahan aarahe hain ..kisi ki koi late sitting nahi hai …aur emails pe koi reminders nahi hain…

 

Geet ab wohh pata chal gaya tha humien tum aise bina bataye chutti ki tu ..

 

Adi sir jab aap jante hain k aap jhoot nahi bol paate tu kyun kushish kar rahe hain ..sach bataiye …

 

Geet …mien …wohh ..

 

Geet looked way sighing, trying to control the tears that were pooling in her tears

 

Theek hai mat kahiye…aapko farz aur dosti mien se choose karne ki zarorat nahi hai ..aapki khamooshi ne mujhe mera jawaab de diya ..

 

Adi looked away all the more remorseful yet in awe of this girl ..she never ceased to amaze him with the strength of her character and the purity of her nature ..

 

Geet farz aur dosti mien agar choose karna para tou mien dosti ko hi choose karunga ..kyun k mien jaanta hoon meri dost mujhe farz se peeche hatne nahi degi ..

 

Geet smiled sniffing…overwhelmed with emotions not wanting to break down in front of him as she will never be able to explain him her situation still not being able to hold onto her posture ..

 

Geet mien nahi jaanta k aisa kya hua hai k tum dono iss qadar ek dusre ko avoid kar rahe ho but yeh zaror jaanta hoon k woh kabhi bhi jaan k tumhain takleef nahi denge ..

 

She gasped for air trying not choke on her emotions …holding both her hands in a tight grip jointly over the table ..seeking strength from some where deep within to hold on to herself and make it through this conversation..

 

Iss baar takleef mene di hai adi sir …mene dil dukhaya hai unka ..apni takleef jab bardaasht nahi huyi tu unhain takleef dedi mene …

 

While geet sat there silently remorseful for where have they come ..remembering all that she told him…his eyes ..those painful teary deep brown eyes ..the way he stared down at her when she told him all those bitter things in a feat of anger and hurt …she couldn’t remember a time when she saw so much raw emotions, hurt and pain on his face ever.. for that matter he guarded his emotions so fiercely she could never understand what was going on in his heart and mind. And the one time when he actually lowered his guards she was blinded by her anger to even notice it. Was it even anger ?? Or was it her guilt ??

 

She was guilty of what happened to her mamaji.. she was angry at her own self for not being there for him and in a moment of that same guilt and helplessness she poured on all her emotions on him …agreed she love him with all her life ..agreed she and everyone else believes that he loves her too but he never really did promised her anything..  it was always about work, prem or the family. He never demanded anything from her for his ownself …no matter how strong her instinct is that he also feels something for her it was HER INSTINCT… how could she just blame him.. she was the one running after him …he never told her to …than why was she even angry at him …

 

Adi knew geet won’t say anything any more so he sat there silently like a friend and walked away with romeo when she went and stood outside of her mamaji’s room ..

 

Good night geet …

 

He walked away while geet entered the dimly lit room ..

 

Romeo: adi sir geet ma’am ko kya hua wohh aise kyun ..

 

Adi: Pehle yahan se chalo romeo phir baat karte hain ..

 

**^^**

 

While maan waited in the room he had booked on the same floor for adi to come and meet him when  he looked up from his laptop to see his mobile lite up with a message ..

 

What the hell yeh adi mujhe mile bina jaa kaise sakta hai ..

 

He dialed his number immediately ..

 

Adi yeh kya harkat hai..tum mujh se mile kyun nahi jaane se pehle ..

 

Sir wohh sorry ..but geet humaare saath thi bahar tk tu possible nahi tha ..

 

Maan closed his eyes in frustration ..

 

sab theek hai ?

 

g sir …geet ne dinner karliya hai …thora hi but khaya hai usne ..abhi apne mamaji k room mien hi hai..

 

fine …acha kal ka kya schedule hai

 

the usual sir ..saari important meetings first half mien planned hain coz second half tu aap …//

 

adi stopped mid sentence not sure if he should say this or not ..

 

nahi ek kaam karo kal ki meetings second half pe shift kardo …tanmay uncle kal discharge hujayenge subha tu I want to be here ..

 

and just when he completed his sentence ..maan regretted saying it.. indeed he had requested adi to make sure they arranged to be with geet when he had to visit home to meet prem but he never made it explicit that he was here all the time in the afternoon when geet is alone here …he never made it explicit that he spent all night here awake with her ensuring that she doesn’t have to run pharmacy and places to get things done …making sure she is fine ..just being with her ..

 

adi smiled but didn’t said anything ..realizing the reason behind maan’s sudden silence ..wondering why maan wanted to hide it when it was clear as ocean that he was here most of the time since the day tanmay uncle got admitted …

 

sir ..umm aur kuch ..

 

nahi ..good night adi

 

good night sir ..!!

 

maan sighed putting the phone down and closed his eyes leaning on the sofa back ..restless and tired with all the stress of the last 7 days not just physical but mental as well. Geet asked him to leave ..she sure did in explicit terms but he could never do that.. not when she was hurting so bad.. not when she needed support…so what if he wasn’t the one she was willing to take it from …regardless he made sure she had people to help her …he is Maan Singh Khurana and sure as hell he would ensure the world mold itself to her ease and not the other way around..as far as he was concerned.. his heart was at peace seeing her from a far..for now may be that’s what is best ..she is too hurt and occupied to deal with anything else and he didn’t wanted to add to her plate and so he stayed with her silently as always with her from afar …loving her in his own way ..

 

he left his laptop on the sofa and walked out towards tanmay singh’s room that had a glass window..careful to not get caught he peaked in only to see her silhouette sitting on the couch leaned back hugging her knees as if protecting herself from something unknown… his heart ached to go in and inquire what was bothering her.. his restlessness was not for no reason indeed she was worried about something..even through the darkness and a concrete wall he could feel the pain she going through …worried and anxious he paced the floor trying to think of something that he can do …anything ..

 

Geet sat in the darkness looking into oblivion holding herself tightly afraid she might loose herself to the endless tired of memories and emotions and that when her mobile buzzed with an incoming call …she saw the screen and veer’s name flashed on her it …she wasn’t in a state to talk to anyone and so she silenced the vibration and went back to her original position …

 

Maan who was seeing this from outside the room hit his hand hard on the concrete wall in frustration ..

 

Maan(st): Why are you doing this to yourself  geet …kyun ??

 

While inside the room geet opened her eyes with a sudden restlessness and looked around sensing his presence, as if she just heard him call her …anxious she walked out of the room to search the corridor but found it empty ..she sat on the bench outside all the more disturbed while maan stood behind the pillar at the end of the corridor thankful to have gotten saved from bring caught …but worried seeing her so disturbed …everything was fine …tanmay uncle was recovering well than what was it that bothered her …why was she so restless and lost ..? is he the reason? he saw her holding her head caressing it as if in acute pain ..maan looked away and went to get a cup of tea for her …when he came back geet was now inside the room while he stood outside wondering how will he get this to her…and that’s when the head nurse walked in on the floor …

 

He had made sure the best staff was attending tanmay singh and simultaneously reporting to him about his condition as well without it being known to geet ofcourse and so he gave the tea to the elderly woman and asked her to give it to geet ..

 

On any other occasion the head nurse would have straight forwardly refused such special favor and treatment but this was MSK whose trust funded the hospital and the chief surgeon had himself requested her to comply to his orders, but more than that for last 7 days she has seen this guy who is known to be the ruthless businessman to the world worry for the girl sitting inside.. she has seen him  pacing whole night outside of her room checking up on her, she knows who he pulled all strings to get the best cardiac surgeon in India at a notice of a night to this hospital for this surgery …and so she took the cup and walked in, in the pretext of a mid-night check up …

 

Geet stood up despite her aching head worried seeing the nurse at this time of the night ..

 

Relax just doing my rounds …my duty has been shifted to night this week …

Geet nodded sitting back ..

 

Is he ok ..can we do this in the morning ..he might wake up ..

 

Don’t worry with the amount of heavy medicines he is taking..he is going to be asleep till morning as usual…bye the way how are you.. are you having a head ache?

 

Hmm but Nothing major.. ill be fine in a bit ..

 

Doesn’t seems like it geet ..here have this tea ..

 

Geet gave her a questioning look …while she defended

 

i made it for myself but I think you need it more than me

 

she glanced at the cup seeing it with the exact amount of milk she takes and the smell of ginger hit her nostril making her suspicion true and she gave her a steal look ..and walked up to her

 

can we talk outside ..

 

sure ..

 

geet securely closed the door before turning towards the nurse ..

 

sister ill be coming to the point ... where is he?

 

The head nurse was shocked seeing the confidence in geet and got nervous looking around making sure he was not around and then reprimanding herself knowing he has taken a room at the end of the corridor and that is where he must be right now out of ear shots ..

 

I ..i don’t know about whom you are talking ..

 

Really ? I am talking about the person upon whose orders nobody in this hospital has asked me to do anything not even to get medicine for my patient, who is giving you all orders,due to whom I can even have my friends come over even in non-visiting hours without any restrictions and who has ordered you are taking extra care of ME…

 

That’s my duty

 

NO.. you’re duty is to take care of the patient not their attendants …so please stop lying and tell me where is he hiding ..

 

The lady had enough experience up her sleeves to know she can’t fool her anymore and so she pointed out at the room he was in …

 

**^^**

 

Maan was pacing the length of the small room waiting for the nurse to come and confirm she had the tea ..he knew only that would help her head ache but he was shocked to see her standing in front of him when the door opened …

 

Geet stood at the entrance of the room seeing him after 7 days …realizing all her doubts from this evening were true he was indeed here with her …maan looked at her with a look of both relief and pain while she stepped in never looking away from his eyes that were holding her captive …recognizing the same dark circles on his face as she had, seeing the same tiredness that she was feeling, feeling the same ache in his hurt that she was going through since last 7 days …

 

There was so much unsaid between the two of them but for the first time their eyes were talking,no facade, no more hiding the emotions it was all raw and explicit in each of their eyes with no more hiding behind the anger …tears poured in that she was holding back since last 7 days while he felt the needles piercing his heart seeing those hazel almond duo filled with salt water …she stepped ahead while he closed the gap between them both enveloped in their own bubble immune from the surroundings ..

 

They stood at a steps distance.. looking at each other feeling the heat of each others body and the friction that was urging them to diminish the last bit of this agony between them yet something was holding her back, may it was her anger, her pain that unsaid words she was still waiting for him to say. A tear slipped from the right eyes and he raised a hand to wipe it away only to have geet shrug it off mid-air..

 

Mene kaha tha na k chale jaaiye ..tu phir kyun roke aap yahan …

 

Maan looked at her with the agony he has been burning in from the moment she walked away from him..

 

Kyun ke tumhain akela chorna mere bas mien nahi hai ..

 

Geet looked at him accusingly while another tear slipped from her left eyes and maan again tried to wipe it away but geet stopped his approaching arm blocking it from hers’

 

Mujhe aapki help nahi chahiye …

 

Par mien help nahi saath dene aaya hoon geet … jaise tum ne diya humesha mera; dadi maa, aniee aur prem ko sambhaalne mien ..

 

Geet sniffed still fighting to hold her tears, in the five years that have been together ..if you call that being together this was the first time when she had fought with him and maan knew the minute her anger would subside the next emotion she would feel would be off guilt for his mishty was incapable of hating anyone be that the person who broke her.. hurt her.. shattered her.. he felt so unworthy of even standing infront of her but at this moment he wanted nothing but to wipe away her tears and hold her in his embrace till eternity …

 

Geet shook her head tear pouring out of her eyes non-stop while the realization of what he has been doing washed upon her and the memory of her words came crashing back …

 

Mujhe aapka saath bhi nahi chahiye ..kuch nahi chahiye aapse ..kuch nahi ..please ..please akela chor dijeye mujhe …larne dijeye akele …

 

She took a few steps back fixed in a trance while maan panicked seeing her walking away more than that slipping away with the way she was murmuring …and than when all of a sudden he took a step ahead grasping her from her arms ..shocking her as result taking her out of her revere ..

 

Maan held her close while both of their heart beat fastened until eventually they fell in a pattern to one another …geet gasped for air feeling captive in his embrace the heat from his body in the AC room was making hyper aware of the response of her body…she looked in his eyes only to see the crazy gleam that held her gaze …


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Nahi chor sakta geet …nahi chor sakta akele tumhain …kabhi nahi chor sakta ..

 

His words, the intensity of his eyes ..their closeness.. but top of all her own failing resolve made her scared …she so much wanted to look away from his deep brown eyes that bore into her soul, he was so close to her face with every word he said his breath was fanning her face… his grip tightened while she struggled to get free from his hold while he continued to speak of his heart for the first time in forever ..

 

Adat hu chuki hai meri zindagi ko tumhaari geet …


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Tears poured out her eyes while she looked at him in disbelief of what he just said ..she so not wanted to hear any of it…for past one hour she had been trying to come across the fact that he never committed anything to her and it was all in her mind and now him making it all a reality was not something her mind could take… and so not being able to bear the authority with which he told her she looked away pushing at his chest only to trigger him more shaking her head in denial …

 

Geet: Nahi …


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Maan’s heart torn at the sight in front of him… the Punjabi sherni who was never short of words to fight him was struggling to hold herself ..every tear that slipped from her eyes felt like a needle in his soul knowing he is the reason behind her broken state and so he left her arm and cupped her face in his hands and wiped away the tear trail ever so softly while she continued hitting on his chest oblivious to his loosened hold on her …she still looked down crying …weeping her heart out …when he placed a feather like kiss on her forehead making her stand still ..all her struggles dropped dead …she froze in her place standing in his embrace she almost held her breath feeling his lips on her skin she would have slipped that very minute if it wasn’t for her hold on his shirt ..


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New tear trail poured from her eyes while she stood looking down holding the material of his shirt in her fist and maan almost cried her name wanting her to look at him ..his heart screaming from within to tell her how much he love her but the only words that he could voice was her name …

 

Geet …please ..

 

A plea filled with so much of pain depicting the struggle he went through to even make it this far shock her whole being ..and she looked up listening to the agony in his voice…and shook her head …she would rather die a thousand time than subjecting him to so much pain ..hurt and to see him this much helpless …she would rather perish herself than seeing him breakdown …

 

And in that moment with a gasp of pain she breathed feeling chocked and looked down just as a tear trail made way out of her hazel brown eyes ..feeling the frustration, the pain building up in her all over again ..

 

Kyun …maan sir ..kyun hai hum aise ..


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She cried pouring her heart ache in those tears keeping her face buried in his embrace holding his collar in her fist while he held her in his embrace tight as if fearful she would walk away again, scared of loosing this moment. Finally after long five years the tears, the pain, the hurt they held was pouring out and nobody held back …they slipped down the floor tired and over come with their own emotions still in each others’ embrace holding one another like their life depended on this moment …and indeed it did …

 

Every tear that slipped from her eyes depicted the pain she endured for years to see the love she saw in his eyes today and his every heart beat that she heard told him the love he carried for her in his heart ..there was no denying from this point onwards.. the curtains were up and ironically without even saying those 3 so called magical words maan expressed and she accepted more than the words ever could ..!!

 

Gehri itni hai jheel si ankhien unki

Abhi tu pehli jhalak mili hai inki

Lafzoon mien bayan karun mien kaise

Abhi tu adhora salaam e ishq hai

Abhi tu qissa dil ka bayan huya hai

Dastaan e ishq abhi baaqi ho jaise ..!!

 

 

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Hi all, important thing i need you all to respond to.. shall i migrate this store to the New FanFiction Forum? the moderators are saying its important since eventually all stories would be moved to that forums



Please do leave your reviews and comments .. 


Luv ya

sobia

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

So beautiful sobia.

You do make me cry for each update you give :| that's how you put their emotions in characterwise. Not that I'm compaining though... I literally can imagine them before my eyes!! 

Finally their faceoff.... 

Aww My poor babies.. How much they have to suffer I'm somewhat glad that you made them come in front of each other... I don't want to see them hurt anymore! 

Maan is slowly coming back from his insecurities seeing Geet become historic and crying and finally confessed that his life was incomplete without her.. 

Haayee their hug and I can't wait for the next update now! Update soon 

Yes do upload in the fanfiction section as it will become easy for readers to re-read your stories 

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Nice part.  Last few days were really hectic for maneet. They had suffered a lot. Geet comes to know how maan had been doing things to help her. Their confrontation was really emotional. The feelings they are holding for each other making them vulnerable. I hope now they except their feelings and give themselves a chance to be together and stay happy. Waiting for next dear

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Goshhhhh Finalllly ❤️ 

Confessions indirect hi sahi 

They share  a very strong bond. They sense each other's worries too. 

Geet knew the tea was from Maan where as Maan knew Geet will feel guilty coz of her outburst. 

They both are perfect for each other. 

Der aaye par durst. 

Let's see how they proceed from here. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Very emotional part... 


Thanks for the update yaar

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful update

Finally they confessed their feeling

Waiting for next update

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Reading this ff after a year. Didn't know you had started updating again and read all pending parts in one go.

I have always admired the relation Maan Geet share, supporting each other in every way possible and yet no confession.But I think the time has come for words now. Its heartbreaking to see them in so much pain,fighting themselves. Hope after this silent confession, things improve because now Tanmay will insist on Geet getting married soon. Would like to see how they handle that.

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atlast dey came face to face.......n pour deir heart to each other......abb dekhte hai k kya hota hai age...........dey r ready to accept each other...........


emotional n lovely update..........


loved it............