Rithu before you start reading I'm going to warn you it'll be different from what others say and you may not like it...
Ready to rant...
Point 1:
Because of your violent😡 comment I was so curious and started reading in the morning itself simultaneously preparing breakfast ... at the line Paro hitting Rudra I was stopped ... is this what she said ?
Is that the violence you were talking? Huh? 😲 Really ?😲 The cartoon Tom & Jerry your adorable kids watching is more violent than this honey I'm used to the fighting sounds everyday from 5 yrs, from the time my son turned 4😕. I'm sure your kids are cute and gentle just like their mom😊.
Point 2: I started eating sweet, drooling on it and it was finished before I even realized It's not fair 😭 and I need to wait for a week ... I need a tissue😭
I know I'm whining like a kid and you should prepare for this a lot as I already informed you I'm very demanding🤔 when it comes to your story.
Ok! Some how I controlled myself😳
Now about the update ...you thought I'm done?😉
Rudra is so rugged and killed whole gang of traitors with minimum help and the first fight how can any one forget and the bullet wound he took saving Paro ... so these gentle Pari's blows nothing compare to those but still Rudra hurt and wants Paro to make the pain go away😳 so cute.
I liked it the way you are going to flashbacks, I think this is what you were telling in Deeps comment and the flashback is so sweet, totally can imagine this scene with Parud.👏 Rudra never back off from BSD duty and Paro always supported him.
Hmmm.. curiously waiting for what Kakusa had in mind and how he'll handle whole Mala situation in your story.
Take care
🤗
@Deepa...
Of course seat reserved but let's not frighten Rithu 😆 🤗
PS: Add few more of your special violence scenes ...I don't mind☺️
Edited by KhushiParo - 9 years ago
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