Oh Zara, what all do you have in store for us! I'm feeling profoundly content and satisfied with the way you're spinning this story. You've just breathed new life to Aman's character, that was totally wasted in the serial.
Aman's attempts to disengage himself from being emotionally involved with Sunehri was hurtful to read. Paro's gesture of treating Aman as her brother is deeply rooted in him. So much so that, him being judgemental towards Sunehri for Rudra's actions didn't seem right. I just wished that he could balance the two relationships, without the hurt that he's inflicted on Sunehri. Hoping to see you set things right for Sunehri and Aman in the upcoming chapters.
Finally seeing things starting to heat up! I'm hoping that you'll also do justice to Rudra being a BSD officer, which lost it's charm in the serial. Already seeing glimpses of him getting into the skin of a BSD officer. His interrogative brain in full swing questioning the events of Paro's death - perfect.
Would VK Singh Sir believe Rudra & extend his help, as he was quite reluctant to offer BSD services when Dhruv went missing? Would Rudra take the risk in showing Paro at the orphanage without inviting trouble? Would that bring Naksh and Aman face to face? Would that ease Rudra's fear of the relationship he has with Paro?
How soon until we see the forces of Naksh, Aman, Rudra and VK Singh come together to make Paro realize her trueself?
As much as I'm wishing for Paro and Rudra to be brought together, I cannot stop thinking about Myrah. I guess I'll have to wait patiently to know what you've planned for her well-being.
So until the next update, I'll be in standby mode
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