#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) - Page 39

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Marvellous... enjoyed to the core..


Thanks Deeps! πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks dear! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mahi ausum update:)thanks for pm:)i will give u detail update later
as i'm on the way to my home:) ramlal knows avdhoot:)what
i'm shocked:) interesting,i felt bad for astha:(she is slowly liosing her innoscense completely:)
Aha special bedroom for astha:)hmm...
thanks for dose mahi:)u evil queenn:)due to u i v started reading dark ff and i'm loving it:)
A big hug:)happy new yr:)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maitydeblina

Mahi ausum update:)thanks for pm:)i will give u detail update later Thanks deblina! πŸ˜ƒ And will wait for it buddy! πŸ˜‰
as i'm on the way to my home:) ramlal knows avdhoot:)what
i'm shocked:) interesting, Yeah he knows him! πŸ˜‰ Ramlal is Shlok's mole, planted in Avdhoot's business! πŸ˜† i felt bad for astha:(she is slowly liosing her innoscense completely:) Yeah that is Shlok's plan to completely takeover her mentally, physically and spiritually! πŸ˜³
Aha special bedroom for astha:)hmm... Yep! πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰
thanks for dose mahi:)u evil queenn:)due to u i v started reading dark ff and i'm loving it:) My pleasure buddy, as i am already addicted to dark fiction, so i thought why not spread the same addiction to others πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
A big hug:)happy new yr:) A big bear hug from me to you too buds πŸ€— 

and a Happy New Year! πŸ˜‰

 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mahi... sooper se ooper ka update.. πŸ‘

Awwieee!!!...my baby lost her innocence .. but i dont think so she is still Innocent and pure... hena Mahi.. πŸ˜ƒ

good to hear that he has arranged her a especial bedroom ahaan!

loving each and every revealation and twist..

Angie got dark circles ;O
is she really worried for Aastha????

Thanks for the PM
Wonderful Update EBP...Edited by SahriShrAvi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hooked on your story.  Please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Subhashini_chow

I am First πŸ˜†

Love the Poem U r a Star β­οΈ Sweet Devil πŸ˜ˆ Thanks dear! πŸ˜ˆ
he want Conquer ,devastate her and he make his Love her disease and 
freeze her with his Dark love 😈 
😲 Angie's father is ppartner with Avadhoot...If he have any hand of his in Avadhoot misdeeds πŸ˜‘
Yep he is the police commissioner! πŸ˜‰
I Feel  Angie will Play a key role to Busted Shlok in Future πŸ˜•
Her angel of Inocence away from her 😭she completely fell into the hell 
which is he created by for her no return πŸ˜‘
  Loved the pic! πŸ˜‰

Angel defeted and devil won the this Time πŸ˜‘
I am totally Confused his behaviour What he will get Sexually satisfying her πŸ˜† No clue
What Type of revenge is he taking from her 

He wants to take total control of her mentally, physically and spiritually so she'll crave his touch, will be addicted to his touch, he wants to completely break her spirit, so that she would be just like him broken, an empty shell and her innocence gone, just like her father took away his innocence and left him broken... 

He took a Bedroom which is Specially made for her...But what about her proper needs 
Food ,cloths ..did he have any plan to feed her πŸ˜ƒ Yep in next update you'll see another side of him! πŸ˜‰
P.S Happy New Year dear πŸ€— Hope we get another  Update Before New YearπŸ˜ƒ

Happy New Year To You Too Dear! πŸ€— And will try to update soon, if the chapter is completed by then, will definitely post it! πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Hooked on your story.  Please update soon.


Thanks dear! πŸ˜ƒ And will update soon buddy! πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
so brutal towards Aastha yaaar, which am not liking.. she is innocent here na ? so why ?

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandy198

so brutal towards Aastha yaaar, which am not liking.. she is innocent here na ? so why ?


She is not! πŸ˜‰ Did you read the chapter 14, i have written that she is a borderline phsycotic and she used to hurt animals and little children...
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