#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) - Page 37 | Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir

sathuraj

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 16:

What an awesome update...

I really adhvoot a lot...

why he has to lie to the police...inspite of his daughter's life is in risk...

he narrated a whole lot of new story to the police guy...

does he have a big gang who works for him...

how he is talking to...

so did adhvoot guessed who has kidnapped astha...

Ashlok...shlok is very rude to her...

finally astha got some answer...she was not kidnapped for the resturant incident...

they was some other reason too...

thanks for the wonderful treat dear...

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Yippee...

finally managed to read all ur fantastic update dear...

what an amazing writing skill...

its pleasure to read ur creation...

Eagerly waiting for ur next update...

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aglaeca9

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Very nice...
Pretty interesting story..

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Jhuma

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Wow Mahi what an exciting update liar Avdhoot at his best he is a mastermind it will be super exciting to saw Avdhoot n Shlok's face off both r evil in their own way. I'm still confused about Shlok's intension about Astha but in all this play Astha getting worst punishment I know she is not that innocent but she don't deserve this also. Thanks for PM dear eagerly waiting for next dose 😉.

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aastha agrawal

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Been silent reader unable 2 comment but today finally got time...beautiful updates dear...u know I love dark fictions...keep giving us more...n do pm me... 😊

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GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#366

Intenseee chapter dearest

So avdhoot knows anjali and sanjana but he lied about them

Liked that aastha wasn't afraid of him

But I am afraid what shlok will do next?

Will he do something baaad?

At least let her get clothed again

She is stark naked xD

Continue soon mahi

Really loving it👏

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817250

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Posted: 9 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Chapter 16:

What an awesome update... Thanks dear sat! 😃

I really adhvoot a lot...

why he has to lie to the police...inspite of his daughter's life is in risk...

he narrated a whole lot of new story to the police guy... Yeah he is trying to hide his sins! 😕

does he have a big gang who works for him...

how he is talking to...

so did adhvoot guessed who has kidnapped astha... Yes! 😉

Ashlok...shlok is very rude to her...

finally astha got some answer...she was not kidnapped for the resturant incident...

they was some other reason too...

thanks for the wonderful treat dear... My pleasure dear! 🤗

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817250

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sathuraj
Yippee...

finally managed to read all ur fantastic update dear...

what an amazing writing skill...

its pleasure to read ur creation...

Eagerly waiting for ur next update...

Thank you so so much sat! 🤗 It's always a pleasure for me to read your lovely comments! 😃

I am really thankful to you that you are liking my writing! 😃

And ofcourse will update soon dear! 😉

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817250

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: jhumjhum
Wow Mahi what an exciting update liar Avdhoot at his best he is a mastermind it will be super exciting to saw Avdhoot n Shlok's face off both r evil in their own way. I'm still confused about Shlok's intension about Astha but in all this play Astha getting worst punishment I know she is not that innocent but she don't deserve this also. Thanks for PM dear eagerly waiting for next dose 😉.

Thanks dear! 😃 Yes Shlok and Avdhoot are both mastermind! 😉 Yes Astha doesn't deserve to be punished for this she is being squashed between two rivals, but it's also true what goes around always comes around, everyone is punished for their sins, the method of punishment may differ...

And Avdhoot is being punished as his daughter is abducted, Astha is being punished for torturing animals, by bearing that torture on herself. After all she will realize their pain only when she herself will bear that pain...

Shlok's intentions are that he wants to break her spirit by making her fall for himself so much, that she will crave his touch, as she is innocent in the matters of desire or passion...

Ofcourse will update soon dear! 😉

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817250

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
Intenseee chapter dearest
So avdhoot knows anjali and sanjana but he lied about them
Liked that aastha wasn't afraid of him
But I am afraid what shlok will do next?
Will he do something baaad?
At least let her get clothed again
She is stark naked xD
Continue soon mahi
Really loving it👏

Thanks dear for sharing your views with me and for loving it! 😉

And Shlok is keeping her naked on purpose! 😳😉 You'll know why in the next update😳

And will continue soon dear! 😉

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