Only String That Attached (OS) Completed!! - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

perfectly portrayed!

loved it :D


Thanks!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: avni_19

Beautifully written and awesum prediction of the upcoming track! U wrote ishita's fears and insecurity perfectly! Loved it!
I cud literally imagine all ths happening! Loved Ruhi's part too! Her consoling..I love u ishima nt shagun mumma! Hw sweet!
The way Raman consoled her by giving him on her full rightly was beautiful again!

Inshort! Awesummm!



Thanks so much Avni!πŸ˜ƒ
I am glad that you liked it so much!!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa

Mesmerizing...
And this so needs to happen on YHM :D



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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sulochana90

wow its just superb just loved it

the way you described each word is just awesome
so emotional and sweet



Thanks so much yaar...
I am so happy that you liked it!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: RomComFan

This is beautiful... thanks so much for the PM!πŸ‘πŸΌ

A wonderful take on some unwelcome spoilers.πŸ‘

She fell apart and he pulled her back- i love how you explained how much is involved in her fear of losing Ru, that it also involves her ideas about them especially with  how it all started and their love being so new.

I'd really rather see this on the screen then some MU/jealous stalker stuff- lets see if the CVs also consider this point  and have him understand and support her as you have done.

Great job! πŸ˜ƒ



Thanks so much!

I am glad that it could catch your eyes, that way!πŸ˜ƒ


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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Beautiful One-Shot..πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: AmanaR

Amazing!

Ishita's insecurities were spot on! Its always Raman who goes crazy, its good to see Ishita losing it sometimes :P

Great work!



Thanks so much!πŸ˜ƒ

P.S. I love it when Ishita looses it!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Awww, such a wonderful OS! Loved it! ❀️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks so much!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wowww  its lovly..
ishu gtng out al her ger nd insecurits..
raman cnslng her, gvn hug.. β˜ΊοΈ den kiss...  
lovd dis li9-- iss lifetime mein toh tumhe mujhse chutkara milne se raha Matangi!