Only String That Attached (OS) Completed!! - Page 3

..Naina..

@..Naina..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Beautifully written! Ishita's emotions were captured perfectly, her anguish, fear, insecurity, everything was written so well. I loved the way Raman handled the situation though 😆 Let's hope we can see something along these lines in the show!

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Amina Choudhury

@sparkleamina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

What an awesome OS!

Always love your writing, they are so amazing.

This one is just fabulous, would be great to see this on screen, although think that's wishful thinking!

Thanks for such a beautiful piece of writing 😊

Look forward to your next one.

👏👏👏

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Dilshika

@Dilshika

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Very Beautiful story!

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sow2428

@sow2428

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

beautiful OS.Hope they show something similar onscreen and bring raman and ishita closer like never before.

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Beautifully written...

the insecurities of ishita are wwell explained...and raman taken care that he will not let anything happen to them and ruhi...

no they both can face the world

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Such an emotional OS.
The insecurities of a woman and a mother both shown so well. This whole case reminded her the fact that , this whole relationship was started for Ruhi ke liye and you explained that so well. Loved How Raman soothed her, the way he has changed off late. All explained so well.
Thanks for this lovely OS

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

loved it...

u portrayed her emotions and insecurities very well...

i almost cried with ishu..

loved his consoling too...

nice

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N.R.Rona

@N.R.Rona

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Excellent portrayal of ishus feelings..the heart broken ishu will be just horrible exactly like this..

her insecurities,the value of ruhi and ishras relationship..

awesome..

pls do pm me your further stories

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neha

@Iloveishra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Beautiful...loved the way you showed ishita's insecurities and the way raman consoled her...

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Reserving😃

Unreserving

Priya after watching the OLV I seriously wanted to read something about Ishita feeling so insecure and fearful of losing not only her girl but everything which comes along with her. N u depicted it so well. The last scene was very touching n I am happy that amidst all her fears of losing Ruhi she finally blurted out that losing Ruhi can entail losing Raman also n she would not be able to bear it!

I think the man deserves to hear this from her in the show. I am waiting for this for so long.

But u have fulfilled it here with this heart touching write up.

Awesome girl. Keep it up!

Edited by omshreejaanu - 9 years ago

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