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Jeryl thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was indeed a " heartfelt " chapter which disclosed the past of both Jalal and Jodha. Having read the first 16 chapters at once, it is quite difficult to wait for your update for nearly 10 days. I loved the way the story has progressed so far...eagerly waiting for the new update before the end of this month.
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update...
so Jo again joining regal... nd life threat on Jodha??? Was her parents nd brother murdered???
want to see what jalal does now to protect her...
nd there is nothing to say about aaliya... how can a mother kill her own child??? jalal did the correct thing by divorcing her...
nd thanks for the pm dear!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
continue soon...
will be waiting for your pm!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved d update so much
Jalal 200CR divorce n each n every detail was interesting
Now both are aware of each others past...lets see how their equation changes...
Who is behind jodha life??
Waiting for their confrontation after their renewed feelings towards each other
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh god Hema Me to teri fan ho gayi... what a chapter... Yaar speechless... The way all events happens... I am speechless... the way you have displayed their situation ... both were right on their own prospective...Jalal's anger now clearly justify ... so many ends connected to that project... Oh god...Jodha's life is in danger... some one is behind her...
best part both are ready to put their ego aside ...both are feeling each others pain and worries... Each and every line of this story is very interesting...
U R outstanding writer... 👏👏👏👏👏 SUPER STAR CHAPTER⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
can't wait for next update... sorry for late comment...
Lately crazy events happening in my life tooo... too busy at work and home... I am only following very few stories... this is my number one fav...😛 Thank U for this wonderful story...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti


H Preet.. how did the vacation go.. and when are u updating next chapter?? if u read both chapters together.. u feel like too many revelations.. 😆😆.. glad u liked them dear.. will continue asap.. meantime u update urs please..



Hi dear, vacation was wonderful, had loads of fun!!
Yes that's true, reading two chapters together was more fun!!
Apne ff pe mujhse update kyun maang rahi hai 😆
Haan haan likh rahi huin mera chapter, jaldi post kar duingi!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepasub

Nice reassuring chapter it was! Nicely written, revealing just what was needed without the
excess baggage.😊
>> Deeps... .. yes dear.. tried to keep it short without overdose 😉
Calmed my nerves after the hectic day @office n home.
>> Head massage to calm u down more..

Loved this update, but have to say it was a bit short. Would
have loved if you had ended after their first encounter after the true
revelations. But then, it would have still felt shorter. So lets just enjoy as
it is.

>> he he.. there is no end to desires.. 😆

Short Chapter= so will make my comment short too. 😆

>> this comment is anything but short.. 😆

This week it's Pellucid, blacknwhite & Dire revelations,
with some painful but yet pure facts that needed to be revealed to the two
concerned to be lovebirds.😉

>> Ok.. I think I should maintain an index of ur definitions.. 😆.. to be lovebirds.. awee.. this sounds musical.. ☺️

What an adorable couple and parents are they Ameenaji & the Chairman.

Loved the motherly concern that her son should settle well soon. All mothers aspire for this. And

lo the compassionate husband consoling the damp heart of his beloved
begum! And proud parents who are happy to know that their son is still a sought after marriage material! The whole world is so judgmental and we have to live in it!😃

>> Well said dear.. Chairman and his wife, Badepapa & his wife.. all r truly adorable.. 😉.. and the creator of those characters too.. isn't she?? ☺️

Also loved the affection shown by Peddhamma & Badepapa to
Jodha while deciding to either get a new job Vs teasing smirks @old job. What a comparison

These couples are cute and playing cupid in some way or another.

>> and I think it is discernible why badepapa wants her to rejoin.. he can't explain Jodha his reasons.. but he wants her to be back to Regal, if at all she is hell bent on working.. hence the tactful approach.. 😉

>Was heartbroken to know the drastic revelations of Aliya's
infamous deed without informing Ja. An innocent soul sacrificed to please an
egoistic vicious soul. Guess people with raw power do this all the time that we
do not realize. She had the power of freedom and he the pseudo comfort that
they were going to be a family.

>> rightly said dear .. 😭

As the song I quoted earlier, love does not come easy. It's a
balancing act of give and take. Guess they did not strike that balance.

>> 😲😲.. u read my mind here.. 😆

Was terribly upset to know, somebody is behind Jo's life. Why?
And what is the comment by Mr. Chairman that Saradhiji wants to uphold his
brother's noble cause. What is this cause? Is this the one having an impact on
their lives??? Was the gas leak earlier in Hyderabad orchestrated too?
Sounds scaring whoever is behind her

Don't tell me its like a gang or something behind Jo's family for having taken up some noble mission???

>> So many questions, huh .. take a chill pill and relax.. kuch nahi hone wala hain.. 😆😆

so another round of rollercoaster brewing? Hope this does not
churn our tummies that we fall sick?

>> roller coaster ride praptirastu.. of course, with out the churning of ur tummies..

>Loved Jallal rather adored him for his gentlemanly behavior dealing with the situation at the baby shower and for taking strategic decisions regarding his two businesses..
And what followed was indeed a costly settlement bill. Ja could not have faced it without the trust and support of his awesome parents & friends.

>> yes dear.. if his parents were infavorable to the decision, the situation would have been tough for him..😊

Chapter 16: it was Samyu's ek dum bulls eye arrow!.

Chapter 17: Cupid arrows. Ja Jo fell may not be for each other yet, but fell on each other.

Chapter 18: Heartfelt revelations of both Jodha & Jallal's
past tactfully presented by the two gentlemen again! Wow!

>> YES.. YES.. YESSS!!!

Bandwagon of Gentlemen! Woah! Badepapa tactful in dealing with situations including revealing confidential info, yet humble enough to bring out his insecurities on the board table to protect his Jodhu.

>> @ red.. nice term re.. 😆.. as u said they are true gentlemen..

Mr. Chairman calm & cool as a cucumber supporting his son thru tidal waves, lending his helping hand to his friend & lawyer when needed and was enthralled by Jo's marriage fiasco. Very sportive individual indeed.

>> I get it.. everyone is liking the fathers.. 😆

And Jallal maintaining his & his family's dignity at the function. It is said that when one truly loves another, then you would fulfill their wishes without the wish being expressed no matter how painful the
consequence. Guess Jallal did that for Aliya, but she did not revere & deserve that love, because she did not truly love him. Confused.com soul she was! Hope she does not come back demanding more.

>> ok.. why he did it and his reasons lets not estimate now.. its good to know from him.. and Aliya's comeback.. lets wait and watch.. 😆

We saw parched lips, racing heartbeats last time and lappy fall.

Now she is dreaming of the endless teasing smirks, his base voice. To top it, she is yearning to see him once and caressing his FB picture. Not to mention, she is determined to do whatever to make his dream come true! Loveria ho raha hai! Kya yahi pyar hai ya shuroowat hai ? Jallal too did something similar earlier like staring @ her pic on FB. Please one of u send fb request na!

>> too stubborn to send requests.. but eventually a day would come when they don't need to do it at all.. 😉

The turn of events from the last 3 chapters have changed the course of this story so dramatically. Loving it.

Yesterday: Mutual Family friends

Today: Renewal of Boss & employee relationship & a little more

Tomorrow: PBD (Protective Beau, beloved, Dream girl)</font>

For this week, PBD for me is

P: Plummet of Prejudice & most of the pride between Jo & Ja.

B: Bonafide but painful revelations of the past

D: Dramatic change of feelings with hints of concern for each other.


For the above definitions..

👏👏🥳🥳🥳🥳🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪

Loved it. Hopefully, we will get some love bytes 😉in each chapter going forward, as Jallal is going to
visit Regal more often now than before. He surely has reason to now and Abdul is going to enjoy the
tease-a-thon. What about Samyu? Does she know?

>> he he.. love bytes toh hoga.. but not over dose.. 😉

And there is going to be a party na for the 1st Intl project and some nok jhok.
And sweetie R u ever going to reveal the Goa encounter??? And that song n that thorn ?
I am wishing for Ja to visit Jo's house more often too! Obvious reasons !
>> I demand u stop guessing.. 😡😡😡
😆 😉 😉
Oh! Will start nagging u for an update soon dearie
Hug biggest one to u
.. my jumbo hugs to u .. love u

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Posted: 10 years ago
heyyy akka
thanks for concern
well,i am partially succesful in throwing out uninvited guest,feeling much better now nd sorry once again for late comment
now UPDATE,its filled with emotions nd revealations yet really heartfelting akka
parents from both side are really adorable nd yes no doubt all are liking parents more thannleads nd loving u too for creating such a lovely parents to both
jalal's past is heartaching ,jodha's past is now going to be scary!!!!
after reading update ,i am thinking only about "who could it be"who is the one ,jodhu is being followed
even i know its far away from my thoughts
nd last part became my fav i read it for almost 10 times ,that much i loved last part
she is caressing his fb pic nd he is thinking about her all the while in flight now cant wait for their first encounter after all that happened so update soon akka
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti


hi cuty.. congrats on turning a Dazzler.. 🤗 wow.. happy that u liked the update.. will update soon dear.. 😃😃

Thank you so much 🤗and update soon.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti


Hi Harshu.. nice knowing you re.. and thanks for breaking ur silence.. when u share what u feel of the story, even it is one line.. it boosts up the writers morale.. so please try to comment on all stories u read, if possible.. oh u live in Malleswaram.. by the way.. u have to excuse m when I err on routes and distances as I know nothing of Bangalore.. 😆😆.. except Majestic Road.. if some thing goes wrong ask Raksha aka rpeez as she's my Bangalore map.. 😉

will update asap.. and thanks once again for commenting.. 🤗

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