Arshi TS: HUM SAFAR Chapter 3 Updated (12/20) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
wow...it's lovely...waiting for next part...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
It is so interesting!
Khushi is crazy,thinking arnav want her jalebi 🀣
aww girlπŸ˜†
Continue soon and thanx for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hilarious and lovely... πŸ‘

From the time of your reference to Hogwarts you set the stage for the errors... and what fun it turned out to be... It does look like the mighty ASR had no backer where it counts or does it? πŸ˜† 


...and he wants her Jalebi... how Khushi like!!!


Thank you for the PM and will look forward to read more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahahahaha! Looking forward to reading more! :)

Liked the beginning and the grumpy Arnav...who wrote 9 3/4 on his ticket?! LOL! Also Khushi's reply to Arnav daatoing Aman for not booking two tickets...so reminiscent of the coffee shop scene and so quirky! But the quirkiness was countered by the seriousness of Arnav's respect for the armed forces and his family connection to them. 

Good job :)


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Posted: 9 years ago
The rference to Hogwarts confused me for a minute!πŸ˜†
Then I caught on!
Khushi thinks Arnav wants her jalebis?
What will she do if she knows what is actually going on in his mind?πŸ˜‰
Good fun start to the story.
Looking forward to the next part. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
I love it khushi is definitley crazy
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Posted: 9 years ago
I love this zany, theatrical Khushi. She sounds like so much fun. Just what's needed to loosen up the Laad Governor! Watching her eat that jalebi seemed to be a bit of an uncomfortable experience for him ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago

hahahaa...cute
khushi thinks arnav wants her jalebis ...hahaha
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a beauty in front of him, and he wants to ignore... and now he is looking at her lips.. lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
DD, the prologue mentions of IAF and Sukhois and MiGs. Does this have some connection to the story.
And the reference to platform 9 3/4 was indeed nice and humorous. For a moment I thought you are literally sending Arnav to Hogwarts. πŸ˜†

This is indeed going to be an interesting train journey for both of them.πŸ˜‰