Arshi TS: HUM SAFAR Chapter 3 Updated (12/20) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Veena, sorry for commenting late.
Indeed a beautiful ending to an equally beautiful story.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Have always followed your work, one more awesome story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
i have to read it thrice as i got confused many times.sweet ending ...and all the ipk dialogues ..
hey what abt Sr in traib that wud have first :P
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's simply awesome 
Loved it 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Interesting and really awesome story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello baisa!!
It's been forever since I logged in to the forum...happened to do so today and saw your PMs...

This is an absolutely lovely story...the magic of A and K...I have this silly smile on my face now...such a cute, adorable track...thoroughly enjoyed reading it!! 
I loved your plot and the fact that you decided to keep it short n simple...
Your characteristion was amazing...keeping A and K close to the original characters yet there was something so charming about all their interactions

Thank you so much for being such a wonderful writer and for taking the time to write and share your work with us..

Lots of love
maya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh that was beautiful. ..how i wish you could have added a few chapters with more of their romance. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You included all essence of IPK and plotted a cute story.
His way of proposal is really sweet instead of just asking her hand he invited her as his wife to his home.

Thanks ReRe for the link.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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👏 DD, this three shot was so well written, amazing. I loved your description of the railway, and other transport, I think you love the research as well as the writing. Absolutely brill.