Arshi TS: HUM SAFAR Chapter 3 Updated (12/20)

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Hello baisa!!

It's been forever since I logged in to the forum...happened to do so today and saw your PMs...

This is an absolutely lovely story...the magic of A and K...I have this silly smile on my face now...such a cute, adorable track...thoroughly enjoyed reading it!!

I loved your plot and the fact that you decided to keep it short n simple...

Your characteristion was amazing...keeping A and K close to the original characters yet there was something so charming about all their interactions

Thank you so much for being such a wonderful writer and for taking the time to write and share your work with us..

Lots of love

maya

Edited by What_the - 10 years ago

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Oh that was beautiful. ..how i wish you could have added a few chapters with more of their romance. ...

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

You included all essence of IPK and plotted a cute story.
His way of proposal is really sweet instead of just asking her hand he invited her as his wife to his home.

Thanks ReRe for the link.

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@addicted25

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

👏 DD, this three shot was so well written, amazing. I loved your description of the railway, and other transport, I think you love the research as well as the writing. Absolutely brill.