Paasathuku bathil paasamna ulagathula elarume thanoda amma ku kadanalinga,
You deserve appreciation for this dialogue especially.
This is my first comment thanks for giving us such a beautiful story dear dhivya. Hope everything is fine there IAM in so much love with your story for the dialogues and the characterisation, in which one doesn't hurt other. Your story neither has a single harsh word nor villain. Even raji will term karthik with respect and so does karthik. Very well written with decent romance, powerful dialogues in a way it doesn't disturb the readers yet the essence of the scene conveyed fully. Great job.
I do follow your chats in other threads and I suppose you are by person, like your characters in your story except the fact that you talk more. That's good actually, being moody always does not help at all circumstance. Keep smiling always and be yourself.
Waiting for the next. But take care of your health and body as it is the only place one can Live in. Take care.
With much love-
Priya Mohan