~Ashlok FF:Written in stars:2~ch 82-epilogue on pg115,117,118*complete - Page 16

Wow what can I say..you are an amazing writer. .addicted to ur story,it is getting better and better in each update making us to crave for more

like how the story is moving further.. thanks ;-)

Enjoyed your updates... I wonder what's on astha's mind... To bring back shlok and swaths? I am glad she wants to be become independent... Like you said ur earlier update, love and respect can never be forced... She will get it from him someday... Edited by anniejp - 9 years ago

WOW double update thank u. Wonderful update dear Astha is really become mature she forgive Varad but can't forget his rude behavior so just distant herself it's good,she make NA agree to talk with Anjali n now they will stay with Ashlok & she also not accepting Shlok touching her all this thing r clear indication that finally she is behaving like a mature women like it. Astha-Anjali convo put a new light in Astha's thought about Shlok thinking but i want Shlok himself know about his true feeling towards his wife n Astha should concentrate at her study n career n stand as a strong women. Waiting for next treat.

this shlok needs to be tied up to a tree and whipped (no, not in any kinky manner!) to make him remember what he has done! Love astha as always... the moment when sojal told varadh that she has grown quiet a long time back and he failed to notice because he was busy fighting... i  was like, "wow sojal, i love u for giving it to Varadh!"

awesome updates yaar... especially d convo btw astha nd anjali...

Hey Ashley we wait every nite for ur updates 😊 they r awesome n ya dnt feel bad if u dnt get tym toreply coz u give us mindblowing updates n we r all loving it 😉 u r an awesome writer luv ur story. it's becoming very interesting day by day my curiosity is increasing. Thnx for a wonderful FF... .

I loved the update...they have reached a point in life...now i believe they will make an effort to understand each other and truly know each other as individuals then husband and wife. ...anjali being here is going to be great help for astha...

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