~Ashlok FF:Written in stars:2~ch 82-epilogue on pg115,117,118*complete - Page 13 | Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir

Bobbie

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Posted: 9 years ago

They both are stuck...do they love each other?

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r

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Posted: 9 years ago

nice update Ashley, wonder what Astha will do now, can't wait to read more

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sathuraj

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice update dear...

Finally both of the talk...

poor Girl getting heart broken again and again...

Both of the them did lot of mistake...they need to talk a lot and clear their misunderstanding... but its going to be difficult one...

feeling sorry for them...

u r a great writer dear...

u wrote their convo so well...

Thanks for the wonderful treat...

waiting for the next part...

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GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 9 years ago

First of all it was good that the finally talked it all out

Aastha knows thar shlok somehow loves her but i too was heartbroken when he said he would choose Swathi over her :( How can he say that after saying she is a part of him?

Aastha and Shlok are bound to each other for 7 lives and I know right now during this hard time it is a test whether their love is strong enough to survive and to last on!

Loved the update dear... Aastha deserved the Honesty from shlok and he should really rethink how to talk to the woman you are married to xD

Update soon

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Jhuma

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Posted: 9 years ago

Very emotional n much needed conversation between Astha-Shlok from this convo what I feel that still Shlok don't love her,he forgave her fault,he care for her like before but there is no true love from his side for Astha n I think Astha also realize it when he very easily again choose Swati over her that's really pathetic for anyone who love someone so deeply n give her everything but still he don't prefer u over his past my heart also break with her 🥺. I think this time Astha take a mature decision by not living them but how will she live with this broken loveless relation? Excellent update as usual Ashley waiting for next part 😊.

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sruthykarthika

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice update.feel sorry for astha. Plz plz plz update soon and plz pm me.

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tk1730

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi Ashley,

amazing update. I like the heart to heart talk although Shlok choosing Swathi back in time was a damper although understandable. When will Shlok start reading the diaries and find about the drugging and who did what? Please bring that soon. I want him to fall madly in love with her and realize that what he had with Swati would never have lasted and that the love Astha has for him is everlasting. I want her to now to form her own identity and excel in her studies and avoid him and let him come after her. I want him to realize what a precious gift she is.

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596502

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesomee updatee dear keep it up

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Elation

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Posted: 9 years ago

Why am I not hating this shlok? You are making me not to though I want to! Better if he starts listening to her instead of his self- reasonings.

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suma madhuri

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Posted: 9 years ago

U made me cry again, beautifully written, loved it Ashley

Poor Astha, given a chance he still wants to choose swathi, how many times he is gonna hurt her

I mean how could he tell her when she is in that situation, felt bad for her, I don't understand him whether he really cares her or not, may be he might care her like his Tiny but not like his wife

Waiting for next part, I want Astha to go away from him atleast for few days, so that he will get enuff space to decide and realise his feelings.

Thanks for update Ashley, Great job👏

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