I Love Your Enemy : DhruNi (Completed)

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I Love Your Enemy

True love isn't easy to find. But when found, it must be fought for. Because it's not everyday you fall in love.



Status: Completed
Type : Short Story
Rating : General
Genre(s) : Romance, Drama, Humor.
Pairing: DhruNi (Main), ManNan, ManYa, MukShad

Hi...It's my first ever FanFic and it's on Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan (KY2).

*I'm dedicating this FF to Mina because she is the first one to give me courage to write, supported me, listened to all my problems and helped me out. Thank you so much. 😃



Beautiful Banners By ArshiR (Kalpna). Thank You So Much. 😃






The story starts from the answer Dhurv gives of the question he was asked. Lets see how it effects their friendship and change their lives.

Part 1 : Page 1 (113649579)

Part 2 : Page 2 (113661978)

Part 3 : Page 3 (113732756)

Part 4 : Page 5 (113802770)

Part 5 : Page 6 (113949431)

Part 6 : Page 9 (114147451)

Part 7 : Page 11-Last ( 114311647)



One-Shot Sequel - Just Three Words



Edited by anaddictof_KY2 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It short but was a cute update nothing wrong in it...
Edited by dhruvika1991 - 10 years ago
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The start is really interesting. I m eager to know more.
Pls continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for such sweet words. 😊

But I made a mistake. I forgot to add the intro so i added the intro where the first part was and copied the first part next.Sorry for the inconvenience.
Edited by anaddictof_KY2 - 10 years ago
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Part - 1





"I love your enemy" the shy looking boy answered the question he was asked. And his reply earned him four pairs of eyes staring back, which by the way, belonged to four of his best friends.
Suddenly one of them bust laughing, breaking the grave silence "Wow...humara Dhruv mazak bhi kar leta hain."

"Shut up Cabir!" an irritated Mukti said.

"What?!? He can't be serious. Are you?" Cabir turned towards Dhruv with skeptical eyes
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When Dhruv didn't reply the answer really hit him and that's when he started to freak out. One of his best friends - Loves - their enemy!


It's true they really don't like anyone but there are only three people in the world who can pass as their enemies and only by thinking of them makes Cabir want to pull his hair out. Even if by any chance Dhruv loved Harshad its was okay with him but thinking about any of the two 'Behenjis' with his best friend makes him want to puke whatever he ate that day.


Cabir started to look at the other three and desperately praying that all of them or at least one of them will shout out "April Fool" but that did not happen.

"W..wh...which one?" Alya stuttered.

"Nandini" the answer came. But it wasn't Dhruv who answered, instead it was Manik. He was still staring at Dhruv but no expression was visible on his face. And to make their nightmare come true Dhruv nodded.


"What the HELL!!!" Mukti snapped.

"Mukti calm down" Cabir said in a robot like voice.

"Calm Down! You are asking me to calm down?!?" Mukti replied while pacing the room.

"Manik you knew about this?" Alya asked gripping Manik's arm firmly. He only just sat there motionless.


When Manik didn't say anything Dhruv spoke up "Nahi. Usse nahi patta tha. kisi ko nahi patta hain... who to bass tum shab ne puchan isiliye. Mujhe pata tha tum saab esehi react karonge." Dhruv stood up with guitar on his hand and hurt visible in his eyes. "Boohath raat ho chuki hain mujhe jana chahiye. And don't worry itna serious nahi hain...Who to esehi..." he trailed off. Then swinging the guitar on his shoulder he walked out of the room.


~Author's Note~

1) It's my first FF so please spare the mistakes and also hindi is not my native language so, sorry if there is any spelling mistake in the dialogues. (you can also tell me the correct spelling) 😊

2) Criticisms and obviously compliments are most welcome. 😃
Edited by anaddictof_KY2 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hwy where is the update i vanished
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh no, it didn't vanish. I just replaced the first part with the intro and then updated part-1 again.And I'm working on part-2 and will update soon. Bear with me. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was ur first tym huh?!!
Amazingly well written
Hope we get the 2nd part real soon
PS u shuld write more ;-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Basically I am a Manan fan but I like dhruni too...
Nice concept..well written..
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks. It really means a lot 😃
And yes I will update the 2nd part soon. Actually today 🥳

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