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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome n interesting.
Loved to read more. So excited about it.
I think its a ring in the pocket.
Update next part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was soo awsum..
i cant wait to read wat happens nxt
soo very interesting.. nd entertaining..
lovd it totally..
ty for pm..
update sooon...:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oooh finally !!!

Loved the chapter so much

Story line is amazing

Your writing is impeccable 

I love the Harry potter reference 😃

And omg people who bite into Kit Kat shouldn't be allowed to eat Kit Kat 

Ayaan-humeira love em 

I wonder if asad felt anything seeing zoya's oh-so-awesome boobs 😃

Is it a ring??locket?? In his pocket ???

Awaiting the next one eagerly :) 

P.S. I love zoya's subconscious 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was superb..was in splits in some parts...like where she thought she had tampons in her purse to throw  at him...lol..😆😆😆
Pls update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great start!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderfull n amaizng...
interesting...
fabulous...
mindblowing...
very interesting...
zoya conversation with her subconsiuos mind is fabulous...
humeira is with ayaan..
guess its a ring in the jacket...
asad n zoya are attracted to each other...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am way too excited to read this..
Loved the chapter.. It was so funny..
Zoya's inner convo with herself.. LOL..
Do pm me when you update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous start!!⭐️ Please update soon!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh it was awesome.. Like seriously I was,laughing throughout the chapter.. You know what was epic.. Zoya's subconscious.. Hahaha.. I swear it was awesome..
And ZF3 ... Hahahahahahah... Too good!!
Well, they are enemies.. I am sure not for too long..
And the zoo comeback was epic.. Seriously I am surely gonna try It on someone.. You'd be amazed how many people say that to me..
Love the story.. I sent you a buddy request.. Please PM me for the next one,, :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Zoya and her self talk and swearing superb
Pls give Asad's Pov also to spice up the situations..

😊