Hi Kalpana, sad to know your down with fever. I happen to be sailing in the same boat these days.. π
And the feverish effect was very much apparent on your recent update. It was lacking the magic of you! Though it was good but not magical like your previous updates.
I sadly didn't like Viren departing from this story. He was a good character and a genuine friend to Geet. Even though he knew his love is unrequited but still he cared for Geet and advised her not to let Maan ruin her respect and dignity.
Although, I highly doubt that Maan would ever do that, now that he love her.
Geet was confused with all the things Viren told her and her poor little brain wasn't able to decipher Maan's actions.
Dance practice was nice and the convo too but I was expecting much here. A more intense and deeper conversation.
Take it as constructive criticism here.
Get well soon and take care of your health.
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