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Posted: 2014-09-15T12:10:41Z

KOI AAP SA




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Prolouge


A girl is playing in a big park with her mom. After some time her mom angage in talks with her friend and girl saw a puppy & start following him and lost in the crowd. When she cant see her mom there she start crying.
A boy woh is sitting on bench near her came to her and asked her
Boy - kya hua kyun ro rahi ho?
Girl - mamma mil nai lahi(rahi) hai. Lagta hai woh kho gayi hai.
Boy (smiled at her) - woh kho gayi ya tum?
Girl (sobbed) - pata nai muje.
Boy - koi baat nai hum dono unhe dhund lege. Tum rona band karo aur chalo.
After searching in the park, the girl point a lady who is searching her daughter.
Girl - MAMMA!!! MAMMA!!!
Girl's mom - mahi kaha chali gayi thi tum. Kyn har waqt muje pareshan karti ho. Kaha chali gayi thi?
Mahi - hum toh yahi the,aap hi nai the yaha.
Girl's mom - ha ha tum hi sahi ho aur baki sub galat. Aacha ye kaun hai ab ye bhi bata do?
Mahi - ye mele fliend(frd) hai inho ne hi aapko dhunda hai.
Mom - thank you beta aap isse yaha lekar aaye. Waise aapka naam kya hai.
Mahi - aale hai maine to naam puacha hi nai. Fliend (frd) aapka naam kya hai.
Boy - par aapne toh puacha hi nai ki main aapka frd hu ya nai aur decide kar liya toh aap muje kisi bhi naam se bula sakti hai.
Mahi - aacha toh main tume MEET kahkal bulaugi. Mahi ka meet. Kyn kaisa laga.
Meet - bhut acha laga.
Mahi - Mamma acha name haina.
Mom - ha bahut acha hai. Ab ghar chale. Say bye to ur frd.
Mahi - bye meet kal miloge na humse.
Meet - jarur miluga mahi. Bye

Yes the girl name is Mahi and she is 3 year old and boy is Mahi ka Meet age 7 yr old.

Uss din ke baad woh dono roz milte aur bhut khelte. Ek din meet ne kaha ki kal uska birthday hai toh mahi khush ho gayi aur nxt day meet ke liye uska gift lekar aayi jo unki jindgi ban gaya.

Mahi - happy bilday meet. Abse main har bal tume aise hi wish kalugi.Dekho main tumale liye gift lekal aayi hu.
Meet - thanku dear bt gift kyn muje wish kiya wahi kafi hai.
Mahi - alle ye gift hum dono ke liye hai. Dekho isme 2 chain aul ek locket hai. Mumma ne bataya tha ki ye locket 2 peice me devide ho jata h toh ek tun lakho(rakho) ek main.
Meet - thanku my cutiepie.

Unne kya pata tha ki ye unki aakri mulakat hogi aur fir kismat unhe kuch samah ke liye juda kar degi.

AFTER 20 YEARS

Girl in her early twenties standing on terrece with a locket in hand.
Girl - happy birthday meet.

On the otherside a man is lying in his bed with another part of locket.
Man - kaha ho tu mahi, tumne muje aaj bhi wish nai kiya.kaha chali apne meet ko bina bataye?



IF U LIKE IT PLZ HIT THE LIKE BUTTON AMD ANCOURGE ME TO WRITE MORE WITH UR COMMENTS.

INDEX

PART 1 - PAGE 3
PART 2 - PAGE 6
PART 3 - PAGE 10
PART 4 - PAGE 13
PART 5 - PAGE 15
PART 6 - PAGE 19
PART 7 - PAGE 23
PART 8 - PAGE 31
PART 9 - PAGE 34
Edited by chahat_mannat - 2015-07-07T03:20:00Z
Posted: 2014-09-15T21:45:15Z
nice prologue, continue
Posted: 2014-09-15T23:11:17Z
Hey chahat!
Intresting prologue. ..
My personal suggestion would be don't give a character sketch!
It would be interesting to know the characters as the story progressWink

Waiting for the first part!Big smile
Posted: 2014-09-16T00:56:05Z
Originally posted by kabslocks


nice prologue, continue


Thanxs dear.
Will continue soon
Posted: 2014-09-16T00:56:49Z
Originally posted by _lehar_


nice story


Thanxs dear
Posted: 2014-09-16T01:00:29Z
Originally posted by sporthy_smile28


Hey chahat!
Intresting prologue. ..
My personal suggestion would be don't give a character sketch!
It would be interesting to know the characters as the story progressWink

Waiting for the first part!Big smile


Hi dear.
Thanxs 4 liking it.
I m also thinking same abt character sketch.
Will update soon.
And give me ur suggestion to encourage me.
Posted: 2014-09-16T02:02:59Z
intrstng prolouge waiitng 4 d updateBig smile
Posted: 2014-09-16T03:59:26Z
very nice
continue soon

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