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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: HemaG
oh..i m second again...
pretty...not.fair
:-\

You really need to read the bedtime story i have written

1 and 2 ka chakkar chod do

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: HemaG
first like frm me...uhhh

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: HemaG
seems a super long update
ll read now
may be ll.comment.today
or max tomorrow

Yeah it is too long

Mini SS with long updates

I want your and preeti's comments by morning they will make me 😃

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Zarqa

@indian_beauty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Wow superrr long update me likey and I repeat myself Ananya is too adorable <3 Shiv was also very adorable in this update <3 Anandi is such a child😆 ananya-anandi convo thru bears was cute...love the way shiv got anandi n ananya to patch up...such a sweetheart he is <3 the talk he had with both AA was really nicely done...tea date was such a sweet happy family moment *puts kaala tika* Shiv nikamma honeymoon ka soch raha hai😆😆 and then uske baad itni difficulty to ask wifey out gosh jab actual honeymoon par jaana ke time aayega tab kya karega😆 Shiv gotta glimpse of Ananadi's painful past n he seemed disturbed by it already...poor anandi wonder how much she suffered 😔 wud love to see AnSh have a conversation about it but it was very sweet n caring of Shiv to take care of Anandi...he needs to stop acting all khadus n kadak n get in his real self already! Haaa so my guess was right shiv did forget ananya's under garments😆 but its okay uska first time tha na toh maaf kiya😛 but what the hell was up with that story...stock exchange? lmao yeh bhi koi kids ki bedtime story hui shiv is just 😆 Ahan I was so waiting for ananya to demand for a sibling glad she told shiv n shiv babu thinks its never gonna happen ya right😛 aww anandi actually worried for shiv<3 what did she see in his car😲 yaaarrr these cliffhangers na scare me and one more thing why doesn't Shiv have a sower in his bathroom 🤔 im sure there's a reason related to his past...hai na?? chao ab pleaseee update soon...teaser bhi chalega😛

And take care of urself n ur hand😳

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Zarqa

@indian_beauty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#615

BTW not the first one to comment yet the first to comment on the update 😎😆

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diptigunderia

@diptigunderia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#616

this is awesome..

very nicely written... you write emotions very well!!

we can really picture this with our eyes closed!!

suspense at the end ? oh come on...

please update soon...

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#617

great update

loved the family bonding

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PreetiSJ

@PreetiSJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: HemaG
oh..i m second again...
pretty...not.fair
:-\

haha... sorry 😛... i thought i would be late, because i was sitting in class... and usually you reply as soon as the update comes... but this time it had already been i think 20 minutes, but my teacher finished teaching, and when i checked i was still the first one 😊... ok next time i will try to give you chance to be first lol 😆