AnSh Mini SS: HumSafar Thread #1 - Page 64

Originally posted by: PreetiSJ

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aww ... such a lovely update...

anandi also avoiding ananya

ananya is soo smart, and what an attitude, when she thinks that it should be her avoiding Anandi, not the other way around haha ⭐️

ira and ananya's bond is pretty good too

what i love most is the bears that ananya has, it's soo adorable

and the way she talked to anandi indirectly through the bears

the conversation between shiv and anandi about his favourite colour was amazing!! anandi stopped calling ananya her daughter, finally!! and and and shiv remembers what colour anandi was wearing on the first morning of their marriage... i agree with anandi , he only acts like a kadwa karela, but from his heart he really cares ..❤️

ananya, again, when she says that just because anandi is helping her with her dress doesnt mean that they're butty again... such a cutie ❤️.. and overall like how she's showing her anger, i love little kids when they're upset over something and try to show their anger 😊

and then after that, another ansh scene... when he comes home and he smiles when he sees her !! ...and the conversation that followed was very nice .. shiv has a very nice way of making anandi understand, and getting her to agree with him...

the broken button part, aww, what a cute way of getting ananya to talk to anandi, again, shiv knows how to handle ananya and anandi, or as he would say, his two babies ❤️... and, anandi and shiv had an eyelock, yay!! 👏

Now mamma will always be papa's plus one. If papa is invited to a party then mamma will go with him. So Shiv has realized that he is married now, and he is giving anandi space in his life... so exciting!

Ananya's cute reply about having only two cups of tea... it shows how clever she is 😉.. but anandi quickly says that she can manage without tea haha

and the conversation at the tea party about why anandi had kept shiv away from ananya and about the step parents and everything was awesome!! it was so good to see the whole family bonding moment there... shiv and anandi were talking without fighting/arguing, even if it was just for ananya, it was a good achievement 😊

and ananya again with her teddy bears, wanting to make her parents friends ❤️

shiv thought ira was asking him to take anandi on a honeymoon... he got teased by ira haha ... and ananya like an innocent child questioning what a honeymoon is.. shiv also acts like a little child: "Ok anything for Ananya. Ask mamma which movie she wants to see and where she wants to have dinenr I will take her." ... Shiv was like why do I have to? for a second there, I actually imagined a little kid sternly being asked to do chores 😆... and then when he actually had to ask her it was such an awkward conversation on his part... and anandi ke reply to mast the... sarcasm to the max haha it was awesome!

Shiv is unable to see Anandi sad , aww how cute

the way ananya cried when seeing her mother in pain, no words, i totally understand how she feels... especially being an only daughter, i'm also an only daughter and i have two brothers, me and my mom are really close, she shares everything with me and i always understand how she feels... i see the same thing in ananya and anandi's bond 😃 ❤️

shiv immediately got a hot water bag for anandi, he's so caring

and aww anandi was remembering her past , i loved the way shiv melted seeing her like that, and tried to hold back his tears 👍🏼 ❤️

ananya asked for a sibling, shooo cuteee...😃

lol the bedtime story was hilarious😆... shiv told it in his own kind of language, haha i loved it 👏

and shiv got up again and again the whole night to look after anandi , he's so caring from the inside, just doesn't show it ...

i love the joking kind of fights between anandi and shiv... like about the tea being made by sanjeev kapoor haha 😊 ... and i totally agree with anandi, shiv is really nice, but he puts on a mask of being rude 👎🏼

also, shiv said that he's ready to talk to her about the past whenever she's ready ❤️

shiv went through a lot of efforts to win the bet he made against anandi, even if it meant getting totally soaked with water while giving ananya a bath haha😆... but he forgot one essential 😆

loved ananya's effort to make her mother cheer up... and shivraj shekhar , sorry THE shivraj shekhar is capable of being embarrassed !!

i love how shiv waited outside ananya's school the whole day .. i was talking to my mom today and she was telling me how my brother always wanted her to wait outside the whole day, and until she promised she would do so, he wouldn't go inside school haha

omg... wonder what anandi saw? ... can't wait for more

Preeti you know when I receive such detailed comments it is then I realize that i have been successful with my writing

I feel that the readers has read each and every word and had visualized what i did at the time of writing

It connects me to the reader

There were many last minute changes

The nok jhok comes naturally to me as being a Maaneet and AsYa fan had huge doses of them

I made a change when Shiv and Ananya come to the room to TC of Anandi in the first draft I made Ananya witness it but I thought yaar this is too much she wil need to go to the psychiatrist abhi se

So then made shiv send her away

The bed time story OMG I was like seriously what should I do daddy's usually don;t know them and could not get Vin Diesel out of my head from The Pacifier where he tells Lulu a bed time story

Shiv the workaholic what can he come up with other than this The Economic times yaar it was lying in front of me so that idea came from there once upon a time nahi in the economic times

Ananya Anandi silent treatment I was and am so like Ananya even now; scold me and I am the queen of giving silent treatment

AnSh and ShAnya and ShAnAya moments well i love family bonding time

Ira also i like in a +ve way scheming granny and Grand daughter

the HM thing I seriously 😆 I wanted it to come to Shiv first

The entire dining table scene of AnSh I had fun

The Ananya 😳 part in the morning it is based on a real life incident 😳😳😳

Thank you so much dear for the fantatic fabulous comment I am really 😃

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

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Originally posted by: indian_beauty

Wow superrr long update me likey and I repeat myself Ananya is too adorable <3 Shiv was also very adorable in this update <3 Anandi is such a child😆 ananya-anandi convo thru bears was cute...love the way shiv got anandi n ananya to patch up...such a sweetheart he is <3 the talk he had with both AA was really nicely done...tea date was such a sweet happy family moment *puts kaala tika* Shiv nikamma honeymoon ka soch raha hai😆😆 and then uske baad itni difficulty to ask wifey out gosh jab actual honeymoon par jaana ke time aayega tab kya karega😆 Shiv gotta glimpse of Ananadi's painful past n he seemed disturbed by it already...poor anandi wonder how much she suffered 😔 wud love to see AnSh have a conversation about it but it was very sweet n caring of Shiv to take care of Anandi...he needs to stop acting all khadus n kadak n get in his real self already! Haaa so my guess was right shiv did forget ananya's under garments😆 but its okay uska first time tha na toh maaf kiya😛 but what the hell was up with that story...stock exchange? lmao yeh bhi koi kids ki bedtime story hui shiv is just 😆 Ahan I was so waiting for ananya to demand for a sibling glad she told shiv n shiv babu thinks its never gonna happen ya right😛 aww anandi actually worried for shiv<3 what did she see in his car😲 yaaarrr these cliffhangers na scare me and one more thing why doesn't Shiv have a sower in his bathroom 🤔 im sure there's a reason related to his past...hai na?? chao ab pleaseee update soon...teaser bhi chalega😛

And take care of urself n ur hand😳

I rally love the long comments

They tell me that the reader has really read it nad I have been successful in giving the reader kind of a visual update as you can imagine everything that is happening

Anandi, Shiv and Ananya are a made for each other family

the Anandi and Ananya scene talking through the bears just came to me; i ma so happy it came out nicely

Like Anandi asked Shiv Why dies he put on a mask in front of her; There is a reason the same way why he does not have a shower in the bathroom That will come up in Chapter 5

I too LOL when I wrote about shiv saying about HM and the way he asked her out OMG favor kar raha tha kya? Anandi ke answers sahi the If someone asks me like this yehi answers that guy will get

The AnSh convo with Annaya at the tea party I have imagined it better in full on hindi but chalo this is also good Le praising myself

Ira said na sometimes she feels AnSh are also kids like Ananya

I enjoyed writing this one so much

Thank you once again for the detailed comment

Yes I am taking care of my hand. TY