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This was one epic update...
I have to read it again before commenting...but one word for now "WOW"
EDITED:Finally...sorry for the late reply...my keypad of the lappy went 4 a toss and had to be replaced!
Honestly, I just loved this looong update and I have read it at least 4 times now and no, we will never get tired of ArShi scenes...keep 'em coming!😛
Part A:
Khushi's reaction was to be expected but I love how Ratna is so protective of her...and them recalling her childhood, trust me thse elders don't get it...they can be mortifying as hell, u just want the earth to suck you down and that too arnav providing the fodder...poor girl!
But i really thin khushi is upto something...she wont let the humiliation pass over just like that...i dont seem to be able to figure out exactly what she is planning but her affections to arnav n d bold side reinforcing is wayy too abrupt .
Part B and C:
Damn, khushiis literally a firecracker from hereon...we were all like she is all talk n no action but she clearly proved us wrong...I'm really surprised at her boldness and her dirty talking...that was really unexpected...i wonder why arnav isn't suspecting something...though I must say I just love this naughty side of hers...and those one liners which leaves arnav stumped...mashallah! Kya diya hai boss...I'm loving her in this avatar...arnav is sure a goner. But I never knew she could be such a tease and I never imagined that all those fantasies she had about making out wildly with arnav would actually manifest itself in this way through her flirtatious lines!
And what a masterstroke that was, her sending him a pic of her body and making him wait agitatedly...khushi has surpassed all of my expectations n i couldnt be happier..😆
Part D:
Arnav's desperation to meet khushi is adorable as well as hilarious...i can so picturise him threatening akash so that he doesn't ask any more questions..LOL
And Khushi is again the perfect tease to fan his agitation n libido some more 😆
The wy she literally posed n modelled for him...awww...
The terrace scene...uff...so much hotness n passion...u write beautifully n every emotion comes through in all your scenes...i can literally visualise it all happening in front of my eyes.
Okay...so she walked away after being thoroughly kissed by him...hmmm?wonder what that's all about? See that's why I still suspect Khushi...she is definitely upto something...why do I get the feeling that at the end she will cockblock him massively?😉😆
Part E:
Oh that ws beautiful...I love how u take those original scenes and make them more believable and even more awesome with your little twists...I actually liked the fact that K had a real accident n it wasn't merely just a scare...the impact is even more now...and finally the long awaited kiss! It was perfect! OOh , how I've been waiting for it...we all have been I guess...both r totally involved now..I wonder how K will react to it n how she will deal with it from hereon coz clearly that was something which was unprecedented in her scheme of things...yes, she wanted that since ages but her erratic behaviour also shows that all isnt as we see right now.
And lastly, it was a fantastic update and the only con is that now we'll pester u even more to write the next part since I just can't wait...hope you are doing fine on the personal n professional front n wish u a very happy new year!
Edited by medha16 - 9 years ago
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