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Posted: 10 years ago
WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE
IM DYINGGG🤢
Edited by nadine_lopez_48 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update.
So, Panchi want Vrushali to convince Vasusen,
I like the line Wife as convincing as Narad.its too good.
I want Vasusan & Parth patch up.I love Kaju.
great going.Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nicely written👏
And reverse psychology, good idea!
And Vasusen will come around...after all how far can he go without his wife😆
And Paarth is still trying to convince Panchi Good for her!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
hlw di 😊
i am new here... used to read ur story online be4 i joined forum... 😳
u r such an Amazing writer... 👏
all the chapters r just Wow

n this update was awesome as always 👍🏼

after so long we'll get to see our Parth Panchi together 😃

excited 4 the next update... pls di update soon 😊

ps: di can i get pms?? pls 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finished all the chapters. Aren't you proud of me? Rofl
Can't leave detailed comments now but will try to return with some.
I want them to Continue the quest. Adventurer in me calls unfortunately so I don't mind if paarth never wins his queen back. But I would like to see panchi using her fire powers. Or did they not stay with her?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sania_58

nice update.
So, Panchi want Vrushali to convince Vasusen,
I like the line Wife as convincing as Narad.its too good.
I want Vasusan & Parth patch up.I love Kaju.
great going.Continue soon.

Thanks a lot sania_58. That line, I extracted that from a sholk.😳 KaJu patch up is on its way.😃 Hope that you.ll enjoy the upcoming chapter.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

very nicely written👏
And reverse psychology, good idea!
And Vasusen will come around...after all how far can he go without his wife😆
And Paarth is still trying to convince Panchi Good for her!😊

Thanks a lot, Mamta. I think if one tries his wife cannot go too far without him too. See it works both ways.😆 We'll see how ParChi patch up very soon!


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiasaba68

hlw di 😊
i am new here... used to read ur story online be4 i joined forum... 😳
u r such an Amazing writer... 👏
all the chapters r just Wow

n this update was awesome as always 👍🏼

after so long we'll get to see our Parth Panchi together 😃

excited 4 the next update... pls di update soon 😊

ps: di can i get pms?? pls 😳

Yay! New readers. Thanks for all the praise.😳 Never knew my ParChi is that popular.😆 Sure dear you will get PMs. 😉 I never miss that for a new reader😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AryaDrayCoByrne

Finished all the chapters. Aren't you proud of me? Rofl

Can't leave detailed comments now but will try to return with some.
I want them to Continue the quest. Adventurer in me calls unfortunately so I don't mind if paarth never wins his queen back. But I would like to see panchi using her fire powers. Or did they not stay with her?

Thank you Arya! You know what? I was getting desperate for reading your final review.😳 Don't worry dear upcoming updates will have a lot of adventure. I have planned a lot of castle adventure for the upcoming updates.😉 But Panchi will lose her fire power in the next update.
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Chapter 43 : Traces We Follow


Panchi opened the door. But there stood the strongest and the weakest strandle of her life, Paarth. When she lost him, it was her strongest strandle while gaining him was her weakest strandle. Yet, she knew it was him, who could complete her with completing himself. It was because of Arjun that Draupadi could smile even though here sorrows were endless. Pains would rush out when a throb of his heart was felt by her. It was this heart which had clutched her so tightly that even when she was away from his, her memories were embodiments of the golden past, a time which rests.

"What do you want?" she asked him coldly.

He answered with an ever pacifying smile, "Just a happy heart with complete contentment!".

"I don't sell it. Sorry!" And she turned around to get herself free of his sight's hold.

But he held her hand and told, "But I buy it!".

"You asked me some questions, a few days ago. I am here to answer them. And in my answer lies the question - Why were we able to be happy even after all those happenings?" He told her coldly, still holding her hand, a gesture to never let her go away.

"How can you say we were happy! Which mother would be happy to lose her son?" Panchi asked him angrily.

"But a wife would be happy to celebrate her husband's victory! Panchi, if Draupadi lost her son in the war, she got Arjun's love in return. Yes, that love was not expressed and presented but it was still felt by her because they were connected through a string which intervened their breaths. Each cry by Draupadi was heard by Arjun but his thoughts and actions restricted his from aiming his Gandeev!" He explained her with tears flowing out of his eyes.

"Draupadi was dragged like animals and treated like slaves. Why did Arjun keep shut at that moment?" She asked him with agony.

"You said Draupadi was dragged. I say Arjun was dragged. That day, people didn't question about Draupadi's conduct because she proved herself pure when God saved her dignity. But Arjun's invincible valour was questioned was questioned. It was Draupadi who was staked but Arjun lost his heart. It was Draupadi who was disrobed but Arjun lost his love. That day, Draupadi's dignity was saved by the Lord but he could not save Arjun's love. From that day, Arjun was no more a warrior-prince, he became a lost warrior. A warrior who craved for love but never got it." Paarth explained her with all his heart. He was an open book but these pages were never read by anyone. Probably because they were hidden from the rest of the world. For, they say, the true book lies in emotions not it words.

"I..." Panchi was completing when Vrushali shouted, "Panchi ... Paarth ... Come here!"

They knew that they cannot afford to unmask their emotions in front of all. Hence, wiping the drops of emotions and covering the tears of her with a smile, they went down.

"What happened bhabhi?" Asked Panchi.

"Panchi, probably your efforts and heart has turned Vasusen weak. He agrees with all your thoughts as were are gonna continue with the quest!" Vrushali told them with joy.

Vrushali knew very well that Vasusen's opinion did not play a major role in the quest. If all of them wanted, they could continue against his wish, but it was their hearts and emotions which drew all of them to stand behind Vasusen in the quest.

"Wow! That is some great news!" Shubhi jumped with excitement. The bubbly her was not ready to continue of her mission to bring her Aarya and Jiji closer. For, they were always close but not ready to shorten the distance and she knew that the quest was the best way to do that.

"Panchi! We need your control on fire to trace the location for the Amber Room. You need to concentrate!" Govind told her like a true guide. Who could better guide them, the Guide to the whole world!

Panchi closed her eyes and went deep into meditation. Concentrating on just the truth. Truth which is neither created nor destroyed. Truth which is neither solid nor physical. Truth which is formless and divine. Truth which is God! Her soul prayed, "O! The Guide to the World. Lead me to the location of the Diamond of Zeus".

Slowly, she opened her eyes.

"What did you see?" Shubhi asked excitedly.

"It room is encased by walls from three sides. It is in a big castle. Infact a very big one. The castle is located amid red trees. The leaves of the trees are red and rush into the fortress as its gates open. I cannot tell the exact location. This is all I saw." Panchi told then, disappointed.

"You cannot but I can!" Nakul called out from behind.

"The description matched the environment around the Benettons' Castle, located on the outskirts of London. The trees there are ever-red. The Castle is large and vast. With rumours that its center houses uncountable wealth. Maybe the wealth is the Amber Room?" He told all of them.

"How will we find out?" Sahdev asked.

"There is only one way out!" Bheem smirked.

"We are gonna go and check it ourselves!" Govind told them.

TBC
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago

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