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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#911

Originally posted by: AryaDrayCoByrne
Next seven read! What an entry by the bad guys, I thought it was the Atlantis boys. Bheem is so nice and I'm glad vasusen and vrushali will finally marry though he does need to sort out his relationship with his mom. It's interesting how you twisted the characters slightly and I got your k3g reference. Too bad the bad guys probably won't stay in the hall either.

Aaah! So you have come too far reading. Well hope you liked it.😃

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#912

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady
lovely chap di, truely emotional 😭
Maata Satyawati had wishes, but then why, did we and our children suffer? Pitamah Bhishma vowed to protect Hastinapur, why then did we lose our loved ones? Mamashri Shakuni wanted revenge, why was I disrobed of self respect? Maata Gandhari blindfolded herself, why did we lose our joy? It was Taatshri Dhritrashtra who was blind, why did happiness run out of our sights? It was Duryodhan who was proud and had greed for more, why did those innocent people of Hastinapur lose their loved ones? You brother, Vasusen, Maharathi Karna, he was a warrior a great warrior, why did he call me a prostitute in a court full of people? You were a warrior, why did you not utter a word when your wife was insulted? Why did they treat me like that even though I was the empress of Aryavart? Go Paarth first search an answer for these questions, then ask me something else." Panchi said.
this paragraph was just wow . i loved the way u expressed the questions that can never be answered . but please di make ArDi one fast na.
thank u for the pm

Thank you Sam! That was a paragraph written by heart and penned by thoughts.😳

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#913

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream
what an update...
Panchi and Uloopi still at it...why cant uloopi leave Panchi alone?!
And a rift between brothers...sad
Loved your well laid out arguments from Panchi when she talks to Paarth
I guess he will have to come up with some good answers to win her back!

As I said earlier, some things about Ulupi and Iravan are under hard covers. When the covers will be removed maybe the thoughts will be different.😊 Thanks a lot Mamta.

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#914

Originally posted by: 8520NK
Finally, I am able to post here!
The update was so beautifully written Angela! All the feelings were so well expressed! A treat to read it!
I loved the way Panchali asked Parth for answers to the sufferings in their past! It was straight from the heart I felt!
And I HATE ULOOPI and I mean it! She's such a pain! The reply that Panchali gave her was awesome, such a well given slap!
I really hope all becomes well with my Parth and Panchali and also with the family!
Update soon!😃

Aah! I was waiting eagerly for your reply.😃 Thanks a lot Navi. I will update tomorrow. And hopefully you'll like it.😳

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#915

Chapter 41 Essense of Beauty

With grace and pride, she walked ahead. Today, she decided, this matter will come to an end. All the problems of their life will end today. Today was the day when Ulupi would lose and she will win. Entering into the room she remembered each and every word which Ulupi had said to her. Every word, which was laid out after plotting against them to pull them back and stop the quest. But Ulupi was going to lose. She took a deep breathe and said, "So here you all are sitting devastated and defeated".
"What do you mean by that, Panchi? What do you mean by 'devastated and defeated'?" Asked Sahdev, perplexed.
"I mean defeated. We all are defeated. We could not find the gems. We are so much defeated. The quest has ended. We should better leave from here and go back to India. What is the use if we cannot continue with the quest?" She told with absolute disconcern and carelessness.
"What are you saying, Panchi? And why are we defeated?" Paarth questions her.
"Paarth, when a baby learns to walk and falls in the first trial; his mother thinks that it will hurt her child a lot and prefers to let him crawl for all his life. Right?" Panchi asked him.
"No! She tries again. She helps the baby a bit, to walk. But she never gives up. A failure cannot be an end to a journey. If you have obstacles in your path you have to cross them and reach your destination." Paarth told her patiently, as a husband explains his wife.
"Well, then why did we all give up? I ask you all - Have we not given up because Vasusen and Paarth had a fight? Don't we think that the quest will never start again? Then why should we waste time here in London. Let's just return to our country!" Panchi explained them. She would never give up at any cost but sometimes the reverse works.
"We all have sacrificed some or the other parts and wishes of our lives to make this quest a success. Why then? Now we stop and sit like defeated idiots." Panchi asked them.
Then she went to Vrushali and asked her, "Vrushali bhabi! You have left your dream to serve the villagers and work for their betterment." Then turning towards Nakul she asked,"You wanted to be a model. You forgot that at once. Sahdev, your dream of becoming a scientist. You sacrificed it. Shubhi, you wanted to become a biomedical engineer and serve the country. You forgot it at once. Paarth, you wanted..." Panchi was completing when Paarth cut in.
"... I wanted you." He told her.
"No Paarth. You didn't want me. You wanted to work with me in the NGO. But we had to forget that. Why? All because of this quest. Which, today is nothing but a forgotten mission. Never to start again. I guess that is what God ,wants to happen!" She said and turned to leave when a sound rose from behind.
"I agree with you!" Shubhi shouted. "We have all sacrificed our dreams. And I am not going to let this mission end now. Either I die or the mission completes."
Panchi now went to Vrushali and said, "It is said that a wife is as convincing as Narad. She can convince her husband easily. Vrushali bhabi you have to try!"
"But... Panchi... Me! How will I..." Vrushali looked confused and asstained.
"You have to try for us!" Shubhi requested her.
"Yes! You have to try and convince Vasusen bahi to started the quest again." Paarth's voice rose. Others supported that call.
"Okay! Then, I'll talk to him." Vrushali agreed at last.
Panchi smiled. "The best I wish!" , she said and went to her room.
Though the problem was resolved. But still Paarth had a task to complete he had to convince his queen and win her trust back. He had committed the mistake once but would not commit it again. This, with objectives in his head and confidence on his love he went behind her.
TBC

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago

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not.here

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Posted: 10 years ago

#916

So read up to 30 now. Felt bad for panchi but eager to see how she takes the truth.

can I request something? Hopefully it is not too much but will you be indexing the recent chapters so that I can get to them without going through comments? That way I can enjoy just your story. :D

I don't like ulupi and I think she is working for the bad people. She stole the mirror didn't she?

To be honest, I want to hear more about the quest. What is the lok something that radha mentioned?