OWNED-Chapter 1 (NEW) - Page 4

Anita

@neet2407

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

wonderful prologue and first chapter - hot and intense and dark - so glad you decided to continue it

very similar to the Rangrasiya that was initially promised to us!

Can't wait for the next update!

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

IF-Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

Wowww...what an amazing start... It is surely very interesting and captivating... Loving rudra here...he is in his element totally...

Can't wait to read more

Continue soon

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297355

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

Good start but too short update

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

This is a good one...thanx 4 continuing
will be waiting for more.

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Hakuna_Matata11

@Hakuna_Matata11

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 18

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome story loved it.
Plzzz cont. it
And pm me.

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tvbuf

@tvbuf

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Very nicely written

Do continue soon

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vandana73

@vandana73

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Oh God !!This Rudra is really a Jallad ! Wonder what is the store for Paro ,how much heartbreak will she have to go through !!!

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