OWNED-Chapter 1 (NEW)

Posted: 9 years ago
Hey! The link is for the Prologue, Now Chapter 1 is up!

Note: I usually add a pic to set the tone of the Chapter, it is not to show the exact placement of the characters.

Prologue: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3970316


OWNED


Chapter 1

 

She stiffened as he stood up. The air thickened, she couldn't breathe. The power he exuded, was rolling off in waves, hitting her and weakening her already dwindling resolve. No, she felt like screaming, No, No, No. Whatever this man had in store for her would scare her out her wits, would hurt her. She knew, she just knew.

But, words refused to leave her mouth. She looked up, her wet, doe-eyes unwavering. Unaware, that her eyes communicated her innocence, fear, confusion and weakness. He felt a tug in his heart. He ignored it.

Now was not the time to take pity on his pretty little captive. Wife, a small voice whispered, wife, not captive, your pretty little WIFE. The thought annoyed him, incensed him further. So he was saddled to a nave, village girl. Who probably was as aware of the realities of the world as a child.

He strode up to her. She gasped as he pulled her up. That's when she realized her legs were completely, utterly useless, from fear or sitting tensed too long, they refused to support her. Rudra obliged by putting a strong arm against the sagging, soft body and pulled her to him. She didn't like his support as much as he did. Sounds of her moving  payals and bangles  pleased him. But nothing effected him more than those speaking eyes and trembling lips.

Those lips seemed  soft and wet. Also, warm and inviting, he unconsciously licked his own. At that ,Paro's eyes widened and flickered to his lips . Why the action disturbed her so much was beyond her.

With her it seemed less was more. The more he waited the more her fear increased. It was the suspense of the unknown that was controlling her mind. This was one of his favorite strategies; letting the ridiculous fear of him control his opponents, weaken them, before he swiftly finished them off.

Here swiftness would be pointless. It would rob him of pleasure, extreme pleasure. She wasn't going anywhere and neither was he. No longer was she some stranger hiding in his house, now she was his wife. His raging blood filled body was a furnace. It demanded him too take the trembling lips and bite them till they were raw and she cried out. To to grind the life out her, revive her and then take her again. His nostrils flared, his breathing painfully hardened, as his eyes looked longingly at her lips.

Noting the change in him, Paro whimpered. The sound brought his attention back to her eyes, and he smirked. Pressed into him, her head pulled back, she was an  exquisite vision of innocence.

Everything about her face was aglow, and he was realized he had never seen such beauty. Never in Laila, or in  any of the dancing woman that threw themselves in his path. She seemed so real.


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Edited by sanish23 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Hiii
OMG I am so glad you have continued this!! Loved this chapter please continue it!!!!😊😛😃
Posted: 9 years ago
👍🏼 this is really good!! .. plz continue soon! 😊
Posted: 9 years ago
yaaay youre continuing, so happy! loved the update, continue soon please
Posted: 9 years ago
Wow..you write so well
Loved it
Waiting for the next update
Posted: 9 years ago
This is fantastic writing! I love how you've described Rudra in this scene, it totally helps me relive the old episodes of Rangrasiya when even eye contact between Rudra and Paro was super hot and weirdly exhilarating.  
Do continue dear, I am so looking forward to what our Jallad does next.
Posted: 9 years ago
Oh my. I had almost given up hope that your prologue wouldn't continue. This is AWESOME. Can't wait to the next part. I love your portrayal of Rudra. Yum...
Posted: 9 years ago
Fab , very well written 
Plz continue soon 
Posted: 9 years ago
amazing chapter...but plz continue in the same thread and not in new thread

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