SS: ~{Main Tenu Samjhawan Ki}~ *Upd Ch4 Pg 7* - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: sharmatanya

no problem on late update😊

well i wanna say this to u that u r a nice narrator, story teller, u cud be a script writer or a director.

coming to update, i luv iqu here, he is strong yet emotional, omg he luvs meher bt he thinks that she luvs sameer i want this thinking of iqu in show too. i m loving iqher bond. keep updating😳


Thank you..
Omg this has to be one of the nicest and best compliments ive ever gotten!!
I really want a scene like that too cz they already showed iqbal likes meher then why is he behaving like a chichora lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: oracleraider786

You know,I love your Iqbal 😳 😳 😆
He is like he cares about Meher and Bebe... 😉 😉
He truly loves Meher and is ready to anything for her... 😳 😳 😆
Rather than the show 🤢 🤢
'SAALA DEVIL KAHI KA'
Even Purab is actually potrayed as a honest character that feels for his brother... 😃 😃
Can't wait for the next update... 😉 😃 😃



Aww thank you!
Lml devil..i love the devil in him tho!
Will be updating tonight
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ..juliet..

Pls do update soon..i'm loving your story too much



Aww thank you!!
Will sure do!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44


Will be updating soon..maybe now.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

Sorry 4 the late comment, was extremely busy

I read ur update the same day but didn't get time 2 comment!😕
Amazing update... Luvd Iqbal's side of the story!!!
I like ur Iqbal better than the 1 in the show
Fabulously written chapter...can't w8 4 the next update!!
Thnx 4 the pm!!😊
Hope u feel better!!



Aww no problem at all..
Its alright, as long as you liked what you read.
Thank you!
Will b updating soon
No prob.
THANK YOU!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Chapter 4

She gasped as her finger met a something rough on his beautiful smooth skin. She pulled back as the roughness compelled her to check it out.

Before she could even think about the good or the bad result of this situation, her hands were already on their way to remove a side of shirt. One of her hands attached to the collar, pulling the shirt, while the other was busy feeling the rough surface of the skin that once was smooth.

Her eyes widened, as she saw what it was..a scar. Bullet scar. She had seen many of them considering the fact she lived right near the border. But the fact that Sam..Iqbal had it scared her.

Something wasnt right. She stared at it, too engrossed in it to not notice that the man himself was frozen. His arms on his sides now, while hers leaned into him inspecting the scar closely. Her mind forcing something into her memory as it drifted through her thoughts.

Her eyes widened, as a loud gasp escaped her mouth. Her hands covered her mouth to hide her initial shock, but it couldn't be hidden as it was clearly drafted onto her face.Realization dawned upon her as words floated into her mind bringing something she had lost or what she thought she had lost..hope.

"I shot him..who?..Sameer."

She gasped and moved back further as if electrocuted.

She stared him dead in the eyes, searching, searching for the dead man.

She watched as he stared right back at her.

"I was a soldier so I obviously got shot right?" Sam..Iqbal said carefully, staring at her with narrowed eyes, trying to sound as confident as he could.

"Bata raha hai yan puch raha hai?"

"Matlab?" He stared at her, trying to find out what she was thinking.

"Kuch nahi, chal, ghar chalein" She walked towards the elevator. her mind calculating everything she had just discovered. As she reached the elevator, she turned around to see him standing at the same spot she left him at, staring at her as if he was
trying to figure her out without seeming suspicious. She stared back at him, dead in his eyes, somehow managing a smile on her pale face she gestured him to follow, which he did cautiously.

Sameer/Iqbals pov

Damn! How could i be so stupid! She wasnt suppose to see that scar! I wasnt suppose to have it! Sameer obviously didnt since Meher was shocked! Shit!

Well i could tell her it was during my captivation shell believe me..hopefully.

Hey lovies, so yeah a plot twist. Dont worry im not ekta, so their wont be a lot of twists and turns lol. But i hope none of you are dissapointed. This chapter surely will confuse you guys, but please be patient. I hope i didnt dissapoint yall, since some of you guys had different expectations, wheneve i read your comments, your comments made me think over with what i had already written for this story, but then i decided if i give you guys what you already have predicted that may not surprise you or excite you at all. So keep calm, and hopefully keep reading, and youll understand whats going to happen in this story. P.S. this SS is going to end soon, and im planning to write another one. Should I, or should I not? Please do tell me. Thank you again!! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
n finally posted <3

damn is this sameer?????? the same gun shot that purab gave him???? just like meher i too feel its sameer but iqbal thinks otherwise??

yeh twist bada hi interesting hai


such a short chotu update:(

want so much more sweety
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Awww...that was such a cute update..
loved reading it!
thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
very nice update thank u, loved iqu's pov. i guess iqu is sameer here.😳
yess i wud love to read ur new story too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
I want Iqu to b sameer here 😳 btw short bt sweet update 👍🏼

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