#3: ArHi SS: !!Eclipse!! *Chapter 18, PG 57* 09/Sept/14 - Page 40

Hi Kiran,

Originally posted by: Deal05

Hi Kiran,

This is really a fabulous story.

Have you consider turning it into a book? I know you may have to do more work on it once an editor reviews but try and look into this.

Are going to get an epilogue?

Yeah, an epilogue is due for this one which I shall post as soon as I finish writing it down (which would take about two more weeks keeping in view my tight schedule) :)
About the book thing, I haven't really ever considered writing a book, let alone conveting this story into one. But I am just really glad you thought this could be a book.
means a lot.
Thank you😳
About the epilogue for "Manipulating The Raizada", that's one silly story I wrote during my eardy days of writing :D
It's stuck where it is. No epilogues there :)

It really was an awesome story.  I like the ending, which was beautiful. 

Lovely ending to a beautiful story

Hey Kiran just read your second story after destined to love

A very beautiful end to a very cute story !

amazing job ! 👏

I don't know how I missed this last chapter.
Loved this practical ending.
Parents being their for their Daughter.
Maturely resolved.
Trusting Khushi. Wanting what makes Her Happy.
And Arnav asking Shashiji for Khushi's Hand.
Respect shown.
I can see the moral here.
Trust & Respect is a Two Way thing.
And Abhay being there to Bless Arnav & khushi Tops it.
Do like Your Style.

Keep Writing.
❤️ ❤️
❤️S   🤗

that was an awsome endinggg
finally the eclipse has moved onnn
arshi loves on happily
thnx for the update

awesome story
loved reading it in onego
you put the part of arnav character
who don't belive in marriage and love very well
and how khushi changed.his.believes
and make him understand her principles and believrs
and carry out it very fabulously
a mind blowing ff written by u