Do you realize every time I read something you write I cry for the next three hours?
This was insane. My heart was pounding in my chest, trying to fathom what was going on in Rudra's mind. To think that he accidentally killed the one woman...the one person...who meant everything to him. His reason for living disappeared, and you captured it better than anyone else. Personally, you made me feel that Rudra would rather die than live without her and return to his jallad form. Why would someone wish to return to earth when they've had a glimpse of heaven?
And she said she still loved him! That must've really killed him inside. Despite her being shot by him, Paro loved him and wanted him to know with her dying breath! My tears have now turned my room into a mini ocean! I'm so conflicted! I love your writing, and this one is no exception. I don't want them dead, but you made it end so good!
Anyways, loved this sooo much! Can't wait to read what you write next!
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