Hi Zara ji,
Well, that is truly a gut-wrenching write-up. Very emotional, very well justified. Like Rudra says in a promo - Paro nahi , toh Rudra nahi!
I believe you touch one's heart and soul with this wonderful scene depicted, and make us realize, we need to stand up, go to our Mummy-Papa, any loved ones, kind and dear ones and go give them a tight hug, and not leave them for a good odd minute. Yes, you are indirectly mending broken hearts, minds, making us baisas correlate it with our real lifes, and allow us to take the opportunity to let go of our anger and forgive our loved ones.
The term Anger is synonymous with Rudra and the magnificent way in which you have portrayed his inner-turmoils, his sense of fear, his thoughts all relate to the reader in such a manner that they, expect the outcome and are not depressed, but find solace, having Rudra punishes himself and let's go of his anger in the end.
It's a honour and pleasure to be a reader/an outsider who gets to set their eyes upon such mind-blowing write-ups and be proud to be a member this forum, the very same forum where you take the liberty and time to humor us and emotionally take us on a roller-coaster ride of our lives.
And oh! Yes thank you for including Aman as part of the write-up, a very significant person, imparting a significant role. He truly would be the Godfather of PaRud's kids!