FF- lover turned villian(mature+dark)last part on pg 30 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
I am waiting for the real transformation of ganster Randhir to Lover Randhir... Pls update asap dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Hy tat was a fatafati update👍🏼
Moi enjoyed reading it⭐️

Very. Nice chap dear👏

Their romance was on the peeks😳
Loved it ...😉
Ya I know m shameless..🤣
N I would love to read this further too...🤣

Update asap..
Love
Sam❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
It ws realy nc n cute update. 😳
Loved it. ❤️
Update fast.
Waitin 4 d nxt part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
hello dear..😃
i am suchi..😊
i read ur story is very nice...!😛
randhir is a gangster n he turns to villian!😲
story is interesting..👏
update soon n plz pm me next time😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Hi guys spoilers Mein Thoda change hai so I am not writing acordingly..so here is the 4th part..some of you maybe thinking where is the dark part of the ff so pls wait ..I don't wanna end ff soon.. Here is the 4th part!!!i am giving a span of 6 months..they both got married a week ago..

AFTER 2 MONTHS IN THE EVENING

sanyu is serving food for randhir and herself..they both are eating there dinner quietly.. and sanyu kept her hand on randhirs hand while eating..
Randhir- yeh kya kar Rahi ho!!
Sanyu- randhir kya hua main toh buss ...(shocked )
Randhir- main toh buss kya???haa samjhti kya ho..
Sanyu- randhir kya hua???tum theek ho office main kuch baat hui kya yaa dada se jhagda..
Hearing this randhir held sanyu with her jawline tightly..
Randhir- kuch bhi Matt bola Karo..samjhi..and goes from there..sanyu runs to her room and cries ...randhir came home after 2-3 hours and found sanyu crying !!! He smirks and goes near her making a puppy face..
Randhir- I am sorry and holds his ears..
Sanyu gets up and hugs him.. Tumne aisa Kyu Kara randhir kitni dard hua mujhe..
Randhir- sanyu sorry pls maaf kar do..
Sanyu- wipes his tears by kissing them and pecks him on his lips..it okay..jab tunhara share Karne ka Mann Kare toh karlena..chalo late ho Gaya hai so jaate hai..sanyu and randhir lays on the bed..
Randhir- sanyu tumhare parents kaha hai??
Sanyu- randhir tumne uss din bhi mujhe yahi pucha tha..meri mom ki death ho gayi hai and mere dad US Mai rehte hai.
.randhir- tum unhe miss karti ho aur humne ushe apni shaadi Mein Kyu nahi bola ya aur unhonone mere baare Mein kuch info bhi nahi puchu.. And shaadi ke liye Haan kar diya??
Sanyu- Aaj tum Aisi baate Kyu kar rahe ho?? Aur unhone nahi pucha kyunki Maine unki Bataya ki tum yaha job karte ho aur mujhse bohot pyaar karte ho!!aur main unki ladki huin woh mujhe kabhi bhi mana nahi kar sakte.
Randhir- Acha chalo so jao..and kisse her and hugs her..
Sanyu- good night..and cuddles him in a hug.. In night randhir goes out of the house..to meet dada..

Randhir hugs dada and speaks to him for a whirl and then says- dada uske baap ne parents ki jaan le li..mujhe anath kar diya ..uss aggarwAl ki jaan uski Bari Mein bassi hai na ab main Dekhta hui ki woh kaise apni kismet par royega..😭
Randhir returns home and sees sanyu standing there holding phone in her hand..
Sanyu runs to randhir and engulfs him in a hug..
Randhir- kya hua ???(rudely)
Sanyu- (shocked with the tone) tum kaha chale Gaye the??
Randhir- pushes her and says Kyu drama kar Rahi ho...and goes to the room leaving crying sanyu behind..

Precap- ab tum yahi Raho...Iss kamre se bahar kadam bhi rakha na toh dekh Lena... Roz sirf khana banane ke liye bahar aana..aur kissi cheez ke liye nahi..Samajh aya..
😡

Pls guys comment..your comments really encourage me and seeing them new ideas also pop up..hehe
And very sorry for small update..if I get time I will update next part today only!!! 😛
#janavi
Edited by Randhir.janavi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
res!!
~unres..
yayy!!! i m first tym first.. 😃
coming to ur ff... its lovely..😊
but randhir turned villain..😲
i think his dada lied to him..
update soon..
❤️Nikki
Edited by cherry. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Nice update
Interesting
Thanks for the pm
Loads of love
Mahak
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Res
Unress

Fab..one dear⭐️⭐️
Shadi😳😳

Wohaa and a dhamakedar twists😲😲

What is wrong with randhir...??

Why my hero is turning into a villain??😭

Omg!!! M sure Dada is brainwashing him😡

Precap is killing me😭
Thanx fr d pm😉
Up date soon
Edited by goodlucksam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Oh God ye sab ek revenge plan tha... Meri Sanyu tu kahan fas gayi dear... Anyways its getting more and more interesting. pls update asap...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
hey thanks for pm
n precap Wut was that
waiting

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