Thrd-2:AR/ARSH OS#30: Khoobsurat Hai Wo Itna/Page55 - Page 4

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Awesome
plz pm me for updates
continue soon

Originally posted by: sammy4u

Congratz for the new thread dear
Nice os
Poor shilpa has being waiting for his attention
Great that his father told him off
Do continue soon

Originally posted by: sameera_12

Chaloji atlast parh he liya maine!!😆
Ek to main yeh last wishes wali cheez se badi pareshaan hun!! 😵 Matlab khud ki khushi k liye doosre ki zindagii jahanum bana do!!😡 Generally ek thought hai! iss OS pe nahi keh rahi... 

Khair... Phir Armaan ki wo phonecall wali harkat!! Chalo yahan to Shilpa ne phone kiya tha warna aksar mere ghar pe yeh hota hai k papa ka phone aya ab app hold kiye rahen pehle wo kisi doosre se apni baat khatam kar lein!!! Matlab hello hello keh k aadmi pakk jaye🤓 Lekin khair he isn't a busybee like Armaan...

Job k saath saath evening ACCA program!! Phir to i am with him, issko sone ka time milta hai bohat badi baat hai!! AND I AM TELLING YOU BOHAT ZYAADA BADI BAAT HAI!! 😲

Teeji, Rudra, Kumud!! wahh!! kya chun chun k naam liye hain😆👏

Yehi to hai... ab usne ignore maara to mirchi lag gayi!!!😆 Well deserved!! Khud k dad se bhi khoob jhaar padi!!

And i am obviously feeling sorry for the poor girl... lekin khair koi nahi! job karegi to busy ho jayegi phir uncleji ko akal ayegii k arreee... ek biwi bhi to hai meri!!!😃 Lekin kahan gayab hogai

All in all ver well written and nice concept!!! Ab jaldi se isko complete karo!! i am waiting!!😊

Originally posted by: sara.dmg

awesome

Originally posted by: luv_sucks

congo for d threand n nice os..

Originally posted by: kritika_24

reserved

p.s- heartiest congratulations for the new thread love!!! you are doing an awesome awesome awesomeee job!!!!!! I love your writing!!!

Originally posted by: teenorchid

first of all i am so excited. we got an os from you after so long

u never fail to amaze me ana

the concept is amazing

so is the poetry

can u send me the whole poetryyy

armaans dad nd dadi are <3

so supportive

armaan has left shilpu in india nd is in UK...

nd he is not attentive in what she is saying

how can he act like this. LOSER kahin ka

Men can never understand women. busy tou sb hote hain bt taking out few minutes would do no harm

daadi bari sayani hai. whatever she said was true. 

 "How could this be possible...How can she stay without talking to me for three days?

isko check kro bhai. insan hai wo khud uske phone pe deyhan deta hai nahi bara aya. i am glad rudra ne khoob class li uski he deserves t. now shilpa shd give him a hard time. khud k liye rules nhi biwi bechari ghar me rahee

i so feel for shilpuu. looking forward to the completion of this os

cont soonish :)

nd plz dont let shilpa give in so easily

Originally posted by: ZIKRASHAH

Congrats for the new thread. This is so nice. poor shilpa she iz craving for armaan's attention. but armaan is so stupid. hope after rudra's outburst he'll understand shilpa. plzzz cont sooonnn. plzzz pm me whenever u update.

Originally posted by: LoveArsh

Amazingg os,loved it,poor shilpa armaan is taking her for granted,loved how dadi n her father in law feeling worried for her,loved how armaan father blasted on him,it was necessary,n feel goods to know that shilpa is taking a step forward,do cont soon :)

Originally posted by: KaranSGRules

congo