BROKEN WINGS - AsYa SS, chapter 7 updated,PG 85 (17/8) - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
yippee I got 1st place after a long time
bt all happiness vanished while reading this
asad is in comma fr 2 months..he couldn't see now...his kidneys... his legs...aapne ek bhi part nahi choda mera asad ka 🥺 😭 😭
I'm totally sad... 😭
my heart cried out fr him n dillu...
zainab is so good
Zoya got married 2 ayaan 🤢
n she forgot everything
pls make her remember...
thanq fr d long update n ur really an awesome writer 👏
make asad recover soon
continue soon
n pm me plsEdited by Amulya9 - 9 years ago
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yipeee I'm first
its a long one thanq.. lemme read
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW!!! Loved the update..👏
Asad kinda paralyzed.. Poor Dilshad.. It's heartbreaking for a mother to see her child going through so much.. 😭😭
Asad lost his vision, paralyzed.. God!! 😭
He went into coma also... Don't trouble my Asad too much please...😭

Has Zoya got Partial Amnesia or something.. She is in trauma.. ptsd kinds.. 😭
Don't tell me she forgot Asad..
Her hesitance in marrying Ayaan.. 
Why didn't she take help from her mom when Zainab was ready to do anything for her daughter's happiness... 😭
She said Qubool Hai to Ayaan..🥺
Why did you do this... Mera bechara Asad... 🥺
She has some issue.. The way she was acting wild.. There is more to her being safe in the accident.. Right?? 

Beautifully written.. 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
NAA INSSAAFFFII.. Zoya got married to Ayaan!!! I CANT TAKE THAT >.< 
LOL 

Awaiting for the story to develop :D 

Good work Kas janni! 
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

NAA INSSAAFFFII.. Zoya got married to Ayaan!!! I CANT TAKE THAT >.< 

LOL 

Awaiting for the story to develop :D 

Good work Kas janni! 

LOL ... haha i knew it.. especially you won't like that i made ZOYAAN happen.. haha.. see i'm worse than Gul.

But don't worry.. there's twists ahead... and i think you will like the twist.😉

thanks Darling.😃
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Originally posted by: Amulya9

OMG asad met with accident 😭 n badly injured
Zoe is with him
gaffur cares abt reputation
who is other man who got shocked with this news..
prologue is interesting
continue soon n pm me pls
jas thanx fr d pm buddy

thanks Dear.. glad you liked the prologue..😃

And i see that you read chapter1 even before i could PM.. hope you liked it.😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

The narration of Asad's diagnosis, his parents love and dedication, specifically Dilshad nursing and nurturing him was a heartrending and endearing read.

 

The link between Asad and Zoya is fascinating.   

 

Ayaan and Zoya got married  😒   🤢   My Indian Television nightmare has once again become a reality.   😵   😆

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Oh no. Zoya got married with Ayan. What's between Asad and Zoya?
Continue soon.
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Originally posted by: Divya.S.R

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WOW!!! Loved the update..👏
Thank you Divya.😃
Asad kinda paralyzed.. Poor Dilshad.. It's heartbreaking for a mother to see her child going through so much.. 😭😭
Asad lost his vision, paralyzed.. God!! 😭
He went into coma also... Don't trouble my Asad too much please...😭

i know.. i have troubled Asad a lot😭..  but what to do.. it is needed.

Has Zoya got Partial Amnesia or something.. She is in trauma.. ptsd kinds.. 😭
Don't tell me she forgot Asad..
Her hesitance in marrying Ayaan.. 
Why didn't she take help from her mom when Zainab was ready to do anything for her daughter's happiness... 😭
She said Qubool Hai to Ayaan..🥺
Why did you do this... Mera bechara Asad... 🥺
She has some issue.. The way she was acting wild.. There is more to her being safe in the accident.. Right?? 

You have again guessed right Diyva... Zoya did not have much physical injuries.. but psychologically she has suffered as well.. they both are now birds with broken wings.. and on top if it poor Zoya was forced to marry Ayaan... lets see how things turn out and how they learn to fly again... thats the concept here.

Beautifully written.. 👏
Thanks.😃

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