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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing OS. You are an awesome writer. Please write more
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ITSABOUT_DMG


aankh kaan bandh karke padungi????
really pakooo
itni gadhi bhi nahi hun mainnn
mujhe acha lagta hai mushy mushy romance padhnaπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
I repeat Only Mushy Mushy Not Hawww Hawww types
samjhi
aur next line tuney kuch Update wapdate likha
mujhe samajh nahi aaraha
ye UPDATE ka matlab kya hota hai???πŸ˜†




tujhe to mai baad mai deekhti hoon,,,
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Posted: 7 years ago
Aree yaar yai yo khatam ho gayii,,
mai to padhte padhte bhul hi gayi hai OS thi..πŸ˜›πŸ€£
Arima Mam 1 more time fabulous piece of work form your side.. πŸ‘
yaar I Fell in Love with ypur writing 1's again..πŸ˜³πŸ‘πŸΌ
thank You So much for this OS..
seriously as an AR reader we miss them a lot and it is not easy to get anything about them in writing so easily.😭.
aur aaj kal to bilkul bi kuch nahi milta,,πŸ₯Ί

OS ke baare mai what to say .. i don't got it till now how you guys write detail comment about writing.. mujhe se to kabhi hota nahi.. and i think that is the reason ypu all are fabulous writers and i am just a reader,, 🀣

Lots of Love from my side πŸ€—
Keep Writing ,,

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Posted: 7 years ago
finally ur back with a update
mujhe lga u disscontinue ur story
but thank god u didnt
thats a really cute os
loved how armaan give space to ridhima
n how perfectly he understand her

then ridhima she is a confused soul
loved the rudo teasing hahaha n its meaning at the end
armaan jaisa husband sabko mile seriously

loved ur writing yaar
the way u describe each scene
ar feeling is just fabulous
n this os is one more feather on ur cap
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ITSABOUT_DMG

resssaesssesssesss

unresssinggg



hello ji 
how r ???
yaar pehle toh aap itne cute os likhna bandh karo
mushkil hota hai bhool paana
nahi nahi agar likhna bandh karoge toh hum aur bhi pareshaan hojayenge
likho likho par itnaaa cuteee aaye hayee
it was just AMAZINGGG
Armaan jaisa bass mujhe miljaye koi tab toh meri lottery nikal padegi😳
kitna cute hai woh
he is damn cuteee
i love woh pillow waala scene kaise uska haath pakadke soraha tha cutieee
aur ridhima kitni dumb hai.bekaar mei future ka sonchke itne cute hot sexy ARMAAN se door door rehrahi thi.kitni der lagadi confess karne mei
but the talli ridzi was sooo fun to read...
this os is the cutest to the ends
loveee ittt
aadhi raat tak jaagkar aapke oses padhna is something which can not be explain in words
kuch kuch hota hai jenny di
aap nahi samjhoge
jaldi jaldi aisa ek aur dedo
ya phir arrange waale ke parts dedo.missing that alottt
bye
take care



   U see kuch bhi likhna band karne ki jyaada koshish karne ki jarurat nahi hai mujhe because vaise hi I am losing interest πŸ˜† 
   OMG... kuch kuch hota hai? Really now?! Ek se badkar ek bollywood freak hai mere readers hehehehe... And next kis cheej ka part aur kab hoga uska koi idea nahi hai, especially after suchhh a long OS, energy vapas laani padegoi utni :p
    Thanks for the wonderful comment dear, I hope I am able to write AALM soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: megbans

haaye kitne dino baad kuch padhne ko mila 

aur kitne baad itna lamba kuch padhne ko mila..

aur jaane kitne dino baad main comment karri hun...

last comment maine kab aur kiske story pe ki thi mujhe yaad bhi i...

and have to say mujhe pure 2 ghante lage isko pura padhne mein..

raat 12 baje padhne baithi thi aur 2 baje khatam hua 

but i luved it...it was amzing yaar...
loved it...whole...

it was full of only Ar moments...just amamzing..superb...

especially voh drunk Riddhima was waaow yaar...

hheehhehee...sab confess kar diya...

ahahhahhahahha...it was amazing yaar..

and then unka honeymoon...was all amazing...

all in all OS was just amzing...
superb...
loved it...

<3 :*


   I like ur dedication, 2 ghante baithke u read it vaah vaah... Par beta usse acha vaise 2 ghante baithke likh bhi lo, hum gareebo ko kuch padhne ke liye mil jaaye! Hehehe...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: TaniDMGlover

Main agayi main agayi...yeahhh clap for me chalo :p
Acha Acha ab Meri if I tareef bhi Mat Karo and now don't disturb me let me comment shanti se, jab Dekho u disturb my comment!
This OS Na was sooo sooo sooo god Na Matlab itna cute kaise ???? *love struck*
Right from the part where she has a dream and he comforts her when he says talk to me Ridhima *hay* then their
Then then when he is going and he gets mad at her and everything that follows and of course my most most most favourite of all...Rudo!!!! Ek to itna cute name hai and when he tells her the meaning and the way he does just makes me want to come across the screen make u sit near ur laptop and tell you to write more or write a new story :p
And of course how can I forget the part where she gets drunk and the way she confesses and everything!
God I can't stop gushing over this!!!!!
Yaar now see I understand itna lambs OS tha and u definitely need a break nahi Milan bhi chahiye!
So Ho gaya Na 2 days ho Gaya now pls write something *pretty pls *
Love love love the story and love u (yes This sudden love is only cuz of this Acha OS that u gave me :p)


     Arey haan haan claps toh bante hi hai, buttt don't churaofy my Shinchan ka dialogue... huh! 
OMG Tani... you are so kind na. You gave me a break for an entiire period of 2 days!! Ab is baat pe toh taaliya banti hi hai πŸ˜• Thanks a lot for the comment, but... the next thing I plan on writing is a comment on your story nothing before that so you better hurry up!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Natalya_bedi

It was such a simple and adorable love story...
You described each phase of their relationship in a beautiful manner...
After such a long time got to read such an awesome OS on AR.
Armaan as a loving and supportive husband just rocked ...at last he made his RUDO fall in love with her...(Rudo is such a cute name) ...
A drunk Ridz is always needed for confession because she doesn't open her mouth easily...
But Armaan's way to make her confess..was hot!!!

   

    Thanks dear... Yes that is a cute name isn't it! πŸ˜› 

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: tinkerred10

This was such an amazing, long and wonderful is. Reading this made realize how much I love and miss Armaan & Riddhima even after all this time. Thanks for the pm . Hopefully I'll get to read another something on AR.


Originally posted by: karankajen

Awsm... So beautifully written... Don't have words to tell how well u have written. .. amazing...
Very nice story...
Mind blowing...
Loved it..
AR are so good...

Amazing OS πŸ˜³

Loved it πŸ˜ƒ

beautifully written πŸ‘

loved everything from starting to end πŸ˜ƒ

such a beautiful story the way you write this story i loved it β€οΈ

all the feelings you showed by the Armaaan and Ridhhima its awesome β€οΈ

loved the way Armaan handle Riddhima and their relation πŸ˜³ 

plz do write more πŸ˜³

πŸ€— 

Originally posted by: DMGThings

Oyye Hoyye. So good. And Rudo. That I rudo. :p

But Armaan is seriously the cutest. So much love. 

Originally posted by: Prizi

sachme it was long :D well only i knw how i read this

awesum 


Originally posted by:  blessed4

 Amazing OS. You are an awesome writer. Please write more 

Originally posted by: Mpakeez

Aree yaar yai yo khatam ho gayii,,

mai to padhte padhte bhul hi gayi hai OS thi..πŸ˜›πŸ€£
Arima Mam 1 more time fabulous piece of work form your side.. πŸ‘
yaar I Fell in Love with ypur writing 1's again..πŸ˜³πŸ‘πŸΌ
thank You So much for this OS..
seriously as an AR reader we miss them a lot and it is not easy to get anything about them in writing so easily.😭.
aur aaj kal to bilkul bi kuch nahi milta,,πŸ₯Ί

OS ke baare mai what to say .. i don't got it till now how you guys write detail comment about writing.. mujhe se to kabhi hota nahi.. and i think that is the reason ypu all are fabulous writers and i am just a reader,, πŸ€£

Lots of Love from my side πŸ€—
Keep Writing ,,


Originally posted by: lashyyy

finally ur back with a update mujhe lga u disscontinue ur story 

but thank god u didnt 
thats a really cute os 
loved how armaan give space to ridhima 
n how perfectly he understand her 

then ridhima she is a confused soul 
loved the rudo teasing hahaha n its meaning at the end 
armaan jaisa husband sabko mile seriously 

loved ur writing yaar 
the way u describe each scene 
ar feeling is just fabulous
n this os is one more feather on ur cap 

  

Sorry guys sab logon ko individual comment nahi de paungi, but I am thnakful to all of you for the wonderful comments. I hope you all enjoyed it and yes I will try to write something again soon, but can't promise anything for now. Love you all :* 
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Posted: 7 years ago
Finally finished reading it completely.
Very very cute OS.
Rudo πŸ˜³

When will u update arranged marriage?