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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello friends...we are going to play a game...it is called the Rishbala OS game...
Here everyone will be writing a part and then it will be continued by the next person...

This is the beginning::


Continuation from the scene of 23rd November 2012...

Madhu hugged RK tightly "You also love me, isn't it...Please don't say no..." and looked at him expectantly. RK parted from her and looked with a serious expression and then said, "No...Madhu...I don't love you...yet . Yes I care for u but I do not love u yet . I like u too . U r so different from me . "
Hearing this Madhu was totally shocked while Hearing Madhu's words, RK was left speechless.
He was baffled by the revelation and didnt know how to react, all he could see were her gorgoues doe eyes which had been pleading him, begging him to be loved, hoping that he felt the same about her.
Not knowing how or what to say, RK left the room in an instant.
Madhu sat on the floor suppressing her sobs. She got rejected by RK right on her face...could anything be worse than this??
She kept on thinking why he walked away without saying a single word, the more she thought about it, the more it hurt..
RK had left her hanging, and she didnt know what else to do but feel like a complete and utter idiot for spilling her heart and soul infront of him !
Suddenly she heard footsteps at the door. Thinking it to be RK she quickly got up and wiped away her tears roughly.
"Bhabhijee???"
Seeing BittuJi standing out the door instead of RK, she wiped away her tears.
"BittuJi, whats wrong?" "Bhabhijee, chief..."
*BittuJi starts Crying*
"Rk? What Rk bittuji? Is he fine? where is Rk bittuji?" MAdhu was completely shocked seeing bittuji crying.
"Bhabhi...chief...chief met wid n accident"
Madhu's world stopped.. She felt numb.. She couldn't think anything straight.. She was blank!
Bittuji's words brought her back to her senses
Bittuji "BHABHIJI!!"
Madhu looks at himand looks at the door and just rushes out without a word while Bittuji kept calling her from behind..


Friends continue from here...but check the rules below first...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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~~Rules~~
1) You have to write continuation from the previous post...It should be 3-4 lines but please don't write very long.😊
2) It should be in English.
3) Most importantly, no quoting more than 4 times...strictly!!
4) Try to quote only the previous post.
5) Please take the theme seriously...its for a good cause..don't bash/mock/ make fun of the post.
6) Write the whole sentence please, don't write in message language...(ex- please should be written please and not PLS)
7) Try to use the correct punctuation marks. It makes the write ups look presentable...it's not a rule rather a request from me...please...

Enjoy writing!!
Edited by rg0782 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Writers of this thread::

  1. me- rg0782-Rimjhim
  2. rima4ever- Dia
  3. -StephinesS-- Stephaniedi
  4. SHINYSHREYA- Shreyadi
  5. shriyakadge- Shriya
  6. drashtifan1- Piyu
  7. JsparrowJ- Akanksha
  8. AzraZaidi- Azra
  9. Mentally-Insane-
  10. revti21-
  11. Christobelle- christy
  12. Kg15- Kavya
Edited by rg0782 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am sorry I had to open a second thread...I am really sorry...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rg0782

I am sorry I had to open a second thread...I am really sorry...

di ...can i add the story which was ther here ? i will post it in a single comment ...as in i will add only a few comments not making it complicated ...so the nxt person can continue it from ther ...coz the story ther was really going nice
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Comment removed 😊
Anyways Good Night Lovelies!
Sweet Dreams !
Take Care! 😊
Edited by drashtifan1 - 11 years ago
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Hey guys
As u knw ...the previous thread failed due to some problems
so i m posting the story which was written there here again with some small corrections in the story ...
the next person who comment after me is requested 2 continue the scene from the point where i stop ...also plz all quote the scene which is above ur comment ...this will make it easier

The story so far::

:::The begining:::

Continuation from the scene of 23rd November 2012...

Madhu hugged RK tightly "You also love me, isn't it...Please don't say no..." and looked at him expectantly. RK parted from her and looked with a serious expression and then said, "No...Madhu...I don't love you...yet . Yes I care for u but I do not love u yet . I like u too . U r so different from me . "

Hearing this Madhu was totally shocked while Hearing Madhu's words, RK was left speechless.

He was baffled by the revelation and didnt know how to react, all he could see were her gorgoues doe eyes which had been pleading him, begging him to be loved, hoping that he felt the same about her.
Not knowing how or what to say, RK left the room in an instant.

Madhu sat on the floor suppressing her sobs. She got rejected by RK right on her face...could anything be worse than this??

She kept on thinking why he walked away without saying a single word, the more she thought about it, the more it hurt..
RK had left her hanging, and she didnt know what else to do but feel like a complete and utter idiot for spilling her heart and soul infront of him !

Suddenly she heard footsteps at the door. Thinking it to be RK she quickly got up and wiped away her tears roughly.

"Bhabhijee???"

Seeing BittuJi standing out the door instead of RK, she wiped away her tears.
"BittuJi, whats wrong?" "Bhabhijee, chief..."
*BittuJi starts Crying*

"Rk? What Rk bittuji? Is he fine? where is Rk bittuji?" MAdhu was completely shocked seeing bittuji crying.

"Bhabhi...chief...chief met wid n accident"

Madhu's world stopped.. She felt numb.. She couldn't think anything straight.. She was blank!
Bittuji's words brought her back to her senses
Bittuji "BHABHIJI!!"
Madhu looks at himand looks at the door and just rushes out without a word while Bittuji kept calling her from behind..

bittuji ran behind madhu and finally managed to stop her near the entrance.

"Wait bhabhiji ...were r u going?" he asked panting.

"Bittuji...i want to see my Rk...where is he bittuji? please take me to him please." MAdhu was crying badly.

Bittuji noticed that madhu was crying for his chief for the very first time and without any delay he said " he is in the hospital bhabhiji...came with me." And he led her towards the car

Madhu follows Bittuji and sits in the car..
Bittuji tells the driver to take them to the place..
Bittuji was looking at Madhu who was crying all the time hugging one picture of RK!
The car stops and Madhu gets down and is shocked by what she sees!!
The driver takes Bittuji back home..
Madhu was standing in front of an entrance which was totally decorated

She sees RK and Dipali laughing together.

Madhu runs to him - RK are you fine? Bittuji.. Bittuji..said you had an accident??
RK laughs - You think superstar RK will Love You.. You? It was all just a drama to break your heart

madhu was shocked beyond belief ! she couldnt believe her ears ...was what she heard right ? Rk ...wat he did was just a drama ? no ...this ...this cant be true ...she broke down completely
RK why r you joking, Look m serious and I DON'T like such jokes."

suddenly her expression changes and she said

if you can play a game mee too can

wat did u think huh ? if u can play wid my life evn i can ...did u seriously think i started loving u ? seriously ? i mean just think ...u destroyed my life ...n out of all people in d world i would fall in love wid u ? ha ! tht would b a joke

if you are superstar then i also played a role of superstart's wife

bittuji oh dont look shocked this was my game

Rk was shocked beyond beleif...madhu ? her thoughts were so pure ...how could this even cross her mind ? he tried to control his feelings ...coz all this was for her own sake ...he couldnt tell her in any way that he had cancer ...she is leaving ...let her leave by her own wish

madhu turned back and started moving with a rage their were tears in her eyes

if she is sad then why she replied like that to r.k.

rk saw madhu turning her back towards him ...he wanted to stop her ...he wanted to hold her hand and warn her never to leave him again ...but he couldnt do that ...he couldnt be selfish this time ...he loved her ...n the best thing was to let her free ...but by doing this he felt as if a boulder had smashed his heart

As soon as madhu left from there Rk broke down on his knees ...he was completely shattered ...he loved her so much ...didnt she love him ...ever ? he was already missing her ...he felt as if the sand in his hands was slipping away ...n he could do nothing except regretting ovr his past deeds

Bittuji went behind his bhabhiji he wanted an explanation..

"Bhabhiji ! " he called out

madhu stopped hearing that

"How could u do that bhab...no ...u r no more my bhabhiji ...madhubaala ,,,,how could u do that huh ? "

" Do wat bittuji ? i beleive in tit for tat ...n i just gave him wat he deserved ...this is wat he desreves "

she said trying to hide the turmoil inside her heart



The people who contributed to the above story were me, rimmi di ( rg0782 ) sparrow di ( JsparrowJ) Piyu di (drashtifan1) Stephine di (-StephinesS-) and shreya di sorry if i missed any ones name

Edited by shriyakadge - 11 years ago
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ok so let me only continue
Bittuji stared at her. His hands turned into fists. HIs eyes were red with anger .
"You r not the same girl i knew ." He said tht i went back to console his chief.
Madhu fell down to her knees.

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Originally posted by: shriyakadge

ok so let me only continue

Bittuji stared at her. His hands turned into fists. HIs eyes were red with anger .
"You r not the same girl i knew ." He said tht i went back to console his chief.
Madhu fell down to her knees.

"life changes just in a second." She thought and chuckled humourlessly. In a moment, RK rejected her love, gave her a heartbreak and she returned it, or should she say, acted to return it??
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Originally posted by: rg0782

"life changes just in a second." She thought and chuckled humourlessly. In a moment, RK rejected her love, gave her a heartbreak and she returned it, or should she say, acted to return it??

but saying tht to him wasnt her plan...she loved him, but ...she couldnt let him win once again ...she wouldnt let him knw tht she was broken ...instead she wanted to stand up raising her head high in front of him...to show tht she won this time ...but deep inside her heart ...she knew ...she had lost ...

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