Originally posted by: amus5
read chappy 1-5 and i must say that you have done a beautiful write up of IPK... many of the FFs that i have read here have adapted IPK but you have sort of filled in the blanks that are now quite glaring ,these introspections are quite authentic ... it has given a smooth flow to IPK where the original had given us a bumpy ride - looking back π
i am able to visualise all the scenes of IPK while reading yours infact it gives a logical reasoning of certain scenes which had been overlooked and i seem to be enjoying this rerun of our favourite which has already run umpteen number of times in our lives since the day IPK happened...
i am feeling quite good reading this original sequencing of the original IPKKD - quite innovative it is indeed ... hats off to you π
moving on to the next chappys ... c ya π
p.s. - of all the above chappys my favourite is definitely Chap 5 as it has given a strong foundation of the making of SMJ of today π and i would definitely love to hate this SMJ who has been struck by reality and has not withstood its impact π
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