Arshi FF: A Hundred Flukes. CHAPTER 37; See note pg 82 - Page 68

You have refined the story so much more than the serial that its pure pleasure to relive the drama without the loopholes that were glaring in our faces but we chose to ignore them due to the fantastic effort made by the actors. I mean the back story of Shyam and Lavanya was so crucial, them being important characters but were conveniently ignored by the writers. But you my dear, have filled all the blanks without deviating from the main plot. I'm thoroughly enjoying your work :)

A big round of applause for the way you wrote chapter 33. Both of my favourite scenes (khushi in arnav's cupboard and the one near the pool) are beautifully penned. The scenes are sizzling with their chemistry...loved this chappy...going back to read the remaining chapters

Beautiful store dear 

Originally posted by: prpk525

Hellliooo.

Originally posted by: cineraria

Hi. But not exactly bye bye. Would update after Chapter 1 of Chiron is posted. 

I already finished reading the ff again, di. And I would say that the crossword chapter was my favourite. And also the recent one in which A and K are kids. It was cute.

Hi dear, I hope u remember me... I was a regular reader of this FF till chapter-20 , after that I guess, I somehow missed ur note n then I lost this story which I loved to read...