Arshi FF: A Hundred Flukes. CHAPTER 37; See note pg 82 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
I had finished till chap 10 When I commente dlast.
When I read further, I could already detect the finer (an much nicer than the show) touches you did.
Reading abt ASR dropping Khushi from his office actually I had goosebumps. You wrote that so well.

I also liked the lift scene. The devil ASR was nowhere in sight in that scene. Just why did he help her when he could have added to her plight. Looks like human inside him was trying to come out for a breath! 😃  Beautifully written.

As I read further I really enjyed your takes on the famous scenes.
With all the atrocities he pile don the poor girl, you wonder how would they end up being in love?? hardly possible in real life.

But when you have seen Arnav and Khushi played by BS and SI you would wish that and ASR wud be forgiven. (If only redemption track was there!)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh I so look forward for these updates...with your slight changes ...reliving the old magic
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I loved your insight to rains in both their pov ..for one it's a nightmare and the other a challenge...they are two extremes clashing together ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: cineraria

Here's a YouTube link to the song. Damn my computer engineering, after wracking my brains with inspecting elements of html embed code jargon, I am still unable to embed the video. Courtesy Google Chrome. ðŸ˜¡

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qt2mbGP6vFI[/YOUTUBE]



Hey chil dont damn comp engg! Blame it on IF.

Try embediing with only http:// instead of https:// => It works sometimes.
A few days back I tried with all sort of combinations. Finally gave up. and few days later same thing worked!!

But I have seen that generally https:// links have this problem.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the suggestion. Although I did try http:// to start with, later I figured the basic problem creeping up in my case was the link getting hyperlinked automatically. I tried pasting it within YouTube tags but that wouldn't even serve the simple purpose of it being a link. 
I finally tried to debug it with html, just to remove the hyperlinking, but bhai yeh toh fevicol ka jod hai.

Oh glad it worked for you, I guess someday, after a few more attempts it might  bestow upon me a bit of clemency. 
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shree10

I had finished till chap 10 When I commente dlast.
When I read further, I could already detect the finer (an much nicer than the show) touches you did.
Reading abt ASR dropping Khushi from his office actually I had goosebumps. You wrote that so well.

I also liked the lift scene. The devil ASR was nowhere in sight in that scene. Just why did he help her when he could have added to her plight. Looks like human inside him was trying to come out for a breath! 😃  Beautifully written.

As I read further I really enjoyed your takes on the famous scenes.
With all the atrocities he pile don the poor girl, you wonder how would they end up being in love?? hardly possible in real life.

But when you have seen Arnav and Khushi played by BS and SI you would wish that and ASR wud be forgiven. (If only redemption track was there!)


Frankly after reading many comments stating that reading something which is more of a wordy representation of what was seen on screen is boring (which I agree) made me kind of nervous regarding what to do with all that I have already written. Khushi's office tenure had some of the best scenes of the show and I had kept them intact. I am glad that it's being able to entertain you now. 
Anyway, it won't remain a ctrl c + ctrl v for long. 😉  

And I guess you do realize how much each word sent my way is treasured. I take these as guidelines, I am trying to work on the pace now. 

Arnav and Khushi's love was impossible, I wonder whether in real life Devi Maiyya ever cares to make so much interference. But that's what star-crossed love stories are all about. I feel our love for fiction is partly because somewhere we all see it as a window to escape the mundane things in life, our usually non dramatic, vapid lives. 

I never thought that Indian TV had to offer some fantastic thespianism hadn't it been for BS and SI and the entire motley of the show's caste. I do attribute it to BS that despite of ASR's ruthlessness, Arnav's innocence was never lost on our eyes. But the kidnapping fiasco and the hasty confession (although I absolutely love that scene) kind of killed the basis of a much required redemption track.
   
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Originally posted by: mayurisb80

Oh I so look forward for these updates...with your slight changes ...reliving the old magic


And I so look forward to your comments. ðŸ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: MOnamy11

Are we gonna get just 1 update today ? Please update the next one soon :-) I love that you update several times a day wish other writers would do that !


Honey, I wonder once the bag of already written chapters is posted here, how regularly would I manage to update. ðŸ˜‰

I take one day to write a chapter and 9 days to come out of a writer's block induced after every chapter.  ðŸ˜›
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Originally posted by: cineraria


Honey, I wonder once the bag of already written chapters is posted here, how regularly would I manage to update. ðŸ˜‰

I take one day to write a chapter and 9 days to come out of a writer's block induced after every chapter.  ðŸ˜›


Too lazy to do the maths. If only somebody would do the calc and we have a count how many chaps have been written. sigh.. but finally it's all abt getting to read them all till the end.. isnt it?
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                                Chapter 17: Socialism

                                                                         


"11:57, it's 3 minutes before the date changes, yay, that means the partyyy is still on, it's still your birthday jiji." cried an effulgent Khushi. Payal smiled brightly at her, closing her umbrella, "Uh, careful Khushi there is water on the floor." she cautioned. Too late, "Whoa..." Khushi yelled as she slipped and fell on the ground on her knees and palms saving her chin from hitting the muddy floor. A hand much larger than her was extended in front of her, she looked up to catch Shyam's gaze resting upon her.

 "So you are finally back." he said helping her up. "Khushi are you all right?" said Payal rushing towards her. "Y..yeah, kind of.", "I didn't see you coming though." she said turning to Shyam. "Well I have a tendency to escape eyes." he chuckled. Khushi stared at him blankly. "Don't look at me like that, I was just kidding." he assured.

Khushi nodded, "A--TISSHOOO" she sneezed.

 

"There comes Sanakadevi announcing her arrival." Madhumati grumbled standing on the door. "A--TISHHOO" Khushi sneezed on her face, earning herself a slap on the back. "Ouch, Buaji..."

Madhumati glared at her, raising both her eye brows and placing her hands on her hips, "Tell me one thing, when Siyam babua was coming to fetch you, what was the need to hop into your boss' car?"

"Buaji that wasn't my boss, that was..."

"Haye re Nandkissore..." Madhumati whined slapping her forehead, "then who was that man? Look Khusee, for the time you are living with me, BEHAVE YOUR SELF!" Khushi made a face ignoring her aunt's remark and ran behind Payal who took the cake out from refrigerator. "Hurry jiji, 50 seconds to go... Chocolate!" she exclaimed licking her lips, "thank you so much Shyamji."

 

"Stop hanging out your tongue like a puppy, roll it in!" said Madhumati peevishly. Khushi lit a matchstick that was extinguished the next moment by her king sized sneeze. "Arree sassuri cannot do one thing properly." Madhumati complained.

"It's all right give it to me." said Shyam.

"Haan babua, you do it."

"A--TISSHOO"  

 

                                                      ****

 

"A-TISHOO... excuse me" Arnav sneezed into the napkin. "God bless you." said Anjali softly taking a fresh dry towel from the valet, who stood with three more in his hands. She patted her younger brother's almost-dry-by-now hair further dry with the towel, while her brother sat in his recliner, sulking.

 

"May I know what inspired you to go for a rain dance tonight?" she asked in her affectionate, mock angry tone. Arnav did not reply,  the bickering of two women outside the door was clearly audible inside the room, it became clearer as Devyani Raizada entered his room, "I will make hot honey milk for my grandson, to keep cold away from him." she said clearing her throat.

"At least you should know that Arnav doesn't like either of milk and honey." Manorma Raizada remarked sharply from behind her, "I'll make ginger tea for my nephew, that helps more in cold." Arnav pinched between his eyebrows, sighing.

"You Manorma?" Devyani shook her head, "have you stepped in the kitchen ever since you brought your useless self to this family? Your mother sent her spoilt girl to my house." Manorma glared at her mother in law, "Hello hi bye bye! Telling lies Johnny! I mean M-I-L, when I came to this house, you had only one servant. My mother cried when she saw me cook!" she groaned.

 

"No, we cried when we ate the food you cooked." Devyani moaned, "That's why I tell you to stay out of this, I can take care of my kids, you take care of your son."

"My son was not the one to get drenched in rain." Manorma retorted, "It's my nephew who needs my care right now." Arnav rolled his eyes. 

"He's healthier and happier without your care Manorma! Anjali tell your mami to leave this room."

"Right" Manorma scowled, folding her arms, "so that you handle him just as well as you handled an upset Anjali today?"

Arnav jerked up from the recliner, concern evident on his face, "What happened to you Di? Why were you upset?"

"Why wouldn't she be upset when neither her brothers nor her husband attended the Ratna - Genius Girl Scholarship she organized today?" Devyani said chidingly. Anjali's face fell.

"Di was Jijaji supposed to come today?" asked Arnav.

"Yes he was." Manorma chimed in, "but as usual, an absent was marked for dearesht son-in-law."

"He says his stay in Mumbai has been extended by another week." said a disappointed Anjali.

"Oh c'mon Di, stop behaving like that, he must be busy and it's not like his unavailability makes a big difference. He already calls you like what, four times a day?" Arnav teased. Anjali glowered dropping the towel in her hand on the recliner.

"You men are just..." she marched out of the room.

"Arnav, I'll ask you the last time, my honey milk or your mami's whatever she plans to make for you." Devyani inquired.

"Nothing, please..." Arnav protested, "Stop fussing over me, it's not like I'm catching pneumonia."

 

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Khushi snorted loudly gobbling a huge slice of cake. "Mmm...jiji there is something for you." she said smacking her lips, picking her tote, she took out the dopatta Akash had given her, "Surprise, surprise...your gift."

Payal jumped in delight grabbing the delicate fabric, "Wow, how did you know that I loved this dopatta?" she said, her eyes lighting up, "You know this one is exactly the same as the one I had seen on display that day..." Khushi hadn't seen her sister so happy in days. "You know Khushi, I didn't buy it for it was quite expensive, but you got it for me! Thank you so much little sis."

"Jiji...actually I didn't find time to get anything for you, this dopatta...well my sir gave me this for you." Khushi told her honestly. Payal gaped at her and then stared disbelievingly at the dopatta folding it, "You mean Arnav Singh Raizada gave this to you?" she gasped.

Khushi slapped her forehead," Offo jiji, don't take the name of that Laad Governor. He cannot do such a thing in hundred lives, Akash sir gave me this, you know the guy who dropped me home. He's a real gem."

 

Shyam Manoher Jha's hands fiddled feverishly with the pen he was holding, hearing the name.

 

Payal floundered a little and then with a mischievous grin distanced the dopatta from herself, "Tell me, is this Akash guy as good looking as your boss?"

 

Khushi puckered her nose, cringing at the question although it was intended with humor, "Jiji, he's much better than that Laad Governor in every possible way. Only that I always have this feeling to take off his specs and run away."

 

"Only you can have that feeling Khushi." said Payal blushing all of a sudden. A vague image of a boyishly charming guy hadn't turned into oblivion yet. Of late even Madhumati's thick glasses somehow reminded her of a fleeting encounter with that guy, two days back. Payal was a very reserved person, she barely spoke and especially with strangers but that particular guy had been different, she had ended up behaving like Khushi in his presence, speaking whatever came to her head. She blushed again recalling his words, Please say something...anything, he was so adorable that even she couldn't be herself and ignore. She walked to her room, avoiding her sister's gaze, if Khushi caught her cheeks colored, she sure wouldn't let her sleep the entire night.  

       

Shyam fidgeted with the doubt nibbling at his mind, "Khushi?" he said in a low tone.

"Yes?"

"That man...I mean the man who dropped you home, do you work under him?" he asked trying to sound normal.

"No Shyamji." Khushi sighed licking her chocolate smudged finger, "I wish I did. Unlucky me, I am stuck with that ASR."

"Oh, I see." he said, an abstruse look befallen over his face. Khushi stifled a yawn, "I am so sleepy that I can sleep till my death" she said stretching her arms over her head. Shyam smiled even at her yawning face.

 

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The antique grandfather's clock, formerly owned by Robert Clive struck 12:30 at night in the Raizada Mansion, but sleep had yet again decided to elude the proud owner. Arnav Singh Raizada ambulated in his room, holding a cup of whichever of honey milk or ginger tea it was, regardless of nature, the contents of the cup were now stone cold. It was a well known and established fact that of all the things that came easy to Raizada, anger was the easiest. He grabbed his phone, speed dialing, knowing that the receiver would only be happy to receive his call at this unholy hour.

"Hello ASR?" said the husky voice of a woman.

"Lavanya send me Khushi Kumari Gupta's number and address. Now." he ordered.

"What? ASR, are you going to call her at this hour of night?" she asked, skeptic of what she had just heard.

"Do what you have been told to." he said sharply.

"Don't you think you are giving too much importance to that frivolous employee?"

"Enough Lavanya. Number."

 

He put the cup down on the table, "Jai Prakash!" he screamed. The sleepy valet appeared on the door, rubbing his eyes. "Take this away." he said pointing at the untouched beverage, "and get me some black coffee." The servant nodded and disappeared with the job. ASR's phone beeped with the message, his lips pursed in sadistic pleasure, "Do you plan to sleep Ms Gupta?" he muttered under his breath.

 

"Chalo Maiyya ke bhawan bhawan bhawan" blared into his ears making him jerk away the earpiece as soon as he had dialed the number.

 

The same song played the role of the girl's ring tone. Madhumati glowered at the phone and then at the wall clock with a broken glass. "Nandkissore who calls you this late at night?"

"Must be amma babuji" giggled Khushi.

 "Hello, I was waiting for your phone, you aren't asleep yet? I was just going to sleep, I would have missed your phone. You won't believe I just managed to come on time, my boss is such a rotten piece of..." she rambled without a pause, without thinking or even caring to check the number.

 

"What?" breathed a flabbergasted ASR.

 

"Arre who is it Nandkissore? Your Amma Babuji have already called four times today, whom are you blabbering with?"

 

Khushi pulled the phone away from her ears, realization dawning at the leisurely pace it assumed often with poor Ms Gupta. "Don't know Buaji, doesn't seem like Babuji." she said putting it against her ears again.

 

"Is your mouth done spewing gibberish?" he barked.

 

                 Her eyeballs bulged, "I...its y...you."

 

"Make use of your ears now and listen. You'd be receiving a bunch of reports shortly that need to be typed by you. I want the work completed by the morning, I don't care how you do it, and whether you sit typing the entire night is up to you. I want my work done. Do you understand?"

 

"But sir how will I..."

 

"I'd be sending my driver with all the requisites. I need the reports at 7:00 am sharp."

 

"Ok, I'll do it, tell your driver to come and take the reports in the morning..."

 

"My driver is not your servant." he snapped, "You will personally deliver the reports at my residence. You get it?" The line went dead before she could say anything else.

 

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The parcel delivered at 00:50 am, at 'Chandan Kothi', Sector E, Lakshmi Nagar consisted of two bulky folders- one stuffed with printed pages and other with pages to be printed and a rather tall briefcase. The briefcase felt too heavy to carry a laptop, too small to carry a desktop computer; in either case the probability of a printer inside was nil.

 

Khushi opened the latches somewhat thrilled; aghast when the creaky device was revealed to her. Her first question was, were such things still in existence? They sure were but where did ASR get this one from. Her generation had seen vintage mechanical typewriters only in museums, she wasn't sure about ASR's generation though.

"What's this?" gasped Payal.

"Adam's personal computer which Eve brought as dowry." Khushi replied turning to her sister, "My boss is all set to impress me with his sense of humor." she said with no humor in her voice.

 

Next twenty minutes were spent in figuring out how the typewriter would work by the sisters. Shyam had gone upstairs to his room before the parcel had arrived and Madhumati after grumbling what kind of work was her niece doing and downing one jug of water had retired to bed.

 

The sisters soon discovered that F, J, R, C, I, P, S, G, A keys had to be pressed five to six times to produce the desired effect.

 

It was an hour before Payal dozed off, with reasonable might she forced her eyelids to open and head back on the page she was dictating to her sister, a few words getting drowned in her yawn. Khushi looked apologetically at her sister, "You leave it Jiji, go and sleep, I'll do it."

 

"No Khushi its okay, umm, where were we?" she said looking confused at the open page and then at Khushi, "Is it so important to complete this in one night?"

 

Khushi nodded, "If I don't, then tomorrow, that Laad Governor will do a break dance over my tiny head!"

 

"Hmm. Sixty percent of the investment in human resource..."Payal began.

 

"Jiji, that was the previous para," Khushi said placing her hand over the file, "Jiji, It's okay, you can go and sleep, if you end up making sleepy mistakes, I'll be done. I can do it, it's my headache after all."

 

"Are you sure?"

 

"Yeah, good night."

 

"I am sorry I am unable to help you," said Payal getting up from the chair, she placed her hand over her sister's shoulder, "please wake me up if you need any kind of help, okay?"

 

"Sure."

 

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The lawyer closed the case sheet, his client's case was weak. He had to brace himself for another loss but that wouldn't mean any loss in his clientele for he was the only hope of the class of people he dealt with. He glanced across the table to find the jug of water empty, he got up and headed downstairs to get a refill.


His heart fluttered the moment he saw her, her tired eyes switching between an open file and apparently a fifty year old typewriter. "You are still up?" he found himself asking her.


 She looked at him with a start, "Oh Shyamji, yeah I am. Got work to do."

 

Shyam pulled the chair next to her, "What sort of work is this?" he said looking with disgust at the pile of pages and the creaky machinery. Khushi forced a weak smile to her lips, "It's like that only. ASR makes me do strange things and I don't have much of a choice." she said ruefully, "you see I have signed a contract with him."


"What? What contract? Khushi is he troubling you?" he asked concerned.


"Not much that I can't handle. It's okay, really."


Shyam appeared disconcerted, "I am sorry I got you into all this." he said finally, "I am ashamed, Khushi I didn't know you were going to..."


"Shyamji? Why are you saying sorry, you only tried to help me."


"If you want I can find another job for you..."


"Oh no, if I have started something I will complete it. And good or bad, work is work." she said cheering up.


"But Arnav Singh Raizada...?"


"You know him?" she asked surprised.


"Unfortunately yes."


"Of course, so stupid of me to ask. He is the kind of rich and famous people whom everybody seems to know." she muttered, "I wonder sometimes what he has done to deserve all that money."


"Or wealth accumulated at the cost of somebody else's blood and sweat." said Shyam bitterly. Khushi looked at him as if waiting for an explanation to what he had just said, "That's what all capitalists do Khushi, haven't you heard, behind every big fortune there is a crime."

 

"Is capitalism a crime?"

 

"Not to those who reap benefits from it, in fact in today's scenario most support it for it empowers those who are already in power and weakens those who could be a possible threat to this power. Look how labor unions are not let to survive, how the labor class are used and misused against each other. They form a vicious circle, the plutocracy, the rich and influential business lobbies, together they make it impossible for workers to have a say or right over what they produce." he said tearing his gaze away from her at the wall in front of him, his eyes becoming lifeless for a moment remembering the charred body of his brother...his mind drifting back to the memories of a night, where for once he had felt the lust for money and then they had been shown the reality. His brother was used and thrown away, burned away, a life discarded like bone from meat...and the one responsible for it remained unscathed. Dheerendra Mallik remained unscathed...

 

"Are you all right?" said Khushi placing her hand on his shoulder.

 

"Huh? Of course, absolutely." he said recovering fast, "I think I should help you with this, what about me dictating."

 

"I don't think it's a good thing to bother you, you must be tired too and this is basically..."

 

"Basically I am used to stay up till late at night, my senses are more alert during night." he said chuckling.

 

Khushi laughed, "Wow I got company, I can stay up as long as I wish at night, but getting up in morning is such a pain, by the way Shyamji, suppose you had Raizada's money, what would you do with it?"

 

"My dream come true," Shyam grinned, "I guess I'll donate most of it, but keep a handsome amount for myself. You see I can't survive all my life on UP government's scholarship and the people who approach me with their cases are usually the ones who can't afford a better lawyer. I don't even ask them for remuneration!"

 

Khushi looked at him with new found respect, "I know what you are, you are a commu...como" she scratched her head for the word.

 

"Communist? Not really, I am a socialist; somebody who just wants equality and opportunity for all."

 

"What's the difference anyway...listen I have an idea, let's make a team and rob Arnav Singh Raizada of all his money. I think he has enough to sustain this city. We all can then have equality and opportunity, for example I'll open a huge jalebi production plant and all those who work with me will get equal shares of jalebi and profit if any. How does that sound?" she said widely grinning and bouncing her eyebrows at him. To her surprise he actually heard her with utmost seriousness. Khushi laughed hard looking at his face, "Oh c'mon I was just joking" she laughed harder clutching the handle of her chair. Shyam ran a finger through his hair, he slowly began to smile, resting his elbow on the table, his fingers still in his hair, he gaped at her. The lawyer had experienced infatuation before, attraction before but that wasn't comparable to what he felt right now. Her sonorous laughter had begun to ring in his life, he was gradually feeling her closer to himself, he needed this 'Khushi' for life...

 

Khushi clapped her hands in front of his eyes, "Where are you lost again, Mr. advocate of the poor?"

 

"Uh, no...nowhere." he said abashed.

 

"You wanted to help me right?" said Khushi mischievously, "Get me a cup of tea then."

 

"Tea at this time?"

 

"Yes."

 

"Sure." he said getting up from the chair, Khushi grabbed his hand, pulling him back to his chair, "Wait, you don't have to, why do you take me so seriously?" she exclaimed laughing again. "Although I love one sugary chai at night but I am not gonna ask you for it."

 

"Why not? Because I am an incompetent lawyer doesn't mean I am an incompetent cook." he assured.

 

The tea was brilliant and to her taste. The three cups that she had of it along with their nonstop chatter made the night almost bearable. It was mostly her talking and him listening and dictating from the notes. By 5:30 in the morning her finger tips were swollen but the job had been completed, she even took a half an hour nap. She couldn't afford more, she had to deliver the report at 7:00 and Vasant Vihar was the opposite corner of the city. Shyam had too gone to bed, his hearing was at twelve noon and the court was barely a two minute walk.

 

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Edited by cineraria - 9 years ago