Hey Jhil, since I didn't read last few chapters, I had to start over. Which gave me the chance to read on AarYa's relationship from the beginning. But I'll comment from chapter 8 as that's where I had stopped reading and commenting.
You've done a tremendous job showing the conflict going on in their mind. They both are in love but are scared of others feelings, reactions and rejections. In all this confusions their friendship became strong. Loved the way Yash helped Aarti to overcome her fear of driving. It was romantic yet encouraging.
What I loved the most is Aarti taking the first step in expressing her feelings. What followed next was something so beautiful and divine.
Aww the Essel World scene was again such a cute chapter. Aarti overcame another fear, fear of rides with the help of Yash. But what touched me was that Palak finally accepted and called her "Ma". I could feel AarYa's emotions in that part.
Aarti is pregnant now. Earlier she was not ready but now she's very happy. So the kids had gone on some trip. Now my worst fear is going to come true as Yash was again and again instructing her to be careful.
Oh no... It was the date of Prashant's accident. Aarti finally remembered it, but it is too late now. It was so heartbreaking and so emotional to read about the accident and AarYa's reaction. Their inner turmoil and emotional outbursts was so beautifully penned down by you that it sent a shiver in my body. I had goosebumps reading those scenes.
Palak is an Angel. A Angel who brought back her Mumma from her grief and fear of driving. She taught her to live in the moment and always be happy. She kept her promise to Ansh. I felt like hugging her in the last three chapters.
You've left me speechless Jhil with this story. It really touched my heart and soul. Though it was emotional yet it was heart touching. Thank you for this story. ⭐️ ❤️
Edited by lovely_nikki - 9 years ago
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