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SCENE 1

Geet: tm??? U idiot tm sb larkay aik jaisay hi hotay ho,! mera peecha krtay krtay meray ghr tk punch gaye???

Mk: main kisi ka peecha nahi kr raha!! mjhe yeh btao tm yahan kia kr rahi ho??  Aaj tk jitni larkiyan meri fan bni hain un main say kisi nain jurrat nahi ki meray ghr tk puhcnay ki! wahan to bri bri baatain kr rahi thi dnt touch mee and pta nahi kia kia! or meray ghr tk puhnch gi??

Geet: shut up MK??? Yahan main tmhari koi baat nahi sunun gi get out from here!

MK: jana tmhain prahay ga tm ai ho meray ghr main!

Geet: one min what u said meray ghr main?? Oh hello yeh mera ghr hai jana tmhain prhay ga yahan say!

MK: tm jaati ho ye gaurds ko bulaon (holding with shouldersss)

Eye locks *Maaahii*

Geet: leave me!!  yahan say main nai tm jao gaye coz tm aye ho na!!

MK: poora din tm nain mera dimgh kharab kia ab mat kro or chali jao yahaan say

Dadi listens and come fast

Dadi: yeh kia ho raha hai???

Mk: yeh larki fazul main hamaaray ghr main a gai hai or keh rahi hai yeh ghr is ka hai...

Dadi: maan betay (echoes)

Geet thinks maan???

Dadi: maan betay yeh geet hai tmhari mom ki best frnd ki beti...

Geet: maan!! I m so sorry! (Shocks)

Maan: you r jxt disgusting (and leaves the loundge)

Geet: pr maan! Meri baat to. . . . dadi maa yeh maan hai???

Dadi: jee betay..

Geet: yeh woi hai jis nain mjhe lift di and OH GOD!!!  MK means Maan Khurana

Ufff,,,, whatz this...

Dadi: chalain chorain khana lgwaya hai kha lain raam laal!! Maan ko bulain!!

Geet: ok main fresh ho kr aati hun !

Dadi: ok beitay!

 

SCENE 2

Geet in her bed room

Geet: oh God whatz this dusht danav hahahaahhahahahaa

(bell rings)

Geet: hello

Muma: hello

Geet: muma hyee kaisi ho??? Whatz upp!

Muma: beta m f9 u tell how r u how was ur first day

Geet: muma m f9 and first day was superb and awsumm?? I luv delhi muma it is so good

Muma: u met with maan and dadi

Geet: ovcourse muma kia ho gaya hai!!

Muma: ok now what u doing???

Geet: m going to have a dinner

Muma: ok then go I'll talk to u later

Geet: ok muma byeee

Take care

Luv u muma byeee

Muma: luv u too byeee

 

SCENE 3

Dinning table scene

Geet comes ad sits

Maan is already here

Geet: hi...I m sorry maan main subah kuch zaada bol gai..

Maan: dadi maa aap ka blood pressure theek tha??

Dadi: haan betay!

Geet:  I m sorry! m talking to you maan!!!!

Maan: dadi maa wo salt pakrana!

Geet: u knw what dadi I m not taking dinner

Dadi: nahi geet betay aap kahan ja rahi hain!!

Geet: I dnt want to sit here main dinner apnay room main hi kr lun gi..

Dadi: ok geet hm abhi behjwatay hain!!

 

SCENE 4

Dadi and maan scene

Dadi: betay aap geet say aisay kyun behave kr rahay hain she is ur frnd beta!

Maan: u knw dadi mjhe zada bolnay wali larkiyaan pasand nahi hain I hate geet!

Dadi: pr beta atleast aik baar to us say baat kr lain wo apni marzi say yahan to nahi ai naa wo apnay parents ki marzi say ai hai soo aap ko kyun ghusa a raha hai????

Maan: dadi only one time!!  Ok??

Dadi: ok abhi jao

 

SCENE 5

Geet is dancing in her room on the song on the floor

Suddenly door opens geet ko pta nahi chalta...

Maan enters and sees geet she is dancing

Maan see her with calm face *maaahii*

Geet is still dancing suddenly she sees maan and stops music

Geet: oh sorry actually purani habit hai sooo! .sorry if u disturbed

Maan: nahi wo main btanay aya tha k main tm say naraz nahi hun  ab sorry mt kehna

And carry on

Geet: ok (maan leaves) not so bad

 

SCENE 6

Geet is coming down from stairs maan is sitting in launch

Dadi: geet thanks God aap a gai aaj say aap maan k saath jaen gi

Maan: nahi dadi maa main college main nahi btana chata k yeh!. meri mom ki frnd ki beiti hai

Geet: its ok dadi maa main khud drive kr k chali jaon giii!!

Maan: dadi m going byeee

Geet: m also byee dadi maa

 

SCENE 7

Geet and maan in college

Geet: hello

Kuku: hiii

Geet: :) (smiles)

Kuku: cn v frnds

Geet: yeahh sureee

Kuku: mai name is karan and everybody calls me kuku

Geet: okk mai name is geet geet handa

Kuku: okkk

Maan sees both and sort of becme jealous

Kuku: lets go to the class

Geet: yeah sure! :)

 

SCENE 8

Pinky in class geet enters in the class with kuku

Geet: hi pinky

Pinky: hi... geet tujhe pta hai annual dance a raha hai..

Geet: wow kb????

Pinky: 17th june ko

Geet: yuppieee I luv dance I'll goo

Pinky: hahhaahahah

Geet: y u laughing???

Pinky: coz aik boy k saath couple bnta hai I'll go with aadi pr tm kis k saath jao gi????

Geet: aaammm wo main!!

Kuku: meray saath

Geet: yeah sure

Maan listensss

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Precap

Maan: tm jaanti b ho kuku kon hai???

Geet: nahi janna mjhe he is mai bxt frnd and I m going with him @annual dance

Maan: wo bht bra dhokay baaz hr saal annual dance pr kisi ko saath le kr jaata hai or us ki zindagi tbakr deta hai

Geet: ohhh to tm jealous ho gaye naa?????

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Maahi! 😳

 

Edited by -KitKit- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
super update dear
maan jealous😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
lol...maan's anger...n geet's masti...awesome!!
maan is getting jealous...hayee !!!
annual dance...hmm...waiting for it...action sequence hai kya??
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
awesome update
maaneet know about each other now!!!!
is maan being jealous😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! So they meet officially! She is his mom's best friend's daughter! Maan angry! She apologises after dadi tells her he is Maan bt he is so stubborn! Gee  talks to her mom! She goes 4 dinner! Maan rude! Geet upset! Dadi makes him understand! Maan talks to her finally! Both go to college separately! Geet meets Kuku! Maan j seing them n wen she agrees to go to the annual dance with Kuku! Maan enraged! lovely precap! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Maan start to feel jealouse from kuku wow lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
geet maan k baat maan lo...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Nice part
Maan doesn't like geet but on dadi's insisted he spoke to her
Both went in separate cars
Geet became friends with karan...he asks her for annual dance...she agrees
Maan jealous & warns geet about karan
Aage kya hoga... Waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
nice update
maan first show attitude to geet n then get j when she talks to karan