Maneet FF.. DushtDanav ki Mishti~chap#9(page-50) - Page 12

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SCENE 1

Geet is going to second floor with lift

Geet is in lift, Maan enters he stops lift.

Geet: yeh kia kr rahay ho tm???

Maan: mjhe tm say baat krni hai!!

Geet: yeh koi tariqaa hai???

Maan: listen to me,,,

geet: listenning!!

Maan: (takes geet and attach her with wall of lift) you know kuku???

Geet: yeah he is my frnd and m going @ annual dance with him

Maan: tm kuku k character baaray main jaanti ho??? (With anger)

Geet: no!!! or mjhe janna b nahi hai!!

Maan: geet wo aik number ka jhoota hai or hr saal wo kisi ko b annual dance pr le kr jaata hai or us ki lyf barbaad kr deta hai!!

Geet: ohhh soo!! u r getting jaelouss!! (with sarcastic tonee)

Maan: I m nnot getting jealous tm kisi k saath b jao mjhe koi problem nahi hai pr tm!! Kuku k saath nahi jao gi

Geet: tmhain koi prob nahi hai naa to main kuku k saath hi jaon gi!!

Maan: u r not trying to understand!! yeh indiaa hai geet!!

Geet: mjhe kia krna hai mjhe pta hai!!

(get relief from maan and switches on the lift)

Maan: theek hai jo man main aye kro pr akhir mein main tmhain bachanay nahi aon ga...

Geet: its ok koi baat nahi main apnay liyae kaafi hun. ,

Maan: (attitude smile ) okkk

Lift opens they leave the lift with aggressive Emotions!!

SCENE 2

Geet is going towards class (geet is some what tense after listening maan)

Geet is thinking: kia maan theek keh raha tha kia kuku sach main aisa hai pr wo shakal se innocent lgta hai bilkul meray ideal jaisa prrr maaan? ? ? No maan is wrong and kuku bilkul theek hai

Pinky: hello

Geet: hi

Pinky: class main ja rahi ho naa??

Geet: yeahhh

Pinky: m so excited about annual dance I m going with aadi how sweet

Geet: yeahhh one min!! u know about kuku????

Pinky: no yrr main isi class main yahan ai hun pehlay main Mumbai main hoti thi whan say meray dad ki transfer hua hai sooo!

Geet: ooo it's ok

Pinky: y u asking???

Geet: nahi kuch nahi waisay hi pooch rahi thi!

SCENE 3

In class

Pinky goes and sits with aadi geet sits in back of maan and kuku sits with geet

Geet is continuously watching maan

Kuku: hey ki hua tmhain???

Geet: nahi kuch nahi bus waisay hi!!

Kuku: so what u wearing on annual dance???

Geet: main nain decide nahi kia aaj hi pta chala hai!

Kuku: y dnt u wear white saari?

Geet: no.1 I dnt knw how to wear saari no.2 I feel uncmforable in it...

Kuku: oh come on meray liyae pehn lo...

Geet: (she is sme what astonished) okkk! i can try!

Kuku: yeh hui naa baat!

maan listens their convo. n feels uncomfortable

SCENE 4

Geet and pinky are passing through corridor

Tia: hey any bdy can help me mjh se yeh postors nahi lg rahay plzzz

Geet: hey tia I can help you! w8 pinky mera bag meri file pkr!!! hmmm

Tia: thanks dearrr

(tia comes down and Geet steps up and stands on the stool!)

Geet: tia tape pkrana tia pakra naaa! (she sees no bdy is here it was jxt fool)

Maan is passing through corridor

When geet turns to watch tia

she slips

Maan: ohhh geeettt!!!

He steps forwerd and holds geet

And first eye lock

*Maaahii maaahiii ho ho ho hooo ooo maahi vey maahi maahi veyyy*

Geet: ooopsss m sorry tia kahan hai

Maan: ummmbb woo o mjhe kia pta tm akaili hi thi yaahan pr ab jao unhain dhoondho

Taniya tasha and sasha becmss jaelousss

Geet: ok and thanks,

he smiles and they go in opposite drection.

SCENE 5

Pinky and geet is in caf

Pinky: geet aaj sham hum shopping pr ja rahay hain for annual dance tm chalo gi hamaray saath???

Geet: tm or kon jar raha hai??

Pinky: main, tia, prabha, Sonia or aadi

Geet: theek hai sham ko 5 o clock theek hai????

Pinky: shaed MK bhi wahan aye (with teasing tone)

Geet: sooo???

Pinky: hahahhaha m jxt kidding! chalo main kuch laati hun..

Geet: okk

Geet start thinking about maan that what he said in lift

Geet: (thinks) stop it geet kia ho gaya hai tujhe fazul bol raha tha maan kuku aisa nahi hai maan is jxt getting jealous k mjhe itni jaldi mera partener mil gaya hai shut up geet!!!!

SCENE 6

Geet and frnds in shopping mall

Geet: u knw what mjhe samajh nahi aa raha main kia pehnun

Prabha: to tension kyun leti hai yeh try kr naaa

Geet: nahi I dnt like this

Sonia: (white saari) yeh check kr!

Geet: (thinks kuku) mjhe pehnni nahi aati

Pinky: chal try room main main tmhay sikhati hun.

she thinks that it is the best way to get maan jealous!

Geet: ok chalo.

SCENE 7

Geet wears white saari and standing in try room

Geet: its luking soo nice!

Pinky: haan achi lg rahi hai plzz to yehi pehnin plzz geet!

Geet: okkk kal sham ko hai naa annual dance.. mza aye ga m also very excited I ve never attend the party of dellhi

Pinky: yeaahh mza aye gaaa...

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PRECAP

Geet is exiting from the shopping mall,she smashes with someone and all bags fall down, she becomes angry and starts picking up the bags, and that guy keep on standing with attitude,

Geet: sharam nahi aati u idiot meray saaray bags gira diyae ab yeh b nahi k utha de pr yahan logon main itni tameez kahan (while picking bags)

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super update dear
maan will def go fida seeing geet in saree
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nice update
daffer geet
maan's worning takes as his jealousy
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n splendid update! Maan jealous! Karan wants her to wear a whit saree n she agrees! Maan overheard.Maan helps Geet! Mahi moment! All girls j! Geet thinks abt wt Maan sed abt Karan! Pinkt teasing Geet! Geet goes shopping ! Maan will b mesmerised seeing her in the saree! interesting precap, update soon! Well written
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maahi awesome jaan love it...
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wonderfull n fabulous...
totally luv it...
amazing...
thx fr the pm...
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Wonderful update...
Maan ko jealous karne ke liye problem mein phasegi geet...
Continue soon

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